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flora212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

This is wonderful story but end

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wow!!!!

This one is very very deep and touching.

Thank you very much Juhi, for posting this OS in the forum.

First I read it so fast and did not realize and thanks very very very much to Kirti for letting know what it is about Else I would have missed something very beautiful

This is really really very beautiful.

Please do convey my thanks to Poorna, Juhi

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

The following 18 member(s) liked the above post:

Sanderalla, nshahtalati, himanshu1990, arwakantawala, mahi4ever, tigress.meenu, ..Bournville.., rosamale, harinisriram39, ashu1909, Abhiya4life, --AROMAL--, MS-meghasharma, Andromeda001, Sh_Abhiya, flora212, withered, Fearless_Lover,

To everyone who read this rather...bleh...oneshot, thank you so much for appreciating. This was actually written by me- bookworm-ALS-- or Shreya😛 and my darling friend Juhi was kind enough to go ahead with my idea of posting it incognito. We used the name of a friend from school who was an AP fan like us, but she didn't really write this story...I did. There, that's out.

The reason behind this...deception...is that I didn't really like this oneshot. It was too different ... I've never read a love story from another person's POV. So maybe I was nervous.

There. That's it. Thank you once again for your very kind replies. I love you all🤗

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
hey its beautifull os... but i am confuse with end.. its not straight...

Srishti realized that Piya had been blind just like her brother was.

Read it once again, maybe it'll make sense...or not.😛

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

This defo was different from your usual works and at first I wouldn't have recognised it was by you 😆 It was beautiful and I wonder what made you take on an anonymous identity 😕 I have questions though. What is Abhay's age in this? 😆 So Pia was blind too when she met him and before reuniting with him, she got her eyesight back? Interesting 😳 The emotions were depicted very well 👏 and I am gonna read it once more 😊 Sorry for not commenting before. I did see this and the only reason I parked it for later is because it was long and u know how messed up my work life is right now 😭 Yesterday when u revealed it was u, I knew I had to read it 😆 n I did n I am happy I did 😃

Edited by FieryHeart - 11 years ago

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Anon

@raintrifle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Will u believe i did had a hunch feeling it was written by u shreya di !!

but yeah this is the most diff. piece of writing u have ever written .😆

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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

What the hell😲😲🤣

Edited by flora212 - 11 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: withered
Will u believe i did had a hunch feeling it was written by u shreya di !!
but yeah this is the most diff. piece of writing u have ever written .😆

Is that a nice way of saying it was awful? Cause you didn't comment earlier. it's allright , you know. you are welcome to say that.😆

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kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

U will say I always do this. Bt I always felt this writing style matches urs. Bt I never wrote this line in my cmnt coz I thought may be I m nt attentive enough 2 see d difference. I had a nagging feeling u know bt I dodged it coz of Juhi's specification n esp i was surprised, when a reader n writer like u, responded differently 2 my post abt this OS in fb grp.

Anyways thnk U Shreya 4 this *hugs*

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rida mahveen

@mahi4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Hey shreya , amazing , I never thought dat it's u, I must say it was definately different 4m ur style but its another beautiful piece of work, 👏, fantabulous .

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