~os-night of the fireflies~

didlr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

beautiful os:) the firefly n fire concept was very well written, i fell in love with it:D

the entire update brought back the memories of the episodes in which these thibgs took place:)

very well written

thanks fr pm

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Janani24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wow nice os ria😊 loved the way the fireflies helped pia to clear her confusion😊

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Masooma Zaidi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Ahh... you know it's just simply AWESOME! 👏

I loved it...!! ❤️ You know you actually described the true meaning of this immortal ever lasting story of Abhiya.. Which will be always alive in our hearts! You wrote it fabulous...!! Every story i read or write, i get more addicted to Abhiya..!! The only magical couple 😳😳

And surely it was a very different and fantastic idea to write this, and don't say it crap 😡 it was more than superb! 😊

I was not even that much happy to see Piya come back in the show, but reading this, i was dancing with joy 😆

sorry for a late reply... and thank u so much for the PM. 🤗

Do write more and keep getting ideas 😉

Do. cont. soon ur FF.

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jack-12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

very well written pov of piya:) brought back the memories if pkyek

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

a wonderful and changed concept.i loved this concept.da way u blended abhyia story with da idea of fireflies was awesome.thanx a lot for pm.

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bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

ria lovely concept ... grt os

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BabyHimavari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

thx all of my frndzz for such lovely cmnts!!😳thnk u thnk u!!i feel so happy!!

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diana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

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cant wait to read the next chappy😳

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BabyHimavari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: vampireking
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cant wait to read the next chappy😳

hey this is ony a one short story!!😃...the story is funished and there is no next chapp..😉...thx for liking!!😳

Edited by ifians - 12 years ago

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

wonderful OS dear.beautifully written!👏
the firefly concept was unique and really beautiful.😳 the way you used it was commendable!👍🏼
write more..

P.s. Sorry for commenting late bt i could hardly make time.
And ya thanks for the pm. 😊

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