Passion of an Evil Lover:lst chpt,pg 37,jul28

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Epilogue

20 years later - Mount College, Dehradun - Orientation day

A handsome but nervous young boy is standing near the college gate biting his nails and looking here and there when he sees a pretty curly haired young girl coming inside through the gate. He is smitten by her beauty instantly but he somehow manages to overcome his shyness and approaches her nervously,

"Errmm.. excuse me, I am new to this college, can you please tell me the way to the auditorium where orientation is taking place."

"Today is orientation Day - to welcome the new students to college. So obviously, I am also new to this college, so how would I know the way?" the girl replied back haughtily, breaking the boy's already shaking confidence. Bur he still managed to ask her, "Hmm.. Shall we then, find the way together?"

The girl turned to face the guy and gave him a top to bottom appraisal. She liked what she saw and so agreed, "Ok, let's go."

"Thanks. By the way I am Abhay Raichand."

"And I am Pia Jaiswal"

"Have we met before?"

"Are you trying to flirt with me?" The girl asked in a stern voice.

"Oh no.. no.. but seriously it does seem that we have met before, though I am new to this town."

She broke into giggles seeing his nervous state, "Well I am new here too. My father is in Air Force and he got posted here last week only. But you are right, it does seem that we have met before, but I cannot see how and when"

"Hmm.. maybe we met in our previous birth"

"What!! Don't tell me you believe in reincarnation and all that stuff."

"Well I didn't use to, but now it seems I do"

"You sure are cheesy"

"And you sure are beautiful"

(Rolling her eyes) "Whatever! Let's find that damn auditorium"

"Lead the way sweetheart!"

Edited by ..dishu.. - 12 years ago

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

I am first, I am first YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🥳

Though both Abhiya die in the end u made sure the story didn get a sad ending 😳 Life would surely never let Abhiya unite. So they had to unite in death Abhay had certainly not chosen this life for himself as he was turned against his will but once ur into it, there's no backing out. Survival will always come above everything n to ensure it, Abhay had to let the monster take control Once he became a monster he embraced his immortal life with open arms though somewhere deep down he wasn happy abt it either. He longed for a companion n y wont he? Eternity is a curse in itself n u need a soulmate to share it with. Though he marked Misha initially it was Pia who was destined to be his soulmate. But Pia being a human, how could she allow the monstrosity to claim her humaity n soul? She knew Abhay was her true soulmate n she was always meant to be with him. But at what cost? She had seen with her own eyes how her friend, Misha who had been a gem of a person in her human life had mercilessly slain a child. Would she want that existance for herself? I suppose not So she gave a choice to Abhay knowing that Abhay too sought a salvation from this immortal life. He wanted to be at peace. So they allowed themselves to be engulfed into the waiting arms of death so they could be born again 😭 It was sad but inevitable.

The epilogue was cute 😉 A nerdy Abhay n badass Pia 😎 A new life, a new love 😳 Lovely ending 👏 This mini SS comes second to Chronicles in my fav list of ur works 😳 Thank u for writing it 🤗

And and and... I want a new story from u 😛 ur not running away anywhere I will hound u till u agree 😉

Edited by ..mandy.. - 12 years ago

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#273

RES..
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oh! god end ws unxpctable ... at 1 tym, I thought he would betray her 😛 bt nooo
dey wr truly soul mate
last bt nt d least dis is d bst epilogue i hv ever read :* dis ws a blockbluster updt dishu

Edited by luckdiya - 12 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Res

Me third :'(
well, anyway...
The minute I read Pia was apprehensive about Abhay I had this funny feeling they were going to die...and then I was like no dishu wouldnt do it, but then you did...you killed them off, and you even justified it convincingly :'( well you convinced me anyway :P

And then of course you go and give that ah-dor-able epilogue. One of the best epilogues ever and dishu this is going down as one of your best in my book.
I simply loved this one.

PS. Epilogue ko continue karke sequel ka koi chance hai kya? :P

Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 12 years ago

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Ekta

@HaymurS

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#275

amazing n nice update
awesome epilogue

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

beautiful dishu...! bt epilgue thoda badaa likhti na...! 😊

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

dishu dishu dishu!!! ok..i had just read the chapter 1 and then i never read this fic further as many things came up with which i was dealing. but today when i saw your pm, i was like, cmon i have to read this anyway, so lets do it now..

OMG!! you have done such a amazing job..when misha was killed, i really felt bad, not because she dies, but because somehwere i felt she didnt deserve to die. her last parting words, were so true and hurtful and may be thats the reason i didnt want misha to die..

then piya got bitten. and abhiya became one. they realised that they are soulmates. that moment was so so beautiful. they may monsters as others were putting, but i could feel the love they shared.

and then there was kabir. i hated him for what he did to piya

piya still had her humanity intact. and the way she convinced abhay to let go their eternal life, was amazing. and when they killed themselves, though i felt happy that they would be back in a right way, at the same time i felt remorse

and finally the epilogue, that was just what we needed. they came back but as humans!!

dishu i loved this fic and you have done an amazing job.

P.S: ha! look i finally commented and i guess its been too long since i wrote an essay in my comment 😆

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#278

i am a bit surprised that this ff has ended.Anyway i lvd it but pia's plan was something that i could never think of.

in a way she was right and i am glad that they both did meet each other in their next birth also. the way they both drove stakes through each other's heart was painful but atleast they were together in their death.

lvd both of them in their next birth...abhay was too cute and pia was like a firecracker. lvd their cute banter.

amazing ss and i really wanted to read more .

it was simply superb.

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#279

why it ended so soon..😭

well again another awsome update and a very good ending👏...i am expecting that at thae last part both of them will die together..but the epilouge was truly unexpected😛..i was all set for a sad ending😭..but got a real treat at ending😆..but man how can you imagine abhay as nervous boy😲..he always seems so confident😎 but ok..really enjoyed that..and don't forget to pm me for ur next..😳

Edited by ifians - 12 years ago