FF- Time And Again- Book 2- Book 3- Link added - Page 13

Originally posted by: captainplus

great update

so abhayendra was jelous by seeing sid-piyali 2gether at nit

so abhayendra used 2 luv piya 4m b4 n his feelings 4r methz was just an attraction

tats the reason he bhaved wit sid like tat ...

Actually, if you read carefully, you will see that it was Sid who taunted him by saying Abhayendra took advantage of maithali, but whatever floats your boat😳

bt y did abhay mentionedin the last update tat he hates piyali n c btrade him

its funny tat sid was like a brother 2 piyali n pre-leap he tried 2 snatch her 4m abhay by making her fall 4r him 😆 tats different case tat piya's dumbness (according 2 abhay her innocence) proved 2 b an advantage

against sid n c by indirect force punished him 4r trying 2 cum btween

her n abhay throwing big fat panchi over him 😆

hope sid bcoms +ve now n understands tat methli is using him

m likeing the new sidina pair

Thank you for liking😳

sid actually deserves his share of happiness now after his relationships wit 2 horrible gfs n also he was not a bad gye b4

in b/w after panchi's death wat is arnav n the crazy dobrials doing ?

n wat about jay n dippu ?

patience, my friend...patience😆

in b/w who is this reina n wat is actually her plan ?

though i luv her til now would like 2 kno y does c want abhiya 2 b 2gether ?

is c one of pkyekians who want abhiya's baccha ?😛 😉

Hmm thats actually not a bad idea, but no its not coz of a kid..That's kind of done by other writers😳

bt watever u shouldn't hav deleted the scene was

we could have got a more clearer view of 10th december 2010 episode 😉

Hehe and then Snigs would have gone unpunished😛

nyways tanks 4r the pm

luv this ff n ur writing style

n want a sooner n longer update next tim

Thank you. As for longer, i really can't say since I write from mobile these days.

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

15+? 😳 Seriously? Well the only reason I made mine 16+ was bcoz of the bloody scenes 😆 All we got was a kiss? 😆

What should I say? I took tips from you😉

Jokes apart I loved this update 😃 esp the fighting sequences n next time I guess I shall ask u for opinions for them while penning down mine 😉 I just love the way u write n I love ur choice of words. Really classy 👏 Wish I could write even half as well as that 😊

Actually, sweetheart, you are better😆

Anyways Alina is Reina I think(99.99% 😛) coz u always give an unexpected twist 😛 So Pia will be back the next day n wat does she mean Abhay wont be able to stay away from her? 😕 Well yeah tats wat we all want dont we? 😆

Reina means what she says😛 And yes you should be on track for a twist always😉

I am more than happy if thats the case but I hope Abhay doesn hate her bcoz of the prejudice he feels towards Piyali for something that happened in the past that was altered I loved Abhay Sid face off, was perfect 👏

Abhay will not hate Piya. he loves her na😕

Our Abhay was character dheela in 18th century itself 😆

Arre don't call him that..woh amar prem tha🤣

The fight sequence where Pia mounts the horse n goes to safe Abhay was superb n I simply loved the fight sequence 👏 Brilliant ⭐️ Abhay Piyali were ☺️ But Abhay got close to her bcoz he thought she was Metz? 😭 I am sure in 21st century tables will turn 😉 Abhay will get close to Metz thinking she is Pia 🤣

Don't be too sure of anything mandy😆

So this is the part that we got to see in the prologue? Sid betrayed his brother for a woman who never loved him 😭 I can understand his pain but this was no way to deal with it 😡 However I loved the way u have depicted Sid n Pia's bond here 😳 Infact I liked it more than Abhiya 😊 Please do continue soon. If u dont then I wont update Covenant 😈

Prologue is next chapter😳

You anyway won't update Covenant😭 But I am going to update soon anyway😛

Originally posted by: AbhiyaDewaani

Fabulous update..wow..Piyali saved Abhayendra...loved their romance...@Shreya,keep rocking girl...i m a great fan of ur FF...

Originally posted by: sukugeny

amazing chapy shreyu...y r u nt cmpfy...v r.so u too.u wrote al well.thnk u.

m jst waiting fr abhy pia face to face...wht vl abhay say..is he angry on her or vl he accept her...ab to sid bhi hai..wow..bhot mja aayega...yahoo...yayyy..m egrly waiting shreyu...update soon.ab iss metz ko kya hua?
shreyu..mini devil..love u fr this lamba update..u alwys kept golden updates.

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

I wanted the 17+ part but still this part was fantastic.
I loved it a lot.

Originally posted by: devilish-grin

amazing part shreya.finaly abhay pia ke bre me abhay ko pata chala.sidina r gud.the update was beautiful.😊

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

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so..you said you arent cmfy wth fight n romantic scenes!! Bt that's shocking becoz the fight sequence was purely amazing!! ⭐️ Atleast to me!! I felt am watchng sum fight sequence frm troy/the lord of the rings! And am being honest! The attacks,counter attacks..everythng was fantastically depicted! I enjoyed it! Bravo!!👏

and the next..abhayendra piya- they coming close,the sudden tension of the moment, abhayendra's passion..pia's hesitation and surrender..all was very well described!! Even the timing of their every move,expression was just absolutely perfect!!! 👏
great job!! 👍🏼

then the way pia handled the whole situation with sheer intelligence really adds sum extra charm to her character! 😊 I Like it!! 👏 nt exaggerating bt i love the way u portray the womans characters specially pia! ❤️ Ofcourse abhay too! And womans arent weak in ur story and i like tht! 😊

nw reina! Anthr interesting character..! Her encounter with abhay was terrific! The way abhay acted..hs anger..tht was too gud!! Nw i have gave up on guessing who reina actually is..😆 I will rather wait 4 u to disclose. 😉

bt this part was very interesting and important turning point in the story i suppose as it holds key to many unanswered questns tht will arise in the future updates..n mayb sum missing link in the past as well!
And also the secrecy this particular scene had is fantastic! ⭐️ The style by whch it was handled is really great!! 👏
now the story is getting mre interesting..waiting to see how all these leads to sum definite events and change or modify the course of actions!
The way you are tackling the past..the present is really commendable.. 👏
And pia-sidh and abhay -sid scene was again a gud read! Very well written..

Now honestly i cnt wait for the next chap shreya! U have left no choice! So update soon!! 😉
P.s. Dnt u also start plzz! Nt usd to see 'nt satisfied' kinda note in ur posts! Samjhi? So 4m next time edit tht part plz! 😛

Originally posted by: Escape.My.Love.

omg it was piyali not maithli eeep . hahahaha . :P so abhay kissed piyali , but its not like piya really wanted this to happen . one cannot blame her yaar . really ...but why does abhay hate piyali in the present timing ? what misunderstanding can he possibly have about piyali? piyali did anything andeverythingto keep ametz together despite falling for abhyendra who is abhay . damn.

Originally posted by: Escape.My.Love.

the romance gave me the jitters btw . you were really good .👏and i cant tell you how glad i am that it was piyali😆