FF-Time and Again[Book 3]COMPLETE!Epilogue now up.PM list page 74*

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

that was smoking hot!!😉 I luv luke...hope abhay understands pia's delimma!!..!.!

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Wow that was fantastic update

I wonder what Natalia knows about Dishu that Luke might not understand

I am confused about Sid we will only find out when u reveal

I can't wait till next update till piya reveals to abhay she is piyali

I wonder how abhay's gonna react

Loved abhiya scenes n ☺️

I am loving Luke I hope we get to. See him more

Felt bad for Alina but was Sid jealous 😲

Thanks for the pm

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#253

good to know that Piya is ready to tell d truth now...i hope abhay will not make this a big issue..

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Very interesting update!👏
Pia left the job and sid's reaction was quite complicated!
The flashback part added further mystery. Well..I think the latter parts will clear all the confusion.
But good way of presenting the plot. 👏
Abhay took pia to the same spot. The description of the place was lovely!😳
he threw the pills n pia sleeping in his arms-was a very lovely scene. V.Well written.👍🏼

and here are the lines i loved most!
Her eyes were hard as they stared down at
him. "Yes, it affects me. Yes, I care.
And I feel like this... exactly like this."

"But sometimes, when he kissed her, she
could sense his desperation, as
though he would break through
every single one of her defenses and strip her soul bare...and those were
the days she loved him and hated
herself, the most."
excellent lines-these two are! 👏 👏 both are powerful in their impact! The first one is the best layered sentence! ⭐️And the second is beauutifuul!! ❤️ Both have depth!👏 bth lines i loved lot..lot...a lot!!!❤️

so pia is finally going to tell abhay! Lets see what it brings..
Bt why alina disclosed it to abhay that pia is going to tell him?!! She could have just stopped with the love part..bt she didnot. Makes me think...
Waiting for the party. Let us see what storm it brings...!
Overall great update.👍🏼 Continue when u can.. :) and thanks for pm. 😳

Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 11 years ago

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

beautifulll update shreya ...
awww i like luke yr ... well sid deserved what alina did to him and may be more pain
wooowww i must say hawwwttt and passionate scene of abhiya ;)
well hope abhay will understand piya ...

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: FieryHeart
First and foremost I am sorry for goading you last time It was just a joke. I know readers don't give a damn about rating but this update needed one and I really mean it. It was explicit. I guess I am being a prude here 😆 but at times I feel who am I to say anything? Everyone in the forum seem to be older than their age and anyways most of the teens seem to love 50 shades. So not surprising there. Well its upto u again if u wish to put the rating or not.

Don't worry. This is not a result of that goading😆I will put a proper one next time for sure though😛

Coming to the update, it was well written as usual 👏 Did Natalya ask Dishu to stay away from Luke? 🤔 I guess its Dishu's decision herself but I am hoping Dishu too finds her partner in someone, hopefully Luke seeing tat he can return his feelings. I hope Dishu's birthday gives them a chance to bond.

Did she ask Dishu to stay away from him? I don't think so😛 Yes it will😳

Pia resigned from Sid's office and I am wondering who will figure out the truth about Piyali first. Abhay or Sid?

Toss a coin and see?😆

Loved Sid Alina moment 👏 Haven't heard the song before but liked the lyrics and it suited Sid perfectly. He is really feeling so vulnerable and I can sense he is fighting a battle all by himself and I am sure now he isn't siding with Metz. Sidlina clear long to be each other though Sid may not yet have acknowledged his feelings but its there. It matters to her if he gets back to being his old self, being Metz puppet. It matters to Sid if another man makes a move on Alina. I love the way u have portrayed them here 👏

Thank you so much. I kinda love them a lot so maybe I portrayed them ok😆

Fabulous update and your style of writing is really good ⭐️ U have the potential to become a professional writer in few years time.

...I am not even going to answer this😆

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: CavingIn
This was incredible. I am glad Piya has finally found the guts but more than AbhIya now Sid - Alina is driving me nuts because one I love these two and two I just can't get my head around the mystery surrounding Alina /Reina or whoever she really is. You are doing an incredibly good job Shreya.
Marvellous!
Love
Nidha

LOL Sid and Alina, I love them too😆

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captainplus

@captainplus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#258

awesome update ⭐️⭐️⭐️

abhiya scene ws ☺️

xited 4r the party 😛

sorrt 4r commenting late 😒

tnx 4r the pm 😊

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hema

@hema_rawat

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#259

update was aesm shreya ...why Natalya wants dishu to stay away from Luke ...

alina -sid part was very good its good she shows him how he is hurting her ...

abhiya scene was too hot ...finally she is going to tell him the truth ...hope she will explain herself witout any intrruption ...

PS : xam th theek hua ... now I m waiting for result ...

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: aadi720
well definitely hot update...
while reading abhiya's forest part I was continuously fanning myself...

I am confused about sid, on whose side he is really?????

this guy continuously keep changing shades...

in today's part I came acros a vulnerable sid!!!!!!

I think piya should tell abhay the truth, because he is worried too much for her and her secrets is also keeping her restless and making her feel guilty...

on the flip side her fears regarding loosing abhay is also justified!!!!!

I hope abhay understands her and supports her after knowing the truth...

eagerly waiting to know what is going to happen in the party?????

what is luke is going to do in the party for disha????

continue soon!!!!!!

thanks for the pm...

p.s.- hot+amazing update... totally worth the wait...