Hoping for A Little Love-One Shots!!Pg-33-JAN 31st-LAST PART UPDATED!! - Page 25

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

A superb royal ending to a superb royal tale!👏😊😊

You've done a very beautiful job Anita, blending in their love story amidst their mutual love of paintings. It was so gracefully executed! You did not need to have one graphic scene and yet the passion and intensity of their love just leaps up from the page! And that is saying something!!👏

Thanks a lot Tora! Writing Abhay and Piya side by side creates enough magic, and makes one feel the eternal love these two characters shared. I am happy that I was able to present them in a different setting.😊

So Piya/Piyali was actually a princess in disguise! It says a lot about her great character when you realize that she had even taken up the guise of a maid to ensure her sister's happiness! That was so noble and selfless of her! An act of a true princess!⭐️

I am SO glad to know that you understood Piya.😃 It's the work of a ruler to make sure that the people around them are happy.

What Princess would Piya be if she could not do anything to make sure that her own sister was happy or not? 😳

And the fact that Abhay did accept his love for her before he even knew that she wasn't a maid tells volumes about the truth and depth of his love for her. 😊

One of my most favourite parts of the story is how you blended in the title of the thread "Hoping For a little love" into the story. The way you made it into a question coming from Abhay was so lovely⭐️. And equally beautiful was Piya's reply. Loved it.

I almost thought that nobody would even notice it, but you did. Thank you for that.😃

I like blending the title of my stories in my updates, and when there was this golden chance of using the thread's title as well, I just couldn't let it slip. 😳

The part where they change the portrait of a-not-so-happy Abhay and Piya into a grinning-at-each-other one was so significant.

The sort-of-epilogue at the end was sweetly done, and I loved, loved, loved the last line. It was so perfect, so aptly in line with the story!

I was quite skeptical about this part, but the last line happens to be a line I love a lot. Thank you for loving it.😃

Great job, Anita. 👏Thanks for this story filled with colors and love😳

Originally posted by: Kit_Kat

omg such an intense beautiful story...
Abhiya reunited and that epilogue was loved it

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

wow...awesome ending...Piya was a princess herself...soo cool...

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

fabulous update dear absolutely amazing story ending loved everything abhay was truly awesome piya is damn lucky to have him !!🤗

Originally posted by: .Rhythm.

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It was an awesome story Ani. Loved it totally.

The way u hav described the bonding between Haseena and Abhay is really gud.

Everything was solved between Abhay and his father. Loved there convo. Abhay teased his Father.

Thanks! Glad to know that you loved it.😊

Piya and Abhay had exchanged rings matching each other's eye color.

Abhay found a good way to convince Vishesh and Mishri.

Mewar's planning is explained really well. For a moment I felt like I was reading the town planning from harappan civilization. 👏

Really? THANK U baby! 😃

Abhay looked like the prince of Piya's dreams, mounted on a white horse. I guess Abhay wore a white tunic purposely, so that Piya wud imagine herself to be in her dreamland , and wud go with him easily, back to the palace.😉 😆

Maybe.😆

Abhay knew Piya's weak point and easily persuaded her to go the palace with him.

Abhay's lie made Piya fume with anger. How cud he lie to her so easily?After all no Rajput lies in front of Lord Shiva. 😉

Poor Abhay . Piya didn't see that it was Abhay who was hurt.

Abhay finally voiced out his feelings for Piya.

You didn't miss it this time also, right? U mentioned the thread's name in ur story. U r really gud at this dear.

I love doing that. And great to see you noticing it every time.😊

Abhay kept his words abt changing things. This was surprising that Piya was a princess.

Abhay made everything perfect. He matched himself with Piya and mish to Sid.

They even made the painting together.

The ending part was perfect. Piya and Sid became best frnds.

Abhay's son loved to paint his nose more than the canvas.

Yeshh😆

The Last Line was totally lovely and perfect.

Loved the story.

Continue writing this type of the work. 😊

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Beautiful story Loved it

Originally posted by: cuteariya

fantastic amazing update
wow abhay's dad came to talk to him 😃
first time after his mom death abhay felt his dad pain 😭
abhay just forgave his dad after his true confession 😃

Yeah. A true confession does have the power to heal wounds. Isn't it? 😊

yippee abhay went to find pia 😃
Vishesh wanted to go find pia but abhay didn't let him he was jealous of Vishesh 😆

What can be done? Abhay had no idea what vishesh and Piya actually were. So, yeah.😆

pia was so surprised to see abhay there 😲
loll abhay had to trick pia to bring her back 😉
pia was mad at abhay for lying her abt mishri
finally abhay confess his feeling to pia 😃
uff but pia refused abhay bcoz according to her abhay have to get married with mishri
OMG abhay found the truth that pia is mishri & vishesh sister 😲
wow abhay convince pia that mishri & Siddharth r in love
yippee abhiya got married & became king & queen 🥳
loll abhay & mishri still were jealous with each other bcoz both wanted to be pia's favorite 🤣
poor Siddharth had to guard pia's canvas color & all stuff bcoz it was danger from abhay & mishri 🤣
awe abhiya got son prabat is just like his parents so cute 😃
it was lovely to read dear 🤗
hope to get more from u 😃

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Fantabulous👏 everything abt dis part is heart melting . Hope u write some more of dis kind😆

Originally posted by: ILoveToRead.

It is indescribable the way you write... incredibly pleasant I would say :)

Thanks! 😃

Amazing update! Do write more dear :)

Eagerly waiting to read more from you 😳

Thanks for pm indu di 😃