New ff : True Love Never Dies update new ch- 4 pg 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsm update bf! U write so gud. And bf its JEH nt jay. Thax fr pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: arwakantawala

Awesome update so Pia is coming back too Dehraddun but I am thinking what is that thing that her family is hiding from her

thanku. and its k about double posting. for pia's family secret, u hv to wait. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: i_luv_abhiya

Awsm update bf! U write so gud. And bf its JEH nt jay. Thax fr pm.

thanku gf 😊. k sry for mistake . i will edit it. bdw thanks kyn? gf its ur story and tum hi pm ke liye thanks kahogi. 😭😭 apna thanks bapis lo 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nicee part👏
waiting for d nxt part😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good update but bohat thora hay write some more plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update Angel...awsomeee🤗
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Chapter 4 The atmosphere was calm and quite. She took her lugage start walking toward exit.wearing black glasses on her eyes, with curly hair, she felt no. of pairs of eyes on her. She ignore them and start walking again. A black marcidy car was waiting for her. A smile crept on her face and she moved toward car but with sudden, atmspere changed. Heavy wind begin and the leafs of trees start falling in frnt of her feet. Looks like the mother nature was celibrating her entry in dehradoon frm where she belong. Her heart start feling like her life is going to change. The feeling of fimilarty start runing in her mind as she knew this place already. But she ignore this and moved toward the car. "welcm back pia dobreal. M here in ur service" pia turn to the owner of the voice and there stood a boy with same age like her or may be little older then her. Pia saw his extend hand toward him and also a mescheveous smile on his face. She ignore his hand and signel him toward her lugage "driver, dnt act smart. Pick the lugage. M tired." the boy smiled again and kept all lugage in car. Set himself at driving seat "where u want to go mam?" asked frm her. Pia start laughing and said "the buysiness tycon mr. Dobreal's home" he start car and drove toward their destination./########## "what hpen abhay? Why r u looking restless" asked jay. Abhay closed his eyes tightly and then open with a jerk. A shock was waiting for jay and when he saw his eyes, he forgot everythng. Dark blue eyes. "she is back jay.she is back. After 2 almost 200 years she is back" said abhay and before misha and jay could ask him further, he run frm there and lost in the dark forest. Jay and misha about to run behind him but a voice stoped them "what is going on devils" seeing him both felt some relief and jay said" abhay is feeling restless sid." after that they told him about the body of girl and abhay's reaction. Hearing all this sid also run toward same directin where abhay gone. Misha and jay too follow him ############# Two person were arguing with each other for smthng. " r u out of mind hasina? How can u do this to him. We r hiding this frm him only for his safety. 200 years are passed and now u r sying to told him truth. Let him hate us but it is better then to loose him. Can u imagine the concequces of this" said man to a woman in angry tone. but she replied him with same rage" chand, truth wil cm out one day. He lost everythng. Atleast we should hv told him about mathili." chand intrupt him " it wil start a war between them. She is older then him and also his creator. U knw who wil win. We wil lost him. So its better if truth wil remain closed." saying this chand dispear frm there before hasina could say him smthng else. "time has nt cm son. But we wil told u everythng. All answer of ur every questin when time wil cm. Forgive us my son" saying this she too lost in darkness. ############0###0 Mount college All were busy in their life. Sm lovers were busy with their loved one, sm with their frnds, sm in gosspin. bookwarm reading their books but a car stop there and everyone left their work. They all stared toward the car. A sports car of red colour. Everyone say that it belongs to a very rich person. A boy and girl cm out frm the car and start walking with holding each others hand. "jaan, wait for 2 minute. M cming han" said girl to boy and got parted away frm him. the boy about to turn to other side but 'boom" and another boy clash with him and both fall on ground. " wat the hel is this angad. Cnt u see" interput by angad" kabir yaar, save me pls. If u wil nt save me then trackor wil kil me" and hide behind kabir. Before kabir could said anythng else" u cheater. How can u go in party with that ruchi. I wil kil u" said a girl cming toward them with her sandle in her hand. she start beating angad nd whole clg start laughing. Kabir shook her head in disbelief and left frm there
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please ad me in your pm list I love your story 😳
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