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Posted: 12 years ago
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M very very eagerly waiting for next update ... plz plz plz and plz update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update👏
so finally pia will be visiting DD!
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nice update.waiting for abhyia meeting.thanx for pm and continue soon
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wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm
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Whoa its just amazing part ever I just love it
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Awesome update.
So Akhilesh wud take Piya wid him to d palace.Cant wait 4 Abhiya meeting.
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hllo frndz hears the next chapp and it's a mega chapp also😆.i thought to made it short par mere fingrs contrl nahi hue aur main type karti gayi.firse writer ka bhoot sawar ho gaya.🤣.
the part one is a little bit slow😕.but the 2nd one is interesting😉.so if u want a exiting part u can go with 2nd one first😆.but i really hope u will like this 1 like others.
pic by me😳
~chapter 4~

part 1

"what!!!"piya was all amazed looking at the photograph of that oilpaint."so what do u thnk about this?"aswini asked."gosh dad!where did u find this oilpaint?"piya asked."well,i got this pic from pandher's palace.it was an oilpaint of crown princess piyashree jaiswal singh.according to the date mentioned by the artist this was made in late 18th century!"akhilesh said.the sound of the mooving train got piya out of transe.they got the train for dehradoon from gaziabad near about 12 pm and it's almost 5pm.soon there destination wld come.as in this short notice they cldn't arrange for car and buses were all full.piya again looked at the picture."gosh dad!u know i never got that much shock in my life before.not even when u mentioned about the ghosts and spirits of dehradun's forrests but this is so unpredictable.now i'm surely gonne pay a visit on the spot.ab toh us palace mein jana hi parega!!"she said with still amazed eyes."hmmm!!piyashree rajnandini jaiswal!!..."aswini prompted from other side"there was a small state at the same belt of himalayan region where pandher was situated.the state of barouli where the decendents of jaiswal royal familly administrated!they were actually rajputs'."aswini said."yes,i know about barauli's royal familly."akhilesh said."i am sure this piyashree was the daughter of king vijayendra jaiswal whose life history was still unknown to us!!may be she was married to some pandher royal familly's decndent!!so piyashree's identity was kept secret!!as everything related to pandher's state was always kept so secret!!"aswini promped."but tell me one thing mom why everything related to pandher's state was kept so secret?"piya asked with an eager voice."so,at last akhilesh hamari beti ko history mein interest a hi gayi!!"aswni said with a smille."mom!!i was just qurious,after seeing that princess piyashrees photo,she is like a shadow of mine!!!"piya said still amazed."i know!!even we are also amazed.as u aske before about so much secrecy of that pandher state it was still an unknown question!!many of the historians and archeologists were searching for this hidden state inside dence dehraddon'd forrest for a while.but it was too hard as the actual location of the state was unknown to all of us!!"akhilesh said.piya was listening with interests.the train continued to foroward faster on it's track."psndher was like a undefeatable castle.surrounded by dence forrests and huge himalayan renges which kept it hidden from outside world.from the very few old books and documents of 12th to 18th centuarys in india we came to know about some details of that pandher's palace.but that few things were so much interesting and almost unbelievable too!!"akhilesh peomped."and what were those?"piya asked quriously."well..."aswini said."i know this is very hard to believe a new generation girl like u who always tried to put everything in logic..."she smilled."mom just tell me na!!"piya became restless."well,according to a book the pandher was the living place of the dark creatures!!"aswini said at last."i don't understand mom!!"piya said."don't u know about dark creatures?the creatures of dark worlds?vampires,werewolves,witches,gargoyles...etc etc.the old myths said that the centuries old dehradun's forrest was filled up with these creatures and the pandher's state situated at the middle of the forrest was like the capital of them!!"aswini said."what,a state of vampires and werewolves?not again mom!!"piya laghed."unbelievable isn't it?!but most of the books mentioned the same thing.pandher was famous for witchcrafts and black magic!!the wiccans posses so trmndous powers which protects the country from outside world.to protect those black magic powers they maintain that much secrecy.cause if those powers got into some immature hand they cld do so many harms with those powers!!"aswini said."hmm,sounds like old fairry tells!!"piya said."yes,a dark fairy tell.and it was only menioned in a very old document and nowwhere else that the people pandher's royal familly was not normal humans!!they were all bloodsucking monsters!!!"aswini said."what??!!!mom was the writer of that document was insane?!!"piya bursted out in laugh."i don't know beta!but looking at his languages and other topics on that doucement the writer seemed totally healthy and normal.then why did they said that 'be aware of while going near northan forrest.the bloodsucking monsters of pandher's royal familly are always waiting for fresh blood!'.as he said."aswini quted the words with thoughtfull face."god!!bloodsucking monsters!!that means vampires r8!!mom don't u think accordind to the document and other informations that this 'pandher' state is the indian version of 'transylvania'???"piya asked still laughing."well u r r8 actually.it was like indian transylvania!but it was also hard to believe that a place like these cld exict in world where all mythological dark creatures really exist!!aise bahut sari batein phele bh uthi thi par sab ke sab jhut sabit ho gayi,and i'll be so happy if this informations comes out wrong!"aswini said."don't worry mom!!it will be prooved wrong.cuse creatures like vamps and w wolves doesn't exict and trust me this is all myth.logo ka to kaam hi hain choti si baat ko ballon ki tarah phulana!!"piya said with a smille."but u know.."akhilesh looked worried,"i found some tracess from that ruins which clearly defines that there was the practise of witchcrafts and black magics!!!and also u know the deadbodies of security guards they looked like some1 had sucked the last drop of blood from their body and there also a bite mark on their neck!!"akhilesh said.both aswini and piya's eyes wided in that information.the darkness had allready started to cover the last rays of sun in evening sky.

on the other hand,some miles away in dehradoon's forrest,that same inhumanly beautiful guy was standing over a stone with allerted eyes.he was looking everywhere with allerted eyes and smelling something.another shadowish fig appeared from inside the forrest."abhay why are u going for hunt today?u allready drained another human yesterday."the fig said."just shut up akash!!"abhay turned his furious red gaze to him."don't u know if i won't keep myself busy in hunting i'll again go to that palace and i know some1 will be there just like before and i won't be eable to controle myself again!!"abhay said."hey abhay,when will u get out of ur madness brother?u have to accept that she is dead and never gonna come back!!"akash said while taking a glance everywhere.abhay clenched his feast to controle his temper.he was hell irritated with chand and haseena's alltime advices and scolding for his recklessness and there fear to get exposed!!he didn't even wanted to live with them but as the clan leader ordered,he cldn't deny that!also he was fed up with the chaos made for him.he didn't wanted to leave this place where his every being belonged and for that he had to keep up with all those animal blood drinkers!if they all gathered up against him it wld be problematic for him.so it was good to avoid problems."don't waste my time in rubish akash!just keep concentrate on the track!!"abhay said through his clenched teeths."ok ok,why does u always like this?"akash said.abhay looked at the dark night sky.there was a huge cloud at a corner.a storm was about to approach!!after some moments they both smelled some carnivore mountain tigers and rushed to them with their supersonic speed.

part 2 below😳
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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part 2

when piya and her parents were heading towards the hotel by their car the rain had allready started.everyside was covered by darkness.no one cld differentiate btwn sky,hills and forrests.sometimes only a flash of thundering was appearing and clearing the view a lil and vanishing in an instant.the headlights of the car was lightening only a few area after which the peach dark was ready to engulf them."off ho ab yeh barish suru ho gayi!!!pata nahi kab khatm hogi!!"driver said."what happened ramu?u seemed disturbed!"akhilesh asked."arey sahab.barish mein hill area bahut khatarnak ho jata hain!accident bh ho sakta hain!!!"ramu said."oh no!!ye barish abhi suru hona tha!!"aswini asked worriedly.piya was looking outside with amazed eyes."mom!!why does u became panicked so quickly!!just look outside!!the rain looks so beautiful.just enjoy it!!"she said."tu chup ho ja!!pata nahi is andhere mein tujhe kya dikhai de raha hain!!pata nahi kab hotel ayega!!"aswini became worried."mom nothing wld happen,don't worry!!"piya said with assuring voice.suddenly there car stopped."hey what happened?"akhilesh asked."sahab gadi aur nahi ja sakti.barish bahut tej gir rahi hain ku6 saaf dikh nahi raha.barish kam hone tak wait karna parega!!"ramu said."oh no!!!"aswini said with an irritated voice.piya was still looking outside and saw how the drizzling sound of rains turned into thunderstorms.she suddenly felt a rush of xcitement in her nerves and without thinking further she got out of the car pushng the door."hey piya!!!"aswini screamed.piya ignored and forowarded her feet feeling the tender hurt of millions water needles over her body.she lifted her face to feel the shower over her mouth.her whole body got drenched and her long skirt soacked the mud."piya!!what are u doing?"aswini aked loudly."let her go!!don't u know how much she likes rain!!"akhilesh said with a smille.piya felt like heaven and closed her eyes letting the first monson rain taking over her all senses.the cold winds of dehradun was like so much pleased to get a lovely admirer like her.she felt like they were welcoming her.piya lifted her both hands feeling the droplets and suddenly she started jump splashing the waters above like a child.she kicked her legs causing her to splash the mud pools and a beautiful smille appeared in her face."god this girl!!"aswni said looking at her lightly visible feature in darkness."well that's our daughter!!she is a lil bit mad.but the best we cld ever get!!"akhilesh smilled.

after finishing the whole hard of mountain tigers abhay and akash were rushing though the forrest.the rain had allready turned into thunderstorm.abhay didn't know why he was feeling so restless.he never used to feel like this for ages.like something was going to happen.he wondered what exciting was going to happen in this dark stormy night which cld change this never ending darkness of his life.suddenly his feet stopped when he felt a human presence.he was automatically attrackted by the delicious scent.he never felt that much urge for any human.so much appealing blood.his all fiber wished to go and grab that human and took away the last drop of blood!"abhay!!don't be a fool again!!"akash looked at him as he allready sensed the human sent."go!!.."abhay said looking at the direction from where the scent was coming."but!..."akash tried to say."just go!!!!"abhay said with his dreadfull voice turning to him.akash didn't say further looking at his deep red glowing eyes.he knew if abhay was mad he cldn't leave him in single peace.so he quickly got out of the place.abhay rushed madly following the scent.he was being so close time by time.he cldn't controle his thirst anymore.after so many years he was going to drinke a heavenly blood and the feable human was there just for him.he smirked devilishly.suddenly he reached near the high road and quickly hide himself behind the tress.he saw a car standing at at a distant a young girl was playing like a child in the huge rain.yes,that girl!!she was the source of that scent.my my,she was going to be her dinner for tinight.he cldn't c her face as the curled hairlocks were covering her face."hey get inside the car!u will catch the cold!!"another female voice screamed from inside."hang ur fever mom!!it's so magical!!u should feel this!!"the girl screamed.such a beautiful childlike voice.it remonded him of her.no no!!he cldn't be weak.he had to drag her.she was so close to the forrest walls and it won't be difficult for him.he was about to rush to her when suddenly a thunderflash appeared clearing the whole view and the hairlock fell down from her face giveing the full view of her angelic face to him.abhay's feet grounded and suddenly he felt his all powers were draining from him.what was he seeing.was it dream?!or just a mere halutination!!!this girl's face???!!!so similar to her!!!!at that instant abhay forgot that he came to drinke the blood of that girl and her bloodlust was gone.the thunder started to appear continuously and the girl continued to splash water everywhere with her smilling face.abhay crushed on the floor feeling so powerless looking to that girl's joyfull face with his shocked oceanic orbs.

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ so guyzz i stop it hear😆.sorry if the chapp seems bit long😕.i wrote it btwn my other works and in my brks.but hope u like!!!😳
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fab updates.finally abhay saw her...can't wait to read more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great update👏 Finally hero ne apni heroine ko dekh liya...ho skta hai ab bloodlust thoda kam ho jaye...!!!

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