Thank you so much for the update Shreya,
Piya's tears were shards of ice and I really did not expect that. I knew she would not be crying blood tears, but this one really came as surprise.
Oh my God and they almost made it in the car. Did the driver have any guesses on what was happening in the passenger seat 😆
Piya asked to report to the council. Now that was really very logical explanation of how new borns are kept in track.
But Chand held back from telling something to Abhay, after Abhay and Piya's marriage got finalised but before Piya turned into a vampire. What was that? Was it about informing the council of the marriage with a human. Would the council have permitted it. They have rules about Vampires not disclosing their identity to humans. Would they permit relations?
I really loved the way you explained from Abhay's point of view on how Piya was coping to be a new born vampire. Despite all that had happened with her straight from her childhood to becoming a vampire, she never had gone harsh against the world. And more than his hate for Maithili, he wishes that she were out of his and Piya's life. I was reading these lines again and again. You do express the feelings and thoughts really very well.
And then reporting their presence and the process of presenting themselves before the council the next day, its really too good. I mean after all its a world of supernaturals which is more dangerous and to maintain the secrecy of their existence is imperative. In such case it is really required that this world has set of procedures for better control of everything. You explained it really well.
Here I have a doubt, both Abhay and Sid presented themselves before the council where things did not go well for Sid because of his behaviour. But Sid turned Maithili immediately after he became a vampire. Did he report her presence before the council. If he did wouldnt Abhay or atleast Chandeena get to know of that?
Wouldnt he be in trouble all this while if he did not report about Maithili.
Anyway Piya is now cleared by the council - guess one problem solved. Is just the Greece trip cancelled or is the Honeymoon plan cancelled. I guess not. Its just a change of place - someplace colder and less sunnier
Coming to Alina and Sid, even that is very entertaining. Its so nice of Alina to feel concerned about Sid and cast a protective spell in case Maithili came and attacked him. But didnt Maithili stay in same house as that of Sid. Or is this a place in the city.
And poor Sid he started realizing his feelings for Alina. What made him think that she had come to him for healing . Wouldn't she go to Raichand's instead 😉 . Haseena is still in town. And Sid words for Ms.Gupta and her retorts are also so hilarious.
Coming to Alina, I am still not able to guess why Alina was in joy when she came to know of Piya being turned into a vampire. I mean she would not have wanted Piya to die but why did that news give her joy?
Next update kuch der se update karna puhleeez.
Edited by harinisriram39 - 11 years ago
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