Originally posted by: Pkyek.rocks
Its a disheartening fan fiction I had ever read. I don't felt a connection to the characters u described on your ff since so long. I numerously read the updates but can't felt a simple connection. Dragging a story since so long its not a good idea and now its proving to u. People really gets bored as well as reading the same thing again and again looks like a old wine in an new bottle. In India forums people like to read short story but with innovative ideas but some writers love to make it like long, boring stuffed book with nothing good in it. Maybe u should change your writing skills and try to improve to be a little better. I noticed u put a cooma in every two three words in a long line and probably u pen down short lines but its confuses the mind of reader as well as confused the story so much
It was only my opinion, if it look criticism than its your problem. A writer always faces criticism and u know that.
I agree with angelwings and kirti di .
u the supposed PKYEK fan who probably was more of a phantom in the PKYEK forum for god knows since when , i will give u a free advice - be brave . If u found TnA so unappealing and not timeworthy why did u even stick to the story so far ( story se kuch zyada hi attachment ho gayi thi for u counldnt summon up enough bravery to leave reading it ) or better why didnt u voiced ur disapprovememnts to shreya di earlier . That pity paragraph of urs made it sound like TnA had been written in limericks and in long forgotten and neglected words of Elizabethan english and medieval period . Wait an idea popped up in my mind - u should really read the shakespeare stuff , make urself master in reading Elizabethan english . I am sure u wont have to discontinue this story in middle after that . and yeah No need to say thanks , i like showing right path to Dumbos .
It was only my opinion, if it look criticism than its your problem. A writer always faces criticism and u know that.
I am sure about one thing , shreya di wont place u as a good critic but as an intruder , a basher . She has enough sense to know whose POVs to take into considerations .
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