FF- Time And Again- Book 2- Book 3- Link added - Page 37

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

I am first, i am first 🥳

hmm... this seemed to be a mild update as compared to the previous mind games you have played. so now i m double alarmed for the next one 😆

aww... poor pia... i feel so bad for her... and abhay is going mad trying to understand pia, thats superb. 😆

hmm... so abhay saw a slight likeness between pia and piyali, hmm.. i wonder if he wud be able to piece one and one to make two. 😕 but why did he still kept her viel, is it because somewhere deep down, he still wanted to be proven wrong about his last impression of piyali?

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

Here I am before u started replying to the comments 😆 The biggest mystery of the FF was, is n will always be Reina 😛 At one moment I am 200% certain that it is Alina n then my mind wavers to Ms. Gupta Donno but instincts say its Alina 😕 Ugh! I hate u for troubling my poor brain 😭 Glad Abhay could finally break the mental shield n well isn''t it back to square one for darling vampy? 😉 I loved it when Reina reminded Abhay tat it was he who messed with Pia's brain 😆 Abhay never learns does he? 😛 The more he tries to control the more edgy she gets 🤣 Now tat Pia messed with the past Piyali has become a part of Abhay's past n we never know when history will repeat again I liked Alina n Dishu's bonding but I would like to know how they got to know each other 😊 I can understand Alina's feelings here of wanting to find a place for herself I guess I can relate to that. Dishu seems to have understood Abhiya better than themselves 😆 Now Sid is slowly showing signs of vampirism 😲 Well his thirst seemed to hint tat 😕 He seems to feel something for Alina but Metz' memories wont let him I hope he sets things right n atones for all the wrong doings of the past Anyways fab update as usual 👏

Originally posted by: ...Nidhi...

Reserved!
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Nice chapter. Alina and Ms Gupta are frnds?? Who is this "librarian" really?? Everybody seems to like her!! Are all the women in this ff mysterious?? And wat's going on in the Khurana family?
Sid's getting back to his vampire self, isn't he? Abt Abhay and Piya, I don't know wat to say.
Can't think of anything else rt nw.
Love.
~Nidhi. :)

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

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I liked AbhIya part a lot. both their emotions, concerns and emotional conflicts were written beautifully. So Abhay kept Piyali's veil, it means deep down he wanted to disbelieve Piyali ever betrayed her. so he did notice the similarities Pia and Piyali had. good. even siddarth is thinking about pyali. i always knew changing the past would matter a lot in present offcourse and make differences in Abhay Siddarth relationship. lets see how it progress. and haww you added beautiful stranger as a book 😲 😆

thanks for that 🤗

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

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shreya i have told it a number of times bt i wud like to repeate it again, that weaving a concept tht deals wth time is nt an easy thing yet you are doing it the best way tht one cud ever do! 👏 becz so many thngs the writer has to keep in mind..
i knw hw difficlt it is!
very very commendable shreya! 👏

as usual u spare no words to praise me and I am humbled by it😳
As you know in every writer's work the protaganists have certain behavioural qualities whch bears the dinstinctive style of their creators! Same is wth this abhay pia! They are the unfailing perfct picture of our same old abhay n pia yet they bear ths unavoidable stern,fierce n stubborn quality that i always njoy to read! Yes they did hav these in the show too bt here these qualities shine in their own special color! ⭐️

lol mayb becoz that is a part of me😛
the entire update was brilliant in terms of creative n intellignt weaving of pieces togethr like always! No qualms there! 👍🏼
the part tht i lovd mst was pia-abhay portion. The part where pia sudnly bursts out n then feels imensly guilty on doing so. Like always the tiny glint of uniqueness that presented these emotional facets were marked wth the special wonderful style of urs!! 👏

and if we go a step back..then the part where abhay gets to know about pia and Reina behind it..his fierce outpour was again damn good to read!!

And again the moment where after lashing at him the way pia feels shocked on her own behaviour and in return abhay reacting all soft n kind to her..again in one hand it brings out the typical behavioural pattern of hurting the ones we love in return of hurt...and also in other hand..a kind softhearted caring abhay..who though is a moody reckless angry vampire as per his changing moods or demand of time yet is a different invaluable creature who cares nothing more then her well being wen it comes to pia!!! And wat a wonderful way had U brought this out!! Bravo!! 👏

ya both abhay n piya did a lot of lashing out in the last chapter na?😛

Now moving to Alina..she is a mystery!! I mean nt abt her role here but about her innermost being..deep down she has a hollow feeling..dosnt matter wat her role is here..or wat she is upto..or what she seems frm outside...a closer look...tells a diffrnt tale..tale of unwanted..n..unrecognised..unrecognisd becoz her family has failed to look into her heart..the real her that hides or resides deep inside! (or am i thinking too far?)

EXACTLY. You have described Alina's situation perfectly.👏

I felt great pain..thats all i can say..i hope she finds a TRUE friend...

And Miss gupta ..is nt just alina's friend n well wisher bt i feel she knows much more about the whole buisness..or again is it me..thinking too much?? 😕

Miss Gupta is Alina's best friend and that's all I will say for sure.😃

And abt sidh well...he is human n so he is diffrnt now..his perspective has change..mayb fr the time being by still its changd...and so has his aims...now the best thing is to wait n see where all these pieces leads us to...!!

All in all anther massive overwhelming update!! The fine plotting..interesting twists never fail to amaze me!!

Go on...am waiting fr the next..!

And thanx fr the knock..or else wud have missed comnting..😉

ok now update..!! n ya thanks fr pm! 🤗

yes mam😛

Originally posted by: devilish-grin

Awesum part.
hope sid regains abhay trust though its hell lot dificult.

Originally posted by: --Aaliyah--

Lovely Update !👏
Reina surely gets my head whirl around .She is so confusing .
The outburst of Pia really must have got Abhay totally shocked .
These lines 'Just because you have a preconceived prejudice against everyone doesn't mean I should follow the same ''Of course you're sorry, one of your methods to break me has gone, hasn't she?' I was too really shocked when I read them . Poor Abhay must have felt so bad . But in a way he deserves it .
After all those stay away missions and his "I don't love you " attitude had broken Pia and those wounds definitely need sometime to heal .
Now, it would be real fun to read how Abhay will try to protect her from Sid and get close to her .

Hmm, yeah I hope it'll be fun😆
Loved Miss Gupta and Alina's convo . 😳
OK , I have so many lines that I loved in this update . 😆
'I believe it's five to eleven,' answered Alina frostily. 'Have the clocks stopped working, brother dearest?'This really cracked me up .🤣 Because whenever I think of Alina I see a nerdy girl who is scared of the world but now this Alina , what to say ? 😉

my alina's not a scaredy cat for sure😉
Sid is indeed feeling very guilty for doing that to Piyali .
Hope he sets everything right soon .
Btw , my first comment here . Sorry didn't do it earlier because I was a silent reader . 😳
I truly love your FF's a lot .😃
Thanks for the pm and continue soon .

thanks for commenting...i had no idea *hugs*

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

awsum update

is alina really reina??i am still confused about that. is Ms.gupta also a supernatural person?

for once i a m happy that abhay is working hard to stay near pia. reina isn't leaving a single chance of mocking him or trying to put obstacles in his way.

feel bad for alina...here family is pathetic but i loved the conversation b/w alina and ms.gupta. dishu seems like a nice person and i liked how she was listening her and trying to divert her mind from her problems by talking to her.

brilliantly written.

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

nice so now Abhay is running after Pia 😆 these 2 r impossible and Abhay has kept Piyali's veil with him not bad Alina's reply back to her family was good and Sid trying to stay away from her well keep trying though it's not going to work 😆