Part 8 on PG 15.. FF: The Perfect Match or.....?

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hiii everyone,

I started being active in india-forums abt a month back . I wasn't allowed to join while PKYEK aired but now I am ,so I used to come in the forum as a silent reader and now I want to share my FF with all of you guys. I had this idea of my FF abt TWO YEARS BACK.Now I am getting a chance to share it with you all as I am a member now 😊. I am giving you a Prologue plus a character sketch . I am attempting a ROMANTIC-COMEDY + THRILLER. I dont know what I am upto ??🤣 .A combination of three genres..Its a mixture of Hindi and English ..

PROLOGUE:

My battle with my inner voice was still going on . He was the first person who dared to speak to Piya Dobriyal like that . Then my inner voice tells me not to waste time in that guy as I have my other inner motives to implement. My actual goal is something else and my Diva personality hides my inner motive. I have just become this socially involved in the college so no one suspects me. But then my ego says that "Piya Dobriyal, you are a Diva . No one can speak to you like that,you ought to take revenge". Main Kya Karoon abhi ? My ego is not letting me come to peace. Ufff !! This is so frustrating.

CHARACTER SKETCH :

1) Piya Dobriyal : Her outside appearance of a Diva and a spoiled brat is no where close to her reality . In reality she is a witch who has come to take revenge from a vampire family and just to disguise herself , she appears as a spoiled 17 year old.

2) Abhay Raichand and the Raichands : He is very similar to Piya . He also appears to be a flirt and a spoilt 18 year old but it is just to disguise his reality which is of a Vampire. His family includes Hassena and Chand . He gets into a lot of battles with the Witch family as they use their witchcraft to harm the vampires. Overall, he appears to be a heart-throb who is not at all serious.They don't know the reality of the Dobriyals.

The Dobriyals : They are a family consisting of Madhu Dobriyal, Arnab Dobriyal ,Misha Dobriyal and Piya Dobriyal . They all are witches and wizards but have not been recognized as supernatural creatures by the vampires as they have a special protection which doesn't let any supernatural creature recognize them. They are extremely rich.

Other characters will be introduced in the FF.

Kaise tha ??? This FF will be a weird combination of three genres and I don't know how much you will like it..😕 But lets give it a try 😛

INDEX :

PART 1 - pg 2

PART 2 -pg 3

PART 3 - pg 5

PART 4 - pg 7

PART 5 - pg 9

PART 6 - pg 12

PART 7 - pg 14

PART 8 - pg 15

Edited by abhiyaswaron - 11 years ago

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Sh_Abhiya

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Posted: 11 years ago

intresting prologue , pls continue soon

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Raj

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Posted: 11 years ago

a very nice prologue plz continue soon

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Romita

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Posted: 11 years ago

Interesting concept dear. Prologue looks gr8
Would love to read this one. Continue soon and pm me :)
And ha congratzz on ur first FF here!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

plzz add me in ur pm list

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Kakoli

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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely idea...continue..plzz add me ur pm list😊

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abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Interesting concept dear. Prologue looks gr8
Would love to read this one. Continue soon and pm me :)
And ha congratzz on ur first FF here!!!

Thank u !!

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
interesting prologue... update soon...

Thank u :D

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 1 :

It was the reopening day for Mount college. The students had been on a break for a month and now they were back to their scheduled life. Piya Dobriyal had not entered yet and her entry was awaited. She was the college Diva and she had a huge admirers list. Half of the college was her chamchi .She ruled like a queen. "Piya aa gayi, Piya aa gayi !!!" Said a boy running around the college. A white limo entered the college leaving everyone speechless. A girl with beautiful curls stepped out of her limo and had a confident smile on her face. She was wearing a black dress covering her a little bit more than her knees. All eyes were on her and she walked confidently entering the school premises.

In the classroom:

"Piya ,itna apne aap ko importance mat de" said Misha."Kya Karoon ? What can I do if I am so Perfect?"Piya said with attitude. "Oh Meri Stylish Behna. Bas bhi toh kar!!"Misha said with a smile.

There were couple of new admissions in the class whom Piya wasn't even looking at. Just then somebody tapped Piya's shoulder. "Excuse me ?Could I join you. Main ek naya admission hoon.I was wondering if we could be friends"asked a boy. Piya turned around to see who disturbed her.For a moment she was lost in him. She had never seen such blue hypnotic eyes ever !! His eyes were truly hypnotic.Piya tried getting back to her senses "Friends and with you ?? Oh Please !!"said Piya. "Attitude Huh? Doesn't suit you"said the boy. "Who are you to tell me what suits me and what doesn't. I get my shoes polished from people like you"said Piya. "Excuse Me ? Im not a guy who polishes a naukrani's shoes. I rule over the naukrani's and servants.People like you are maids in my house who are always indulged in doing household works"said the boy. "Naukrani hogi teri.."said Piya controlling herself. "Naukrani hogi teri...? What do you mean?"said the boy. "Listen, don't provoke me ! Otherwise I will get you expelled from this college"said Piya. "Oh Dhamki de rahi ho?Tumhe bahut ghamand hai na apne khoobsurat hone par?"asked the boy."Someone's complimenting me"said Piya."Ya , someone is ! Kya karoon? I am struck by your beauty so much that main apna hosh aur awaaz kho chuka hoon"the boy said sarcastically.

Both of them frowned and turned their back towards each other. Little did they know that they were destined for each other

To be continued...