FADING DARKNESS #2..CH27..PG41..28/12/2014

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: AbhiyaDewaani
So beautiful & emotional update.. Hope Haseena jaldi tik hojayegi.

thank u😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: captainplus
wonderful update ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
lo❤️ed abhay-haseena moments 😛

bt feeling sad due 2 wat happened 2 haseena 😭

tnx 4r the pm 😊

glad that u enjoyed reading😊

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: abhaylovepia
its beautiful lovely episode
i think happy ending honay wali hay
awesome story i love to read this🤗
thanks

ending is far far away...lots of things will happen before that😊

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

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Oh my god tora!! Hw shud i react after reading the update??!! Shud i mention hw incredible it is..or should i first convey the emotional surge..that i felt after reading this?!?
I am stunned!! The sheer depth n beauty of dis update had left me wth no words!! You have excelled..i dnt know even hw to put it wat exactly i am feeling! I cn just say tht once again while going thru the update i felt my eyes teary tht happns so rare bt wth ur updats its becumng a regular situatn nw!
The part where abhay gets to knw abt haseena's illness and the variant of emotns tht he goes thru is so so beautifully n subtly written..tht my own heart swelled..! You have picturised ths abhay so extremely well n wonderfully that the character shines as one of the jewels despite hs imperfctns n natural humane errors!!! Marveilleux!!!⭐️ 👏
the part where u depicted hs pain..helplesness..n the tear ...tht he cudnt shed even if he tried..is one of the best parts of the update!! Nt to mentn the emotnl impact it had bt more than tht the depth n beauty wth whch u depicd the scene made me awestruck!!! 👏
then again where pia notices the vacant look in hs eyes..and the part where its mentnd tht he needed sum1 to cnsole hm even if he dsnt agree..was immencely heart wrenchng..n beautiful!!! 👏Indeed there are sum who cudnt cry even if they want to..or neither do they cum to agree tht they need sumone to hold their hand n be their strength! And our abhay here happens to be exactly one of these kinds..!
Then the other part where we see pia managing bth her work n abhay n then her meeting wth her brother..is all very well explaind. 👏
so nw pia heads for abhay's hme to meet hs dad..or shud i say to bring hm bck to shimla? Hm..i knew the moment there was the mentn of her reading sumthng in the diary thts bothering her..tht i knew she would have sumthng lyk dis in her mind!
Nw let us see where her actn leads to..n what results cum out of it..?!! I dnt knw wat u have plannd for next bt i wil patiently wait for no mre storms though i dread there cud be one! And haseena..i hope wil get well soon!! Abhay cannt lose her..nt after crossing so many hurdles..so many ups n dwns..nw..he just cnt!! If he does then there wil b loss of hope trust n belev..whch i fear he wnt be able to take!
Awaiting...the next..
And once again ths updat outshines if nt 4m a happy note bt as a fine literary piece of work!!! ⭐️
keep writing...you rock!!!🤗
p.s. And very sorry for being this late.

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Oh man...why am i feeling you'll kill of Haseena😭

Tora, I simply LOVED the AbhIya scene here, especially the way you portray Abhay's vulnerable side. Simply beautiful.

I am still in tw minds about Arjun😕

Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 12 years ago

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Poor abhay..
Plz dont cry...am ready toblend my sholdiers for u to cry...I cant see u sad just as piya...

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

a v well written and heart touching update.piya came to knw dat haseena is abhays mother and abhay and children at orphanage r really going through a v tough phase.nw piya wants to meet chand raichand?thanx a lot for pm and continue soon.

Edited by vmpy - 12 years ago

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Raatry

@forever.alone

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

really an emotional update 😭 ..feeling really bad for abhay..poor my baby 😭 pls dont kill haseena..
Loved the way piya always stayed with
abhay..he really needed her..piya got to know about his brother's kidnaping..why is she going to raichand mantion.?? 😕 to meet chand?? 😕
Amazingly written..spcly their emotions ..update soon..

Edited by ririrararaatry - 12 years ago

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megha sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

emotional update

the abhay raichand ppl knew who was strong and determined is so vulnerable and completely broken at this time and m glad pia is with there with him to support him.

the bonding b/w abhay and pia is strengthening with each passing day and i am lovin it. i hope pia is able to put sense in to chand's mind as well considering she is going to meet him and make him realise what he has missed all his life.

plz make haseena atleast a bit better in next update...this was too sad.