Raining Desires - An OS (part 2/pg10) 22nd june - Page 2

Originally posted by: janvie

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Oh My Gosh Zara dear!!😲😲You really completed My request and Dedicated this Mind-blowing OS to me.!!😃🤗 🤗

Oh Thankyou so much Zaru!!I loved this OS so much.❤️It's Just Outstanding piece of Work.!!!!!👏👏⭐️Muaah.Muaah Zaru,I just love you for this.!!❤️Lacking wordr to Thankyou My friend.!!🤗 🤗

Oh Yeah,This was so Mysterious and I was so excited when Saw your pm,It was getting difficult for me to read.😆

I really loved the Mystery element here.I was so eager to know what'll happen next and I was just so much hooked on reading it.😊 😳 😳

Damn That Kiss was So Hot Man.!! 😳Not fair Zaru!!😡You switch My blushing Mode ON again.!!☺️ ☺️ 😆

And Yup Abhay kissing therapy on her back reminded me of our famous locker room waala Tharkey Abhay.🤣And The Hospital waala Saviour Abhay in his Kissing Therapy treatment mode. ☺️ 🤣And Many-Many more like that showing Abhay ka Tharkeypana.🤣 🤣 😆Thankyou so much for that Kissing Piya's back Mission waala scene.It's a Treat for me.😃 🤗 🤗And I'm sure for everyone else present here as well.😊 😳 😳

And Hey Abhay enter as new student,Then It's Get Over?!?!😲😭What Is The Unwanted thing He wanted Badly?!?!Oh God Zaru.!!Pls You can't stop it here.!!😭🤢Pls Complete with a a Part 2 from Abhay's POV.😭😳😳

Ahaha LOL,See you always make me wanting for more.😆But Seriously,This somewhere seems incomplete,Pls Give Part 2 if possible.😳😳

Thanks for the PM.😃

Love You.!!❤️ 🤗 🤗

P.S. :- Yaha pe comments aane me thoda time lagega,But tumne PM's bheje hai sabko,Toh The replies will be flooding in soon.❤️

awww Janvie !! I'm so glad u liked it !! 😃
I'm so sorry it took me long to write it ... 😔

And yesss my updates can never be complete widout Romance 😆 that's like adding a little 'Zara-touch' to it 😛

And I'm glad it makes everyone go ☺️ hehe ...

I will try writing Abhay's POV too 😃 but can't promise though...

I haven't pm'ed everyone though .. Just pm'ed the a few people whom I thot have watch PKYEK😛

I'm sooo happpyyy u liked it sooo muchhh 🤗 thankYou so soo sooo muchhh !!!!

OMG!! Eee I could so see this happening! I must say, you're a good writer...and yes I love this OS...very sensual...and so forbidden...so abhiya! You should defo write more. :D

Originally posted by: nupsie

Zara🤗

I loved it...😛

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Though i didn't knw whom to visualize, so I imagined my MaYur in ur beautiful OS❤️😳😆

The whole story was from the girl's POV, I wanted to knw the Guy's POV as well😆

But I loved how u described each n everything in detail...n OMG the kiss❤️☺️

I just didn't understand one thing, wat happened after they kissed??☺️😆

Where did he disappear after the kiss as u directly described the morning after the kiss😳

But all in all, I loved it...it was different, n very well written , n I knw u wrote it in such a short time, thats even more commendable😛

P.S. - Though I haven't seen this show, but this OS is AMAZING!!😃

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😆 Lagta hai ab Guy's POV bhi likhna padega 😛
ThankYou sooo muchhh Purrr 🤗

And well Piya went dizzy becoz she kissed a vampire .. And thts what happens when u kiss an immortal being...[Not like I have ever]😆

But it was something I wanted to put in ... To make it more mysterious 😛 and like in the morning too she had no memory of it until she saw Abhay ... So thts something I added too , to make it mysterious 😛

I'm glad u liked it Purrr ❤️

Originally posted by: Zara_92

😆 Lagta hai ab Guy's POV bhi likhna padega 😛
ThankYou sooo muchhh Purrr 🤗

And well Piya went dizzy becoz she kissed a vampire .. And thts what happens when u kiss an immortal being...[Not like I have ever]😆

But it was something I wanted to put in ... To make it more mysterious 😛 and like in the morning too she had no memory of it until she saw Abhay ... So thts something I added too , to make it mysterious 😛

I'm glad u liked it Purrr ❤️

Awww ThankYouuu sooo muchhh Purrr ❤️

That was very good

I should thank you because i was really missing Abhay ...

It is really good to read about this mysterious abhay

Wow Piya's life is gonna get better now for sure

Originally posted by: NANDY_BRU

That was very good

I should thank you because i was really missing Abhay ...

It is really good to read about this mysterious abhay

Wow Piya's life is gonna get better now for sure

ThankYou sooo muchhh Nandy !! 😃

Originally posted by: Zara_92

awww Janvie !! I'm so glad u liked it !! 😃
I'm so sorry it took me long to write it ... 😔

And yesss my updates can never be complete widout Romance 😆 that's like adding a little 'Zara-touch' to it 😛

And I'm glad it makes everyone go ☺️ hehe ...

I will try writing Abhay's POV too 😃 but can't promise though...

I haven't pm'ed everyone though .. Just pm'ed the a few people whom I thot have watch PKYEK😛

I'm sooo happpyyy u liked it sooo muchhh 🤗 thankYou so soo sooo muchhh !!!!

Aah,I loved it Zara.!!❤️And That's Completely My pleasure coz You wrote it on My request.So Pls You don't have to thank me at all.😳 😳
LOL Yup,Your updates are incomplete without that special touch of yours.😉
Ahaha You Just rock in writing passionate romantic scenes Zaru.!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ No one can write such scenes better than you.😃You can make anyone go Tomato Red.☺️ ☺️ 😳 😆
And Even if you don't continue from Abhay's POV,That's Alrighty for me,Coz I'm really grateful you wrote on Abhiya on My request.😊 😳I'm too happy about it.😃 😳 😳
And Who said you are late?!?!You don't have to be unhappy about that.Bcoz I wasn't depending or reffering on my old req at all.So I requested you again while commenting on Whipped Cream.😆And That's about 1 and a half or 2 days ago.That Shows you wrote in such a less time.That's Really commendable Man.!!Hats off to you and your Beautifully Amazing Writing.!! 👏 👏 ⭐️


P.S. :- I myself will send PM's to all the PKYEKians I have in My buddy list,Who may not in yours.😳Though I know everyone here come around on a round for sure. 😆