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Posted: 12 years ago
Fab update shreya so i guess we are going to see a beautiful friendship again between sid n pia n for abhay pia they are best as lovers but i'm looking forward to know what u have planned for them n i'm loving reina , is it sid who came at the end n said he will drop pia
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Posted: 12 years ago
Comment updated on pg 43. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

Another beautiful...gripping update!!! 👏
shreya honestly i am loss of words..really sorry bt i just donno how to praise you..👏
the update is simply buyont, powerful and again gave me the delight similar to watching visual content. 😳 The chess part specially, the black n white symbolizing gud n evil was totally marvellous! Too gud!!⭐️

And the college part.. Alina sings.. 'jor ka jhatka..' really the song fits the situation so well..specialy Alina..suits in her lips perfctly..the wittyness of it went well wth her.
Then the way abhay got furious..his tone,anger his worry everything was perfect. And oh i loved the line '..she was giving him choice to move away? ' and 'no i dnt want us to be strangers' that were unlike the abhay we usually see.. Just awesum shreya..awesum!! The abhay who was trying to make pia undrstand they cnt be together and wantd her to listen to him ,got wat he wantd (well he thinks so bt really..did he ? 😉 ) bt strangely it didnt give hm peace neither happiness that he thot he wud.

You have described abhay's cndition really well!! You always do actualy thats why i love reading them.😳 😉

And ya 1thing i shud mention abhay at once knew alina was reina (whereas aftr reading a gud deal of updats we didnt! 😆 ) and he knew she was using pia bt how he had no clue bt soon he wil i suppose as its abhay..hs brain works faster. 😉 and i liked how he at once guessed it, if he hadnt.. well ..then..abhay looking a fool dsnt sound great..!

So sidh remembrs n misses pia! Bt he wants her to help hm get hs family bck! Hm..is hs intentins genuine? I wonder.. 😕 maybe..
Inspite of the game alina is playing here, i like her. The way she acts wenever pia say how she did wrng wth abhay n he just loves becz of the similar face ...moments like that the amused n impossible..expressions alina gives are too gud!!!

Maybe pia is behaving like an idiot nw bt it is necessary..for her..maybe for abhay too. He wil knw wat he xctly wants,n nt wat he thinks he want..like Mrs.gupta said..
And mre than that this tryng to be friends thing,4m pia wil alter the situatins n bring the best..side of abhay..that wil cnvince pia..and whch wil b a great read too! 😉

And lastly the women in darkness in the chessboard is Pia i suppose if am nt wrng..
And haseena went to meet sidh..hm..it dsnt mattr..her trusting hm i mean, only if sidh really means wat he says..!

and the persn waiting for pia is it abhay or arnab?! Nt sure..


All in all a superb update!!! Bravo!! 👏 Carry soon dear. 🤗

P.s. Thank god! Am on time! 😆 😛



Your praise renders me speechless :P I am glad you like Alina here. :D
Does Abhay really know? Did he really guess? All I will say is, don't trust me till I make Reina say herself who she is. Abhay isn't a fool, but he does tend to jump to conclusions...it was there in the show as well.
As for Sid, maybe , maybe not... Let's see what he really wants.
And yes, Abhay's queen is Piya obviously...and since in chess queens move all over the board I thought I suited her. :P

Oh and... It's Miss Gupta, not Mrs. :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
@shreya are you really asking me nt to trust you? [:|) Or r u simply trying to cnfuse me??🤔 well lets see..😉
Ya..see i typd it Miss n then i thot am mistaking n retypd it as Mrs..whch ws an actual mistake.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

@shreya are you really asking me nt to trust you? [:|) Or r u simply trying to cnfuse me??🤔 well lets see..😉
Ya..see i typd it Miss n then i thot am mistaking n retypd it as Mrs..whch ws an actual mistake.😆



both. :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part.
I just loved it.
I feel really bad for Piya.
Plz unite ABHIYA.
What is Sid upto?
Reina is a big mystery.What does she want?
This ff is so interesting.
Plz update the next part as soon as possible.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LilyOrchid

Awesome I was waiting for this update n updt sooner



Thanks a lot


Originally posted by: Asyalover

loved the whole updt aswel as abhiya and sidya meet too...curious about the person offering piya a ride back home?...cont soon...thanks 4 pm


Thanks a lot..you will see the person soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Nidhi...

I wonder if u r ever going to clear Reina's true identity... It's one part of the story where my mind goes all blank, making all possible theories but then it all comes to where it started. At one point I thought Alina IS Reina finally! But later it seemed she's just her accomplice... It's so confusing!! Then there's the librarian, Ms. Gupta... is she going to play some greater part in the story?? She's not just another understanding human, is she?
Abhay and Piya, well they r simply being their usual self so I won't worry abt them rt nw. But what was the dream abt? Is Reina trying to make him realize that Piya and Piyali r the same??
Abt Sid, when will he realize Piya's identity?
Can't think of anything else.
Will wait for the next update. Till then, take care. :) :)



Haha, yes I will reveal Reina's identity..like maybe when I end the story😉
Ms Gupta will play a major part, but is she really human? So far, she does seem human.
You will see the sumbolism of the dream soon😳
And Sid, he has time to realise her identity😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Janani24

gud one👏 guess abhay will be mad as pia is gonna work for sid



Yeah he will be😆

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
what is going to happend next in your story
thanks for the pm
happy easter


happy belated Easter to you too Alicia...hope u had a great one😳

Originally posted by: SheDevil

Awesome update.shreya
Abhiya r really stupid . They indeed.deserve each other
Story is getting interesting day by day
Plz cont...




Thanks Shrish. ya AbhIya do act stupid at times😆

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Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Thanks a lot for an update so soon Shreya. This one will always be one of my favourites as you started with a logical track of how the story should have gone. So are Reina and Alina one and the same (I still wish they are different). I really want to know who Reina is and what she wants) Its nice for a change to see Alina teasing Abhay. I was waiting for this moment of face to face of Abhiya - Their reactions and I really enjoyed reading that. And the way you write, it is damn good that I forget I am reading something and I feel like I am living through it seeing them in front of my eyes, feeling their feelings.

All my audio/video and kinesthic senses are brought to life :D
Thank you very much for this one, Shreya



Are Reina/Alina really the same? It's Abhay who thinks they are.
Thanks very much for liking it- and responding to your other comment, I am sorry to say Piya will probably end up as a vampire here. That's one thing I won't change😛 However, I still won't say who Reina really is😆

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Posted by: Susmitasumi96

5 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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