Originally posted by: Bleak_House
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well...that was damn damn Good!!
Seriously the update had so many layers that once u peep layer after layer keeps unfolding n in every fold theres so many mysteries, n hidden facts that one feels amazed! And thats exactly my state!
Every line has soo many multi faceted meanings...the depth n whether the argument of whz better Holmer or Miss marple..or whch is greater TLOFTR or Potter, that the reader simply feels spellbound by its high altitude drama n revels in the intellectual entertainment of its marvelously used plots⭐️ presented wth such philosophical meanings in many of the gripping moment where the leads encounter! Incredibly awesuumm!!! 👏
sorry i knw ths comment is nt a regular one n may b kind of weird..bt i dnt knw hw else to convey my reflectns on such magnificient piece of work!! I dnt have the capability i guess...
So ...sorry!
P.s. Bien cuit means well done!!😊
and ya ofcourse i got it! I mean in previous updat when abhay said 'i missed it' it was obviously clear that he missed her question sessions😉
plus the part where pia reaches the edge of the cliff reminds me of that memorable scene in poco's ff where abhay saves her n atlast confessed to her!
P.p.s so many characters vented out their frustration in dis update that one wonder when it will just reach its scorching point! And ya one also wonders if the writer had let out her angst thru pia..when she lashes at abhay! You knw..its just my guess! Sorry if i hav imagind too much! Pardon! Bt ya the scene was otherwise brilliantly written n undoubtedly the show stealer of ths update!!👏😉
i think i dnt need to tell hw much am loving dis abhay!! 😳😉 and all angry pia is sure a delight to see..for a change.😉
And i guess who pushed her was maithtli! It wasnt abhay wthout doubt if the whole thng is nt any kinda dream n happening in reality! Nope nt abhay! I knew it the moment he calld pia!becy dats just nt abhay! Knwng abhay Wonder hw pia didnt get it??!! 😳 mayb becz love is blind n she was yearning to hear the same!!
So lets see..whats ur plan..😛
and though all the lines i lovd bt amng them my most fav8 lines were--
'I don't know,' said Piya, sounding
unsure. 'Well, yeah... Abhay's being
nice, and well...friendly, and so I
thought, why not enjoy it while it
lasts? Who knows when he might
decide he's had enough of me...' 👏very very good n well written line!!
and anther-
Piya scowled. 'Because you're just
like her. All closed up and secretive,
and neither of you wants me to ask a
single thing, which is of course none
of my business, but of course
whatever I do is yours!' I second her! there are ppl like that infct many!😉
Abhay exhaled. 'Look, Piya- you have
to respect that some people don't
like to talk about their personal
matters. Alina probably didn't mean
it- more likely, she was being aloof
so you wouldn't ask any further questions.' again i completely lovd these lines!!❤️
Yes, because that worked so well on
you when I did it,' muttered Abhay. What a line!! N he is so ryt!!😆
And simply loved those parts where abhay digestd the slap n again her hot temper while in car! And knwng abhay's temper graph its nt hard to tell wat Amount of strength must have he applied to bear it!!!(nt car scene bt the slap i mean!)
it just tells u why abhay matters so much to pia, n what pia means to abhay!simply made 4 eachother!
thanks for pm n u will update quicker anyway..😆😛
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