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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: captainplus

awesome update ⭐️⭐️⭐️

lo❤️ed it !


so finally piya is bak 😊

n none out of abhay , sid or metz knos tat piya is piyali

waiting 2 c abhay's reactions on knoing this


can't wait 4r the next chappy


y did u stopat this point 😡😡😡


thanks 4r the pm 😊



Thanks. Abhay will know eventually.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiyaDewaani

Awesome update...
Poor Piyali...she really loves Abhayendra...But Abhayendra misunderstans her...feel bad for Piyali..
Thanks for the PM.



Thanks. Yes Piya is going through a lot now :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

awesome update shreya👏 Phew finally the past is over...very well written😳
hawww...poor pia has to suffer so much😭 abhay misunderstood her😭



Hmm yes, poor abhiya :P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

absolutely brilliant update shreya. and if abhayendra just assumed that piyali betrayed him out of the blue, then pia really needs to kick abhay hard for being so thick headed😡she saved him, risked her life so many times, ran so many risks and he just assumed that she betrayed him to help siddharth. does he even has a brain. if she would have liked siddhartha, then why would she have helped him be with maithili?

and and and what did haseena mean by thinking one week is over. one week of what? am i missing something, or is my guess somewhere close to the truth




Oh wow. A good comment finally, that's close.
Abhay did not just assume Piyali betrayed him. I'll be explaining this is the next chapter.
Haseena knows Pia will be coming back in a week, na, so that's why. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devilish-grin

dat was a mind blowing update shreeya.bt abhay misunderstood piya.hope this get clear soon.



Oh abhi i am not finishing the FF. Chill Abhay will get to know ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: samwllms

thank u...thnk u...thnk u...thnk u...thnk u...thnk u...thnk u...thank u...thnk u...thnk u...thnk u...thnk u...thnk u...thnk u...thank u...thnk u...thnk u...thnk u...thnk u...thnk u...thnk u... for this lovely updt...pls updt nxt prt soon...i m waiting for abhiya to be together at present...cnt see pia in so much pain...pls updt soon...:-)



Thanks... But Abhiya not getting together so soon :P Yeah they'll meet real soon though.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
what is going to happend next in your story
thanks for the pm



To know, stay tuned :)
Thank you.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

I still wonder why Reina send Piya to Abhay's past.
I'm a bit confused about Reina's purpose and the past.
So this is what exactly happened in the past and Pia is Piyali's lookalike,not Maithili's?
This part was the climax of past and I loved it to the core.
Plz answer my queries soon.
Take care



Next chapter will be the reason why she sent Pia. Well part of it anyway.
No Pia is Maithali's lookalike for sure. She just got thrown into the past, which would change a few things in the future.
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Posted: 12 years ago
di pls pm me when u update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

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tum kabhi baj nahi aogi!!! Dedicate kia woh bhi bbb ke sath!!! 😳 😆😛bt thanks a lot dear 🤗
anyway bt beg me 4 wat? Unresing my cment?😕

and ya dis 1 is really a long long updat! So will read wen i have enough time in hand and then cment!
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First of all before i say wether its gud i like to say this chapter was very well written ,well woven n intelligently plotted. 👏The manner in which u executed the scenes were excellent!!⭐️
The scene begins with pia asking maithli to escape. Frm that to the very last part it was all quite enthralling read.
👏I will divide this update into few parts. That is action, emotion, past n present collision.

Action- shreya this action was the best action sequence i have read till date. Except ayesha, for an action scene i have hardly seen such throw of words!! The blows pia was escaping, i felt them!! Bravo dear!!!👏 U are tooo good!!!


Emotion-abhayendra,maithli,pia n sidhharth each one of them acted exactly the way they shud! Not more nt less..splendid!!
Now about the past present section-
i really feel bad for pia! But i cnt blame abhay! Nt becoz he is abhay bt becoz he is in a wrong illusion! He is nt able to see the right picture. Anybody wud mre or less behave in the same way if they were in his place..forget behave a tormemtd vampire sufferng pain 4 centuries wud have killd pia! Bt we all knw why he didnt.he is abhay n well the othr reasn u knw why..
though this part stil seems unreal to me..m nt sure wether pia ws dreaming or it ws happng 4 real..

But ya if i for once keep my blind emotions towards abhiya aside, n judge it just as a story then as a reader i have to admit that i enjoyed each n every turn of events v.v. much!! 👍🏼I must say this time even i ws flaggerbusted! For a friction of second i was confused wether the last part where pia saw abhay was present or past. But then i realised its present. And sadly in present abhay hates maithli n pia mre than maithli. Not surprising at all cnsidering the facts that abhay belev as true. Bt the mst import thing to be noted here is abhay hates pia alright bt more than hating pia for breaking hs belief he hates pia becoz abhay thinks pia cheated on hm becz of sidh! He thinks she loves sidh!! [my pov!] So here abhay's hathred is hinting at sumthng else..a more strng emotion perhaps? The entire thing is cmplicated! Or is it me,mistaking?😕
Bt anyway like i said i am enjoying the twist and wil nt ask u to unite abhiya soon becz that wil make the story uninteresting. Its bettr to go slow becz we all knw this misundrstndng n all the twist n turns wil result in a union even mre bigger,thats bound to enchant us. 😉
anyways i wrote an essay,sorry. 😆
U Knw amng all ur works this is my fav8 nw becz of the brilliant plotting and tactful,intelligent way of executing the past n present. Managing bth is nt easy bt you are doing an amazing job here. 👏
p.s. Haseena seems to knw wat happnd or wats happng..or mayb she is nt aware of the recemt turn of events yet,just like us? Who knws bt i love the way u cnfuse ur readers. 😉😛 carry on plz..🤗



you know I love ur comments right? *hugs*
about the action.. Thank you- coz I always fear I'm not doing it right, but well, if you say so :P

I am so happy that you don't blame Abhay. I'm tired of everyone blaming Abhay, tha's why I delayed AbhIya's meeting in the present. True, anyone else would have killed her, n he didn't, and you are soo right about why he hates her. It's the fact that she betrayed him, chose Sid over him, that's what hurt him the most.
Pia saw Abhay in the past only, right after the fire, and then she got pulled back to the present.. Sorry if i confused you:(
About Haseena... Hmm maybe she knows, or maybe not ;)

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Posted by: Susmitasumi96

5 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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