ABHIYA SS: PEN FRIENDS.... part 2 on pg. 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello friends...im Priyanka... im starting new SS... it's my first time im writing somthing on Abhiya... Hope to stand on your expectations... If u didnt like it plz do tell me... 😳



A friend is someone who understand your past ,believe in your future and accepts you today just the way you are.


Prologue

A guy walked out of classroom.

Will walking form empty corridor... His eyes landed on something.

He goes there and picked that thing... it's a sketch book... but their is no name on book...but he found one email ID.

He took it went back to home.

He enter is house and greeted by his mother.

"How was your exam Abhay?" asked Haseena.

"Great...now we are having 3 weeks holidays" said Abhay.

"Go and freshnup i will make something for you" said Haseena.

Abhay come to his room...placed book on his study table and went to washroom to have nice shower.

After sometime he open the book and this about emailing on that ID.

He took his laptop and logged into: Silent_admire@gmail.com

Hey!

Found your sketch book in colg corridor. Found this email ID thought bout dropping you mail... when you want your book back.

Silent admire ;)



He loggout and went out of house.

other side of city...

A girl searching something in her room.

Room is looking like some hurricane is come and go.

Just then her room door open and one girl come shouting her name.

"PIA" but she stop midway seeing room condition.

"Pia what are you doing and what happen to your room" asked Misha.

"Yaar im searching my sketch book but didnt find it" said pia worriedly.

"ok i think you drop somewhere.. we will find it...im going down.. are you coming" said Misha.

"yup you i will come after sometime" said Pia.

After rearranging her room she logged into her email... Sweet_chilly@gmail.com

She open it go trough the mail.. reading it she sing in relife...and click reply button.


Hey!

Glad that you found my book... After holiday i will get it form you...

Thanx for picking my book.

Sweet chilly :)


she clicked send button and went downstair.





Hope you guys like it... waiting for your feedback.
plz ignore grammar and spelling mistakes 😳





Character sketch:


Abhay Raichand: 20 years old... studying in mount college.


Pia Jaiswal: 19 years old... fashion desinging student.. mount college.


Misha Sharma: Pia's best friend.


Kabir Rathod: Abhay's best friend.


Haseena and Chand Raichand: Abhay's parents


Swapnil Mehra: Pia's cousin brother



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yiiipppeee!!!! me 1st to cmmnt on ur ff... 😳
really awesomeee start priyu dear... I m glad u started abhiya story also 🤗
update 1st prt soon... waiting...
btw u written ff in title nd ss in starting so just edit one of dem... 😊
Edited by zoshad3119 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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THAT'S GREAT!! 😳
I would love to read it.., 🤗
Do pm me if u update more ... 😃
PS : my email is also on gmail.com 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice prologue... and lovely cs... plz update ch1 soon... egaerly waiting to read...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful story. Nice Start. Plz continue n PM me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Should be interesting. Do continue. :)
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lovely prologue..it looks interesting..waiting for the update when will u update?whenever u update pls pm me...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting concept..cntnw soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting concept priyu ,like it, waiting for email love 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yupy nice ff. Pm me when update. M waiting

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