os- He Was Only A Dream PART 2 - Page 5

Originally posted by: withered

bhai dhanayavaad kis liye keh rahe ho , abhi tak toh meine na aapki taarif ki na hi OS padha hai 😆😛

i have unres my comment on page -6 bhai , check it 😊

Originally posted by: withered

bhai , kya kahoon , i cant accept abhay as a mere hallucination of pia , i want him in flesh and blood in ur story .

i cant imagine pia in so much heartbroken state , the pain is unbearable for me , do write a second part bhai , make abhay real ,

now that pia has recovered bring a real abhay in the story plzzz kisi aur avatar mein hi sahi but bring him and make them unite , i cant stand the sad ending .

the plot was good bhai , indeed it was 👏 but i felt it incomplete 😭 and bhai movie mein toh bipasha ko bhi koi mil gaya tha na , continue the story with the movie track .😉

Originally posted by: jack-12

sabse pehle itne bade comment ke lie thank u

N jaise hi tym milega i'll try writing

bt promise nahi karunga kab

aage se mere bade comments ke liye thnk u mat kehna , kyunki mein chote comments kabhi likhti hi nahin hoon 😆 , and 2nd thing , aap pehle apne donon SS complete karo , yeh OS uske baad complete kr lena , i will wait 😉😳

Originally posted by: withered

aage se mere bade comments ke liye thnk u mat kehna , kyunki mein chote comments kabhi likhti hi nahin hoon 😆 , and 2nd thing , aap pehle apne donon SS complete karo , yeh OS uske baad complete kr lena , i will wait 😉😳

amazing story
but can't imagine abhay in imaginary world hope in future pia dream ,become true <font size="3">but really want second part hope u will write its request </font>
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: singhshailesh86

amazing story
but can't imagine abhay in imaginary world hope in future pia dream ,become true <font size="3">but really want second part hope u will write its request </font>
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: anjali0111

nice OS😊

Awww...jus too emotional...lovedd it...poor Piya...lovedd it..

Its really nice os. 👍🏼 But I would prefer happy ending. 😃 Do consider writing another part. 😊 your writing is also good. 😃