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@Paint.It.BlacK.

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

ok! So here i am! 😉

nw What shud i say? As usual you had once again proved your fort in creating magical updates!! 👏 The concept is intriguing and so is the 1st chap! 👍🏼 Very very well written! 👏
I couldnt say which parts i liked more..since i loved each n every detail!! ❤️ from the part of pia kabir courtship to Pia looking at the moon..keeping the book under her pillow...drawing the curtain to bar the sunlight...to healing abhay ...each..n every expression of her was powerful enough to make us feel the emotins of the characters !!😳 hard to say it was the 1st update of dis story!! Brilliant job !! ⭐️ Carry on dear!!🤗

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Amazing start. he concept is too high leveled for me as its science fiction involved and im not interested in them much 😛 but that is because I dont understand it much. but i loved the idea of mutants and since its wrtten by you i have to give a chance. I love the chapter. kabir piyas part was nice but the healing part and Piya's affection towards mutants and her feelings towards human feelings were beautiful. great job 👏

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helen_of_troy

@helen_of_troy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

hey shreya🤗

very interesting concept dear loved the way u wrote pia's feelings abhiya scene is very cute i m so much in luv with it continue soon... it's a difficult concept to write but u brought to it up easily eager for the next part do PM me

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Seema

@...Seema...

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

awesome start.thanx for pm and continue soon

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Divya6696

@Divya6696

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Heyyy! 🤗
Starting from this one..
First of all.. wonderful update! 😳 👏

Kabir is so "Kabir" such a softie 😛
But you know, out of habit, I'm not really liking Kabir and Piya together 🤔 - Completely my thoughts hun..
The batch of Mutants made her curious about humans. Of course, the batch has our Prince Charming 😃
Piya's never bothered what the others thought - she did what she wanted, always..
Nine Decades *gasp* 😲 Piya is as old as a granny 🤣 . . . Just kidding.. sorry 😛
She saved Abhay earlier as well and now is saving him again.. 😳 The tables have turned since PKYEK 😉
Awwwh Abhay.. bruised, battered and burned by silver
The whole Abhay-Piya talking part.. It felt so beautiful.. this is the first thing I read on Abhiya after almost a month!
The news Piya's father was going to tell her - Is it what I think it is? *waggling eyebrows*
Well.. I'm pretty much excitedly waiting for it 😳 😆

Beautifully Written ⭐️
Update whenever you can 😃

One down, two to go 😆

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Amazing update

So abhay is a mutant who was a human who got turned into a vampire

So abhay was behaving like that because he is not suppose to show feelings

Was abhay the reason why piya is intrigued by humans

What is the bad news piya's dad gonna give her is it her engagement breaking yippie than

I just hope piya does not love kabir

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: ..dishu..
very nice update shreya. this one was easier to understand.
so pia had first started thinking of humans because of abhay, hmmm... interesting.😛</font>
and what's the bad news, hope kabir is dead😆

Thanks a lot for the feedback dishu 🤗 bad news u will see soon I guess 😛

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

I won't reply monotonous comments from now on :/

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

eeks!!i totally skipped this one!! don't know how😕..maaf kar deejiye shreya maam...😃

fantastic update...pia is one curios vampire...love how her curiousity never goes😆..but it's lovely how u wrote about the humans from the POV of this world...pia has to hide her eagerness to know about humans..that's sad...and also enjoyed the way u bring the contrast out in the two worlds...do humans exist at all?? i mean other than mutants? and how were the mutations done? why were mutants even made? i sound like pia😆...but so many queries..what to do...

loved that abhiya scene..oh dear..mutants are all known with numbers here..almost gives u the feeling that they are prisoners...abhay feels for piya!!he really does😳..i felt so bad for him at that point when he wanted to say something but couldn't...and i like pia's attitude here...her friendly behaviour.👍🏼.

what bad news? i hope it's about kabir dying😆

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Bisweswar

@Bisweswar

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

sorry for being too much late.i think mujhe apna naam late latif rakh dena chahiye.piya is really a curious vampire.ofcourse we all know our piya.curisity uska janam sidh adhikar hai.ok coming to the update abhay feels for piya.awww!and piya reads books on human beings .whats the bad news.i am sure it is about kabir.pls update soon and pls forgive for being late.

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