FF- Time And Again- Book 2- Book 3- Link added - Page 65

Originally posted by: Asyalover

oh wow...he remember's her birthday.

Yes he does :P

Originally posted by: captainplus

beautiful update !

loved it !

piya saved abhay ! yay !

waitng egarly 2 kno wat abhay plans 4r her b'day ...

tax 4r the pm

Thanks a lot for liking and commenting

Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani

Lovely upd shreyu😃the Sid alina dishu scene was nice 😆Piya healed abhay and abhay don't even know😲and damn haseena , what a wrong timing😡abhay reaction was really nice seeing piya in his bedroom in middle of night😆I hope gets to know that piya healed him . And ahh I m sure sasurji will soon love his Bahu as much as haseena does😆

Upd soon please !😳

No he doesnt know...yet. :P
idk about loving but he would approve I guess :P

Originally posted by: sukugeny

awesome update shreya...pllz dnt angry me...m busy re...bt cmnting na..ya late hun...bt still...i know ..u wont...hope!!!

cmng to update...soulmates ise hi kehte hai na...pia n abhay...how can pia know something happen to abhay n immediately gng to see him...n tht ws real...such a nice scene with beautifully written.

then hasina aunty n moon uncle...u r keeping their char.like in serial..so much straight forword n i like them..hope moon uncle too likes pia like hasina aunty does..

now abhiya scene...pia's blood healing abhay...kuch hoga kya ab..loved the way u written when abhay woke up n pia near him..n the blood...
how badly i wanted tht kisss n pura hota to...nice dark scene...emotions..loved it.

now its pia's birthday...no wishing any big party..jst ek abhiya scene...surely na?

shreya-tu likhti bda stylish hai...sachhi!!!
I love all writers of this forum a lot.

jaldi update kr hn..plz !!!

No i am not angry at all and its nice of u to comment :)
yes u will get abhiya scene n I write stylish? That's a new one 😲

Originally posted by: bellaaa

azmaing update ... feel sad for abhay when will he knows that piya gain her memories... loved the healing scene ... so piya didnt told abhay truth ... hope he will get to know about this ... cont soon

He will find out definitely :)

Originally posted by: FeistySoul

Shreya!

Catching up with this now.

You are undoubtedly amazing girl!

I mean wow!

Still I have one small confusion.

Was there actually a Piyali in Abhay's past.

I mean other than Piya send back to be Piyali?

Was there a person then?

Seeing u after long time Nidha..hope you are well 🤗

Initially, no there was not, but since they changed time so now she is there :P Piyali I mean.

comments updated on pg 93 😆

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

shreya!! you'r one naughty girl!! 😛
Muy bonito means 'very beautiful!' 😳

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you know what? You are danger! Yes!danger! Becz if sumday i stop writing here..leave IF...even then i guess i will have to cum here to cment in ur updates! The sheer beauty of ur writing will drag me here..! Agree or nt..thats the truth!!
So this update once again took me high ...onto a diffrnt level of fantasy..romance..and wonderful woving of varied emotions! You are simply fantastic shreya!!👏

nw where do i start? Becz each n every line i loved! Hard to mentn just few..
Mm..ok starting 4m the start..pia's dream-it was short bt powerful n the descriptn was strng enough to cnvince us of its deep impact on pia! So deep that she had to decide to go n see for herslf..tht if abhay was ok!

Haseena-pia convo was as usual very wonderfully..n tactfully written! 👏 their exchange of words..unseen worry...haseena smiling in relief..all the smallest things were very well depicted!👍🏼 infact where chand cums to knw abt pia's blood..his reactn n haseena's respnc to that..n every single thing was just amazing!!👏
The scene were pia holds her hand onto the wound..n its slowly disappears replacing wth normal skin texture..that part was written extremely well!! The transformation was described so fantastically..wth finest details..that it became 1of the best parts of the update!!! 👍🏼 Scientifically beautiful!!! ⭐️ bt it dsnt end here..the beauty of the update i mean..😉 the moment abhay gets up ...his first instinct as a vampire to kill...then corner her for answers..then losing..the almost kiss...each n every word was a delight!! ⭐️ I cherished reading it dear.❤️
poor thing..inspite of that magnetic moment btw her n abhay, pia thot he was playing to bring out the truth!! Whereas abhay was equally or to say better, tremendously effctd by her presence n proximity! And his latter thot shows that he lost his control n was in a mood for sumthng that was unlike the stay away abhay we usually see! Instead He was irritated for being interruptd! and we find ourselves wondering hw it would hav been if he wasnt intervened!?!
Well..anyway mayb what pia thot was ryt..mayb he was playing..mayb he wasnt.. Bt the scene sure manages to give us the finest, raw n intense feel of their complex bt epic love !! 😳 Beauty !!!⭐️
bt pia is hurt and the timing so so bad! Her b'day! bt i think i heard abhay say he will make up...n am sure he will!😉

nw alina part-
hm..i really dnt knw..wat awaits nw! Am confused! 😕 So theres no other way than waiting i guess! And abt the depictn..well the invisible unfriendly air btw Miss.gupta n sidh was quite enjoyable! Sidh's irritatd reactn was 2good to read!😆
and ya the flashback..where chand says tht he cannt babysit abhay n later tells tht its he to blame for abhay's cnditn, those were two significant parts, becz it beautifully draws out the care n love of a father tht chand always so brilliantly tries to hide! Bravo!! ⭐️
n nw what else do i mentn? I have to mentn the entire updat then...!!
So would just say that you are truly gifted! And we are fortunate to have u here!!
and sorry! Am always late.
bt anyway tell me why arent u updating??! I may be anywhere..bt i always keep tab on ur works u know?😉 and what i see is you are taking too much time to update! And am impatient !!😛 so please whenever u find time(i knw u hav ur studies n all.) try updating..😳
nw carry soon! And thanks for ths wonderfully wonderful update!🤗

Oh gosh thank you so much...don't you dare leave IF...i will do whatever it takes to get u back otherwise! 😡
I'm really glad you liked those points you mentioned, warna idk if many noticed...but you did so kudos! :D

As for update... I finished my update 5 days back and my net has been cut so dunno Indu.. My updating shedule has gone haywire thanks to my net :(

Thanks a lot for commenting...it always means the world to me 🤗