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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
awesomeee and finally he see's her now for her to see him thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello guyzz.hears the next chapp.it is a lil bit slow.but hope u will like😃

pic by me😳
~chapter 5~
----(a monson night deram)----
piya was feeling such a pleasure.after so many times she was enjoying the rain so beautifully.she was wet allover but she didn't cared a bit.theres something majical about rain.the inadverent shower and loud sound of thunder always made her restless.she continued to jump on the wet muddy street and splashed waters from the mud pool kicking her legs.but that cheerfull girl didn't sense the oceanic blue gaze which was watching over her from the dark shades with all amazed,torned and shocked expression.the lightening flashes which were continuously appearing seemed to be laughing over this bloodlusting beast.the most cruel animal of the dence forrest,came to drinke the blood of a mere human and was defeated just taking a little glance to her face!abhay was still bending on her knees on the ground.the same face for which he was craving over three long centuries,again in front of him.all llive,laughing...giggling and enjoying the life.he felt the time arround him was stopped.the sound of drizzling rain,loud thunderstrikes,sound of falling trees and scared animal's all got out of his senses and the only focal point of his dead life surrounded that beautiful face.he cldn't c anything without the girl in front.was she came back?did she at last melt by his pain?!he felt a huge atche in his dead heart!why??was tht for joyness or sadness he cldn't decipher.it felt like his every thinking power was gone.he badly wanted to go in front of her,drag her in the darkest corner of forrest where no one cld bother them and he cld ask her,why she was hear?what did she want?was she really his piya?his only ray of hope in his monster's life who was lost ages ago?!but he was so affraid.yes,abhay raichand,the most powerfull vampire of clan was affraid for the first time in his life.he was affraid if everything was just a dream of his?!!just only a mere illusion and if he went forowrd and everything vanished in front?he didn't even wanted to break his dream!!'what's going on with me!!i am really going crazzy!!!'abhay thought,'it c'nt be true!!i'm just dreaming!!just a mirage of rain!!but why does she feel so real?!like i can feel her even i was not touching her?!'his heart atche again increased.he never felt so vulnerable in his whole lifetime.he slowly got up on his own feet.he had to got out of the place,otherwise he wld really drove into unending crazzyness!but he didn't understand why he was uneable to moove his feet a single inch!what was resisting him?why was he still looking at her face like she was a magnet to him?he forcefully sqweezed his eyes shut and looked away."piya for the last time i'm warning u to come inside.otherwise..."the female voice from inside the car said with an angry tone."ok mom coming!!!"the girl stopped her playing with waters and said in her cute tone but this time a lil bit sadenned.but this little conversation was enough to open abhay's eyes and looked back to her with another dpze of shocks.'piya!!!her name is piya??!!!'he thought with all startled mind.before he cld even react the girl rushed towards the car followed by another loud angry voice of her mother.as the rain was slowed enough,the driver quickly started.after hearing the sound of engine abhay got out of his transe.what!!??she was leaving?!no way,not before giving ans to his question.a certain madness rushed in his vanes and he rushed towards the car.the car's speed was nothing compared to his supersonic speed.but when he was just about to reach near car two fig flashed in between car and him which resisted his feet.'damn!!!'abhay thought in irritating face."what are u two doing hear?"abhay asked with his furious gaze."we are doing our duties!!"the strangers said in a hard tone.one of them said,"we are the protectors of humans of this area,whenever u'll try to harm any humans we'll stop u!!".abhay's voice became mad as he saw the car's light faded in the distant."yes,how can i forget about u all who always stick their nose in my way!but to ur kind information i was not going to kill any human!!i was following the car cause..."his voice was interrupted by there quite laugh."just stop making excuses abhay!!we all know all of ur clan members had left to feed from humans except u!!so,u don't believe u a little."one of them said.abhyay's eyes had again started to become mad."listen,i don't have time to stay hear and argue with u!i have to follow the car now!!let me go or else y know what i can do with u two good for nothing!!!"he almost growled and his eyes were looking deadly."not so easy u bloodsucker!!"one of them said and suddenly with a huge jerk those two changed into two huge wolved.there eyes were all glowing deathly and saliva was dripping fom there open mouth and fangs."stinky dirty dogs!!!"abhay said and jumped towards them with a growl.those two wolves also attacked on him.a huge sound of collision spreaded at some distant.

"god piya!!look what have u done to ur new dress!!!"aswini said looking at the pair of long skirt and top she was holding.it was the same dress which she was wearing outside at rain.they had reached to the hotel quite a long time ago.her cloth was dried but some mark of muds were still at the dress which made it worse."what mom!!iit's quite good!"piya said."no way piya!!u r not gonna wear it again!!!"aswni said quite loudly."tab main is dress ka kya karu isse to aise hi fek nahi sakti.."piya's face became thoughtfull,and suddenly her eyes glew,"mom why don't we give this to misel!!she wld be very happy!!"she said.aswni also smilled,"ya,good idea!!poor girl!!bechari ke paas pahan ne ke liye a66e kapre bh nahi hain!!!she wld be very happy!!!"she said.after checking out inside the hostell they met a female servant who was alomost as same age as piya.she was a very cute and bubly girl with curly hair just like piya.it didn't took time for friendly and talkative piya to mix with that girl.she came to know her name was misel and she lives with her lil brother.both were parentless and belong to a very poor familly.she didn't had to mention it though as her dress were very old and torned.piya and aswini felt very bad for her.she was telling them that she had the invitation for a party tonight but she cldn't go as she didn't had anything to wear!!she cldn't buy anything as she spend her all money in her brother's scholl fess.so piya decided to give her the dress.although it had some little marks but she cld wear it easilly for party.they called misel and gave her the dress.she was all amazed at first and didn't wanted to accept that.but aswini and piya insisted."u want to go to party na!!then take it!!just think it is a lil gift from ur sister!!"piya said and misel cldn't deny it again.her face got the glow."thax piya mam!!thnk u so much!!!may god always be with u all.now i'll straightly go to the party from hear."she quickly rushed out of the room.piya felt so happy looking at her smilling face.

abhay jumped inside the boundery of resort so swiftly without making a sound.he had lost so much time in fighting with those werewolves.he had such difficulties to drove them away although he badly wanted to finish both of that dogs.but he didn't want to create havoc btwn werewolves and vampires again.his concentration was totally fixed to the iroma of that girl after following which he came hear.he was sure the girl was there!!he cldn't miss that strong scent of that girl named piya!!same face and same name also!!the name by which he called her.how cld so much co-incidence be possible?!suddenly he got the strong scent.she was nearby.he rushed and at a distant saw a girl coming out of the building.he quickly hided himself.the girl was wearing that same dress.she was turning back to him.so he cldn't c her face.only her curls were visible.abhay's eyes caught the excitement.that girl back there also had curly hairs.but as soon as the girl turned her face his all hope gotlost.whose she?she was not the girl!!but the fragrance was coming from her.how??!!!after looking at her with shocked face for a while abhay's eyes again became lifeless.so it was all a dream.he imagined this girl as her piya!!but why did she seemed so real?why..?was he missing something!!he tried to concentrate on the thoughts of the girl with vampires mind reading eabillity.but she cldn't detect any further as her mind was only filled up with the exciting party she was goibg.he gave up another sigh!!what was he hopping for?so many ages had been passed and did he still think that somethings gonna happen.he again lost in the shadow's and rushed soundlessly to the boundery wall.even misel cldn't detect him while he was passing by.also she was all excited about the party.god piya mam was so kind!!she gave her this beautifuk dress.she was a swetheart and so cute.it felt like her fragrance was still attatching this cloth.

just a small fragrance changed everything.if piya didn't gave misel her cloths and by which her fragranse got arround misel,the situation wld be something else.although the rain was stopped,a small lightening appeared at the corner of still cloud covered sky.like, the god of fate smilled towards the torned and broken monster storming inside the darkness of the forrest leaving the light behind.

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ so guyzz pls reply soon😃
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
omg i'm first
Btw lovely photo 😳
Coming to the update,it was beautiful.aweful also...
Abhay saw her..but damn he misel...he misunderstood for her..i hope he will soon realize that it was not his dream
.and they will come face to face
Edited by ririrararaatry - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
god u are making me more anre and more addictive to this ff...plzzz update soon it was a great update poor abhay just missed a bit of chance to see piya again...<3 it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
oh poor abhay I feel sooo sorry for him
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
gr8 update👏
oh Abhay misunderstood Pia...hope he realize it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
what is going to happend next in your story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Nice .
Waiting for the next update .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww lovely update two part...itsvsuperb...waiting for Abhiya face to face meeting
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh no he thinks it is his halucination.😔 God when will they meet? pls continue soon gr8 update👏

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