FF-Time and Again[Book 3]COMPLETE!Epilogue now up.PM list page 74* - Page 58

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update shreya 👏 abhiya convo was cute lik typical married couple 😃 Sid was awesome lik always n splly miss Gupta part 🤣 eagerly waiting 4 Sid Alina side of story to unfold . Did u really mean dat abhay pia aren't going to Greece ? Now pia vil b angry 😡 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous update shreya
pia got ice out of her eys instead of tears...that was totally out of box and unexpected.

then the next part has hotness oozing out of it. abhay and pia couldn't even wait to reach home😆got started in car😆

alina and sid are gradually developing a relationship...when sid told alina under the effect of alcohol that u hate me...he looked so lonely ...alina too is taking care of him and put the spell for his protection.

sid and alina despite being at loggerheads for most of the time always make out when the other person is in pain. sid gets annoyed like anything with dishu but i wonder why was alina not meeting him the 2 times he has visited.

abhay--pia car ride was fun . i loved how pia was abusing him in her mind and abhay actually laughed...pia couldn't believe her eyes and asked him to do it again...😆😆why wouldn't she...he smiles like once in a while i am sure abhay must have laughed after 200 years only.

i love the way abhay was looking after her as they went to their hotel room after the car ride.

pia was full on confidence mode when she was in front of queen in that hall despite abhay trying to have some fun. i loved her there.

now abhay said they aren't going to greece so did abhay made this plan to get her to kasmir??ofcourse pia would get angry and i would luv to see how abhay manaofys her.

in the starting when pia talks to abhay about privacy and he was like u talking of privacy is irony...i loved this dialogue very much.

can't wait to read further
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you so much for the update Shreya,

Piya's tears were shards of ice and I really did not expect that. I knew she would not be crying blood tears, but this one really came as surprise.

Oh my God and they almost made it in the car. Did the driver have any guesses on what was happening in the passenger seat 😆

Piya asked to report to the council. Now that was really very logical explanation of how new borns are kept in track.

But Chand held back from telling something to Abhay, after Abhay and Piya's marriage got finalised but before Piya turned into a vampire. What was that? Was it about informing the council of the marriage with a human. Would the council have permitted it. They have rules about Vampires not disclosing their identity to humans. Would they permit relations?

I really loved the way you explained from Abhay's point of view on how Piya was coping to be a new born vampire. Despite all that had happened with her straight from her childhood to becoming a vampire, she never had gone harsh against the world. And more than his hate for Maithili, he wishes that she were out of his and Piya's life. I was reading these lines again and again. You do express the feelings and thoughts really very well.

And then reporting their presence and the process of presenting themselves before the council the next day, its really too good. I mean after all its a world of supernaturals which is more dangerous and to maintain the secrecy of their existence is imperative. In such case it is really required that this world has set of procedures for better control of everything. You explained it really well.
Here I have a doubt, both Abhay and Sid presented themselves before the council where things did not go well for Sid because of his behaviour. But Sid turned Maithili immediately after he became a vampire. Did he report her presence before the council. If he did wouldnt Abhay or atleast Chandeena get to know of that?
Wouldnt he be in trouble all this while if he did not report about Maithili.

Anyway Piya is now cleared by the council - guess one problem solved. Is just the Greece trip cancelled or is the Honeymoon plan cancelled. I guess not. Its just a change of place - someplace colder and less sunnier

Coming to Alina and Sid, even that is very entertaining. Its so nice of Alina to feel concerned about Sid and cast a protective spell in case Maithili came and attacked him. But didnt Maithili stay in same house as that of Sid. Or is this a place in the city.

And poor Sid he started realizing his feelings for Alina. What made him think that she had come to him for healing . Wouldn't she go to Raichand's instead 😉 . Haseena is still in town. And Sid words for Ms.Gupta and her retorts are also so hilarious.

Coming to Alina, I am still not able to guess why Alina was in joy when she came to know of Piya being turned into a vampire. I mean she would not have wanted Piya to die but why did that news give her joy?

Next update kuch der se update karna puhleeez.


Edited by harinisriram39 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Amazing update shreya 👏 abhiya convo was cute lik typical married couple 😃 Sid was awesome lik always n splly miss Gupta part 🤣 eagerly waiting 4 Sid Alina side of story to unfold . Did u really mean dat abhay pia aren't going to Greece ? Now pia vil b angry 😡 😆


Thanks. Abhi SidLina has time😳 Yes she will be angry 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
@Shreya: Last time I cmnted was on ur hot waala chapter, Chp 45 i think. I will update my cmnts soon on other chapters.
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Posted: 11 years ago
@Kirti okay. I added you anyway to the list. chapter 50 shud be up soon so do read up :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

@Kirti okay. I added you anyway to the list. chapter 50 shud be up soon so do read up :)


No no Not so fast Shreya, Please please itni jaldi update mat do, Yeh FF khatam ho jaayega toh hamara kya hoga 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
plzzz pm me this time for ur 50th update... and post 48 49 chap i am dying to read them... plzzz send me the link...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow, wow I am super exited to read part 50, but please once u done with this story, u will give us next story and that too soon. We are really really addicted to your story. Loved it like drug.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: siggi

plzzz pm me this time for ur 50th update... and post 48 49 chap i am dying to read them... plzzz send me the link...


would you be willing to comment? i can do that then.

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4 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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