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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome & great update
its really amazing scene b/w raichands -pia-arohi
atlast so abhiya will going to play romeo-juliat role , pia really give shock to abhay
thanks for pm
pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update. Haseena is so funny. Wow Romeo-Juliot mein maza aayega😉.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb post.loved it to da core.haseena rocks.thanx for pm and continue soon
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chapter 57
part1
at that moment,in his centuries old dead eternal life,abhay again felt his frozen heart was about to bit again.in his front,there was standing a beautiful curly haired girl having milky white skin,big baby brown eyes,a faint pink blushing chicks and tender rosy lips,wearing that julliet's red victorian gown attire which was clinging to her petite fig so attracktively,was not t.but the angel of his life!!the girl for whom his dead eyes always searched everywhere in world!!HIS BELOVED!!!HIS PIYA!!at first he felt it was just his dream,he was imagining her again.but after some moment when her warm breath,her heavenly aroma hit him again and the sound of her loudly throobing heartbit reached his ear he was assured that it was not his mere illusion,she was really standing in front of him with her each and every real sence!!
piya was feeling so nervous while coming inside the stage.but when she looked at abhay's eyes the stage,the light the gathering,everything got out of her vission and that oceanic eyes full of amusement,and intense emotion became the focal point of her vission.he was looking so handsome in that attire!!more attracktive than before.like he was the prince charming came to her life to fetch her with him.their eyes got locked to each other and for such a long time.there was a pin drop silence at the auditorium.each and every1 was dumbed looking at the most beautiful nd perfect romio-julliet they had ever seen.every1 had gone into thre transe.the couples who were seating together just felt the romance in air and entwined their hand together in transe.abhay was still looking at her dream come true,how did it happened he didn't know, but one thing was sure that she was his destiny!!she was made just for him!!otherwise,how cld each and every time they ended up together!!he felt her nervousness and forowarded his measured steps towards her.piya felt her heartbit was in same rythm with the sound of his footsteps.her eyes were still interlocked with abhay.he came close to her and stopped.his warm oceanic eyes seemed caressing over her head to toe.she felt so pleased,as well as embarrased by his gaze.piya cldn't resist her words anymore.."aise kyun dekh rahe ho?!jaise pehli baar dekh rahe ho mujhe!!"she said and was about to bit her toungue immeadiately.man it was not the dialouge of julliet!!she knew it wld happen!!but suddenly abhay's deep voice floated into her ears,"Paani si pyaas na bujhi to mekhane ti taraf chal nikla,socha shikayat karu teri khuda se, par woh bhi tera aashiq nikla..."his magnetic attracktive voice seemed stabbed into her heart directly and every1 present at the auditorium gasped heavilly looking at the fire and passion between them and piya,god knows,how she was eable to be on her hold at that time.his eyes were calling her to drowned into them."kyun aisa kar rahe ho?!kyun khich rahein ho hamein apne kareeb?!tumse milti hoom to aisa lagta hain jaise har rasta tumpe jakar khatm hota hain..kyun hota hain aisa?!.."damn even it was not the dialouges.arohi told her to come down just after some mins.so it wld be better if she got out somehow."jane do hamein...humare jane ka waqt a chuka hain!!..."piya turned back and abhay suddenly caught her hand resisting her to go.she was again frozed by his touch when suddenly his magnetic voice again approached in her ear!"hum se bachkar jaaoge kaise.. apne dil se hame nikaaloge kaise .. hum woh khushbu hai jo saason mein baste hain ... kud ki saanson ko rok paaoge kaise..."his words made piya's heart to thud so loudly.god!!what's going on with them.if it continued the whole play was going to ruin. not even her but abhay was also saying weird dialouges which were not part of the script!!god what got into him and what got into her??at last the lights were on and both came into their sence.the each and every portion of the hall filled up with the sounds of clapping.piya quickly rushed out of the stage in all red face.abhay followed her with a smirk.as soon as piya came inside the dias arohi,sanaya and every girls rushed towards her.arohi hugged her tightly."god piya!!it was awsome!!!!u both were looking magnifisent!!!"arohi said."really?!but i thought i had done plenty of mistakes!!"piya said."what?!but we cldn't detect a single mistake..just be ready the main play is about to start soon!!"arohi said."ok!!.."piya said nervously.sanaya went towards the stage to make the announcement and to introduce all cast and crews!abhay was standing at a corner quitely looking at piya's direction.arjun came to him."so bhai!!i thnk u don't have any problem with ur dr julliet!!"he said in a low teasing voice.abhay elbowed him. "ouch!!.."arjun winced a little."that's for ur punishment!!why didn't u tell me before?!"he asked a lil bit angrily."sorry bhai,but i thought it wld be a gr8 surprise for u!!"arjun said."but what happened actually?!where did that queen nasty t had gone?!"abhay asked.arjun explained the whole situation.abhay smilled.although t wanted to spoil their play but she didn't knew what a gr8 favour she had done to him!!every1 got out to set the stage.only piya and abhay was left there.piya was standing near the dias looking at the enlighted stage.she was feeling so nervous. every1 was looking foroward to her performance but if she continued to do that much mistakes then she didn't know how much she wld be eable to cover up."so miss piya mehta,at last u had to play opposite to this stupid idiot jerk black crow!!.."her trail of thoughts was broke when she heared his voice near.she looked back with a frown and found abhay standing just behind her. that light mischief was again back in his eyes."yes,to my bad luch and ur super bad luck...u have to do the whole play with me rather than ur super sexy t!!"she whimpered angrilly."aha so u r jealous of t?!"abhay smirked."huh!!why should i be?!i'm not like any stupid crack person who always get jealous for no reasons!!"she said more loudly.abhay understood,she was talking about swayam's incident.he kept his hand on the wall arround her back."nice to hear that!!but it's not my bad luck to work with such a beautiful and talented lady..."he leaned to her supporting the wall and piya was getting hard time to supress her blush."and it didn't seemed ur bad luck two!!the way u r reacting on the stage..."his light voice was taken a back by piya's loud voice,"what the hell..just stop it ok!!..u don't know what's going inside me and ur just..."piya cldn't say further.her head was totaly boiled up and she was feeling more affraid than before. "nervous?!!.."his voice became concerned."just that i..."piya closed her eyes and rook a heavy breath to compose herself.stil she was feeling cold allover.her feet seemed stuck."hey,don't worry!!everythings gonna fine!!besides u remember all the dialouges then what's the problem?!"abhay asked."if everything is only about dialouges then i won't have any problems. do u know i had never take part in a single play.not even a side charecter and now suddenly they are telling to play a charecter like julliet!!"piya shighed.suddenly she felt his strong hand encircling her feature and dragging her near him.his arms seemed so comfortable at that moment."it's allright!!everythings gonna be fine..!!just trust urself,trust me!!i am with u and will always be...!!"he said with a determined voice looking straightly into her eyes. "abhay!!.."she cldn't say anything further.the protectiveness she saw in his eyes for her washed her allover. "just forget every1,forget the people!!forget that who u r and be julliet!!stand urself in her place and feel her love,her pain her agony.i know u can..cause no one among us can feel it better then u!!!"he said straightly looking into her eyes.piya seemed a little bit startled.she never imagined that stupid sadu gadha raichand cld make a speech like this!!she was totally unaware of this side of him.she smilled a little,"thx!!.."she said taking a breath."hey piya..."arohi screamed from a corner."ya comin..."piya rushed towards the corner giving a last thankfull look towards abhay and when she rushed,her curls jerked up and brushed his broad chest.abhay breathed heavilly taking her scent inside.a beautiful mild smille was playing on his face.
the rest of the play went smoothly.every1 played their role very well.but the center of attracktion were as usual the leads.as usual every1 was dazed and wowed by abhay's charm.but every1 was hell surprised by piya's mervelous performance.sanaya arohi all were too dazed.they never imagined that the happy go lucky,mischevious and so practical about her life...who always considered the real situation...cld ever potray that much intense emotion so beautifully and so perfectly!!like they cld feel her julliets each and every emotion with her.they smilled with her,they laughed when she laughed,and when piya cried no one cld hold their tears."god this girl!!i wonder how anyone didn't let her take part in her clg play!!"arjun asked."not that arjun,she herself didn't show any interest!!..i heared from mehak that she was an excellent dance performer in her clg days!!"arohi said.the play was going on it's own way and when romio and julliet were together in stage no one cld take thir eyes from them.they just complimented each other so well,so beautifully.at last came the climax scene...
part 2 below😳
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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part2
piya was lying on the covrd table at centre.her body was still.a mild light was playing on the stage.everyone cld feel their heartbeat.they all knew what wld be at the end but still they cldn't hold their excitement.the environment seemed so mysterious as well as gloomy like something was about to happen.suddenly the sound of the door opening and abhay aka romio appeared on the scene.he was coming down from the artificial stone stairs created at the stage.as he steped inside his eyes straightly fell at the centre,inside an artificial coffin,wearing a white robe.there was not a single sign of movement in his feature.all still and silent.suddenly a centuries old incident flashed on his mind.another still lifeless body,all icen,just like her.his feet grounded.he forgot that it was just a play!!she was not really dead.his face became full offear and he rushed downstairs and came near the coffin.his face was so shattered,so torned.his oceanic blue eyes were suddenly darkened.he touched her warm chicks.caresed her rosy lips so gently."kyun!!kyun tum mujhe chod ke chaligayi?!kyun...ekbar bh piche murke nahi dekha!!hum kya karangey?!kaisey jiyengey..tumhare bina??!!batao...ab aaj jab itne sadio baad phirse mujhe mera pyar waps mila hain to phir mujhe chodke jana chahte ho?!!!kyun...kyun kar rahi ho mere sath aisa??!!mujhe yun sata ke kya milta hain tumhe?!"his painfull voice hit every1.piya was shaking allover by his voice.she didn't heared his that much painfull voice.it was not romeo's dialouge.it was abhay's words and he was saying those to her.how much piya wanted to open her eyes and look to his face.on the other hand mr avasti and haseena was seating together."i must say mrs raichand!!ur son is very talented.his acting was really superb!!"mr avasti said."he was not acting!!..."hasena said in a low voice.she had allready observed his gloomy expression and hoping that he cld hold himself in time.piya felt goosebumps as abhay's cold hands mooved tressing her chiclks,her neckline and came to her lips."kitni khoobsurat ho tum!!.."he said.piya felt a relief as he was again back in his charecter.
romio:kya koi maut ke baad bh itni sundar dikhti hain.meri jaan,MERI SAJNI!!!...(he paused a little).
piya felt her heart started to increase again.his words!!so much drifted in love and sorrow.spacially the last word when he said,"MERI SAJNI!"the intensity of his words took her breath away.with a huge pause he started again.
romeo:maut ne tumse tumhari sanse to chin li hain par tumhari sadgi nahi chin payi!!wohi chehera,wohi nazuk honth...jaise maine dekha tha tumhe...pehli baar.kaise yakeen karlu ki tum nahi ho?!tum mere andheri duniya ki roshni ho!!kaise jane du tume khudse door?!
piya gasped again.god what was he saying?!even abhay didn't noticed that his own words were mixing up with dialouges.
romeo:aisa lagta hain maut bhi tumhara ashiq hain.sayad isliye,tumko mujhse chin liya taki wo tumhe apna bana sake!!par main aisa nahi hone de sakta.tum sirf mera ho.aur kisi ka nahi.main tumhare sath yahi rahunga.issi kfan ke paas...tumhare sath.hamesa,hamesa ke liye.taki maut bh tumhe mujhse na chin sake!!!main a raha hoon tumhare paas...
he leaned and took her delicate palm in his hand and kissed it so passionately.there was a pin drop silent everywhere.only the increasing hearbit and and breathing of people.abhay leaned on her face.his lips came so close to her lips.piya breathed heavily.god!!what was he going to do?!was he really going to...piya felt numb.abhay cupped her face and leaned more and more then suddenly hidding both of their face by his broad palm..so that no one cld c that,he pressed his lips softly against her!!blood boiled on her lips.her heart thudded loudly.abhay smirked against her lips and parted without going further,although he had to go through gr8 struggles for backing his steps.he looked at piya's face.her face was all covered with dark red shade and her heart was runnin superfast.and there was a huge confusion among the audience that did abhay really kissed piya or not.
romeo:sirf tumhare liye meri jaan..romeo let out the poisonous bottle and sipped it.after some moment he slided limply on the side of coffin and closed his eyes peacefully.at that instant piya pooped out her eyes with a heavy gasp.she had to open her eyes after some few mins ltr but she cldn't controle herself anymore.at that instant the boy who was playing FRIAR LAWRENCE entered inside the stage.he rushed towards the coffin
friar:julliet,ow julliet!!aap zinda hain??!!chaliye hame abhi yahsan se jana hoga.
piya jerked up and sat quickly.
julliet:wo kahan hain?!
her voice was all worried and gloomy.friar helped her to get on her feet.
friar:hum jyada der tak yahan nahi rahe sakte.wo log pauch te hi hoge humein marne ke liye!!chaliye..romeo wahan hain.aapko mrit samajhke unhone ne apni jaan de di.
piya turned back and abhay's falling body got on her view.he was lying on the fllor.all still,so beautiful.just like a stone statue lufeless.like he was really dead.blood drooped from her face.she felt so numb!!her eyes wided in shock and she collapsed on the floor on her knees.just some few inches away he was lying,closing his eyes.piya suddenly felt a lump on her throat.why was she feeling like this?!it was all fake!!just an act.then why when she was thinking of him dead she felt like she hadlst everything.
friart:chliye...hum aur nahi ruk sakte!!
julliet:aap jaiye.hum nahi ja sakte.hum inhe chodke kabhi nahi ja sakte...
friar got out of the scene.piya felty her eyesight were becoming blur.the real tears were flowing down her chicks.she stood up and slowly came near him.she sat crossleged at his lying feature. there was a so beautiful mild smile playing on her teary eyes.
julliet:mujhe chod ke chale gaye tum?!!kaise ja sakte ho?!ek baar bh murke nahi dekha tumne!!kaise aisa kar sakte ho tum mere sath batao?!chup kyun ho?!!batao na...
piya's voice was almost cracking.all audience was looking towards her with wild heart.any1 cldn't take off their eyes from the stage.
julliet:hamesha mere sath aisa hi karte ho tum!!mujhe har pareshani,har mushibat se bachate raheto the par kabhi mere samne nahi ate the!!kyun itni parwa hain tumhe meri?!kyun mere zindagi mein aye...ek tufan ki tarah..aur mera sabkuch le gaye...aab kaise raho main tumhare bina.tum kahte ho tum hamesha mujhe yaad karte ho.par kya tum jante ho ki har pal har lamha main tumhe mehsoos karta hoon.jagte huye,sapno mein.jaise tum mere har sans mein base huye ho!!ab kaise rahu tumse door?!batao mujhe...
piya felt her own words were coming out from her mouth which she never ever eable to say.her ters rolled down from her chicks and fell over his icy feature.piya took the bottle from his hand.
julliet:ye kya!!ye toh...to aise tum mujhe chod ke chale gaye?!iske sahare..par main tumhe itni asani se nahi chodne wali...
she sipped the bottle.
julliet:tumne sara zeher pi liya!!hamesha aise hi ho tum!!khud sare gham apne andar samet lete ho taki mujhe bas khusiyan mile!!kyun karte ho aisa.tum kyun nahi samjhte meri khusi sirf tumseh hain.aur aaj main wada kar ti hoon ki main tumhe kabhi nahi chodungi!!kabhi nahi... she let out the knief from his cloth and stabbed on her stomach.very1 felt a huge thud and a gasp came out from many faces.some1 had allready started to cry.piya bent down on his feature holding the knief.
julliet:ek baat kaheni thi tumse jo sayad maine kabhi nahi kaha.par aaj kahe raha hoon,na jane phir kab aise mauka milega...
she leaned more and her face was just few inches away from his.she whispered leeting out her heart's all emotions."hume tumse pyar hain!!bahut jyada pyar karte hain...pata nahi kab kaise tumse pyar ho gaya par hum sirf tumhare hain.aur hamesha tumharey rahengey..."she pressed her lips on his cold forehead softly and fell over his broad chest hidding her all tearfull smilling face.
the lights glewed and curtains were drooped.each and every corner of the hall broke out with the clapps.there was not a single people whose eyes were dry except haseena.well she cldn't cry publicly.but she badly wanted that if she cld...!!arjun arohi sanaya all were jumping and hugging each other in excitement and then they rushed towards the stage.
as soon as the sounds of clappingf and loud joyfull scream started piya got back her sensce and got aware of surroundings.she quickly ribbed her wet eyes and wass about to got up from his chest when suddenly his strong arms wrapped arround her tightly giving her a huge shock.abhay took his lips near her ear and whispered,"i love u too!!!i love u so much!!!".piya's breath hitched and her heart thuded ao loudly spreafing the deep scarlet marks allover her face.
-----------------sorry for this so long and boring update guyzz.and i know itni sare sudh hindi dialouges parke sabka dimag kharap ho jayega,and my hindi is so...🤪.and convert sekhspeatrs dialouges into hindi!!baao re!!!but i narrated the whole dramma in hindi as to comapare with the mode of pkyek.sorry if i offend any1!!😕pls forgive me!!!😳i don't have the intention to bash any1,i lhave gr8 respect towards gr8 shakespear!!sorry i knew i have done lots of mistakes and i don't even know if u wld like it or not.i am so much tensed.from next time i wld try to make the story run a little bit faster.waiting for ur replys botting my nails.so tensed!!
ps:the earlier dialouges of abhay n part1 was taken from moovie fanna and the last act scene was totally inspired by gr8 classic of shakespear's romio juliet!!😊
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yipeee me 1st🥳
Its superb ria dear...tum toh Ekta jo kami rakhi thi romeo-juliet drama pe Abhiya ko nehi deke comdy drama kiya tha...tum humari adhuri chat puri kar dtya..😊👏I feel crying dear...Its really nice..I'm not find words what say😲?awsomeee
continue dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
aby baby ne bola to sahi...ab piya ke jawaab k liye saalo intezaar mat karwana kaaliya
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update
what is going to happend next in your story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow what a confessio
n it was ...loved it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update .
It was so intense and the emotions were well displayed .
Thanks for the pm .
Really loved this part .

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