Abhiya FF: Mask On The Face Or Heart

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XScarletHeartX

@XScarletHeartX

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

nice prologue and cs love to read more about ur story

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Lovely CS & prolounge...But Ewww Abhay's wife Tcontinue soon🤗

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kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Wow promising start. Lovely prologue n CS. Plz update soon.

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rkmad

@rkmad

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

NICE STORY
but i am little bit confused
He was son of abhay and tanushri. Heart of rathod or Richands? family but he and his mother got killed how u will know.😭

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Tume t hi mili thi, as abhay's wife? 😡 Or ab pia ne kya kiya yr? Nice prolouge and cs! Thax fr pm.

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Great prologue romi! You wrote it beautifully!👏 Abhay's painful state n pia's sorrow was heart breaking. :/
loved the character sketch too.👍🏼 Hm..so tanushree was abhay's wife? Hm..nw this is something different. I suppose somehow pia was responcible for her death n thats why abhay loaths her so much..
Anyway will look forward for u guys to reveal the story!😳
update the 1st chap soon n thanks a lot for the pm.😊