FF-Time and Again[Book 3]COMPLETE!Epilogue now up.PM list page 74* - Page 57

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehek.VDian

Chap 49- the hot moment between Abhay Pia totally insane... I mean in the car?? Serously ??? Bt never mind I loved it... The court scene was weird... One thing I really want to read about Sid-Pia Friendship just like the past days.. I want to read about them !! So, Abhiya r nt going to greece for Honeymoon ?? Poor Pia !! I know Abhay will take her some where else.. I'm egarly waiting for their Honeymoon.. At last but nt least You are an awesome writter..



hahaha...not many FFs have them in a car and not one I can remember anyway so yeah an experiment 😆 sid piya friendship, I guess that's on the future cards. :)
The court scene was weird because it's not a human one. it's a vampire one and I wanted it to be different thats all :p
As for honeymoon, lets see if they get to go. lol. and thanks for the compliments :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey, So I am really here with the comment
Firstly, I loved the update. Abhiya are so cute. Did they really did it in car? I guess I dont blame them. They were probably high on hormones. Never Miind! :P

I am happy for Sid. He is finally trying to do the right thing. I like him with Alina. It always gets out his cheeky and jovial side of him. Though he wasnt cheeky here as i put in. I still loved him.

So no greece? Does that mean they are going to have their honeymoon there itself? In Kashmir? :P Anyways, I am not concerned about "where" part. All i am concerned is about "when" part, though with the way they are going, I wont have to be concerned about that too 🤣

Awesome! ⭐️

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Posted: 11 years ago
comment there of chapter 48
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Posted: 11 years ago
First thank u for the pm and about the update, I am on vacation and I read this one in very hurry couse once I got the pm I can not wait to know what the update about. For the forther comment I will read the update with taking time and then I will do it, hope u don't mind. But it' s sound like rocking update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hiii i also read ur updates but u haven't pm me plzz z pm me so i can read the left chapters or u can send me a link... thanks...
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Posted: 11 years ago
i updated my commented in wattpad. I guess its easier fro me in i can access it from phone and IF i dont use from phone anyways i will unres my other posts tonight promise.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: siggi

hiii i also read ur updates but u haven't pm me plzz z pm me so i can read the left chapters or u can send me a link... thanks...


Well, I haven't seen you so far. So I am sure you can till I post it on IF. :)
Will pm you then.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --peehu--

Hey, So I am really here with the comment

Firstly, I loved the update. Abhiya are so cute. Did they really did it in car? I guess I dont blame them. They were probably high on hormones. Never Miind! :P

err they didn't do all of "it" in the car u know. sorta third base I guess😆



I am happy for Sid. He is finally trying to do the right thing. I like him with Alina. It always gets out his cheeky and jovial side of him. Though he wasnt cheeky here as i put in. I still loved him.

He has a serious side but he rarely shows it.


So no greece? Does that mean they are going to have their honeymoon there itself? In Kashmir? :P Anyways, I am not concerned about "where" part. All i am concerned is about "when" part, though with the way they are going, I wont have to be concerned about that too 🤣

Awesome! ⭐️


hahaha...no not Kashmir and I won't say if they will have or not. You'll just have to read sweetu😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
commented in wattpad of chapter 49
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.

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Chapter 47

Im really sorry for being so late but i was pretty occupied and I do remember in my head I need to unres this but in the end somehow I did something else so eventually I forgot it.
First I wasnt surprised Chand agreed to get them married because I thought Haseena will make him agree on this but this line is very significant:

But Piya is too much danger alive."


Now i understand why. until she is alive as human there will be always risk of someone hurting her just to get back to Abhay. specially Maithili.

Yeah and everyone was like this is some hugeee plannn😆


so finally Abhay and Piya are getting married. they are cute and totally adorable in the convo and in their engagement. why didn't you elaborate the engagement part? is it because you wanted to move on the imp part of maithili attacking piya and the real big event? im fine with it though. just asking.


the thing is I have never attended a real engagement in my life. I had to ask Dishu for a lot of the descriptions and I hate these traditions rituals etc but I had to. I tried to write as much as I could, I just wasn't comfortable.


Btw, i really like Sid's character here. i would have preferred so much if he was alive in the show. i love how you portrayed his and alinas equation there and his feelings for Alina. transparent yet so complicated.


thanks. I like their pairing too and it was not something that was there in the original draft of my story and I like this one more😆


Now coming to he major point. entire sequence of maithili attacking piya, fooling Abhay and also piya was very very well written. brilliant and loved how you made Sid double agent here.


Thank you! Gosh I was real nervous writing that scene. Like I've been waiting to write that scene from the beginning of this FF and the Sid's one especially. like from chapter 6 I've wanted to write this😆 did you notice the Judas kiss?😆😆

I still have to comment on next update 😆

thanks for the comments...i love them🤗


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Posted by: Susmitasumi96

5 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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