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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update *claps*.Loved d fight.I knew T is upto something big n she did it.Bt i m scared 4 Abhiya n Sid now.Plz end it at a happy note.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant...I love u deAr...tgrilling update
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 update
finally metz is dead😃
hope Abhay, Pia and Sid will be f9
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm crying !!😭😭😭😭
Last chapter ? 😭😭
But , good things have to end soon , don't they ?😭
Anyways , gr8 update !👏
Thanks for the pm .
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey this is 4 ch 84 its fabulous u knw the way anataya group show land to metz group and wow pia ne vikrant ka kase safaya kara... a mere human but she proves dat brain always win over power and the way panchi help them to cross the barrier... i enjoy the chapter...
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Posted: 12 years ago
m sad...dnt wnt it to end so soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab update
finally maithili is dead...happy but m really gonna miss ur ff.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww...@last Mathili died😊but Abhy-pia-sid🥺😭hope they alive...continue asap😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
so guyzz,this is it .the very last update of my first abhiya ff intezar(the awaiting)😊.gosh i still c'nt believe i actually ended up a whole story😲.honestly saying i didn't xpcted that much responses when i first posted this story!😆but just for lovely supporters like u i came through this whole way and thx for being with me through the whole journey😃.really love u all.🤗now without saying further.i want u to enjoy the chapp.i'm really tensed that have i given a proper ending to it and matched ur expectations😕.i don't know so pls pls give ur responses soon.😲
Once for, forever yours in me all your heart
chapp 87(A)

three years latter,

there was a huge chaos in dobriyal mansion from the morning.the whole house was decorated beautifully like there was going to take place any functios like marriage.madhu was running hear and there and ordering the servants."oh god,what are u doing?kitna kaam para hain,and u didn't finished a single thing yet."madhu screamed."hey what's up?"arnav came there."arey just look at them...aaj ratko shadi hain and they didn't even finished a single thing!!i don't know arnav how cld i be eable to manage everything..."madhu said with a frustrated voice."don't worry madhu,everything will be fine!!where is panchi?why is not she helping u?"arnav asked."she is in office and didn't came yet."madhu said.suddenly madhu saw a midddle age woman was standing quitely near the window."arnav just a sec..."madhu told him and headed towards the window.she tapped on the shouldire of that woman.she turned back,"arey madhu?"she said."sugandha what are udoing hear all alone?!u don't look well!"madhu asked."nothing just..."sugandha let out a sigh."u r missing pia r8?"madhu asked slowly.sugandha didn't give any ans."i know,even i'm missing her today very much!!"madhu said in low voice.

haseena was seating on abhay's room.the room seemed very empty without him.each and every part of the room reminded heer about him.true he was not her own son and sometimes they were hell irritated for his crazyness for his love.but when he was not with them,they cld understand what his presence meaned to them."haseena..."a female voice called from the door .haseena turned back and said,"alina u?".alina smilled and came ner her."ya it's me!!i'm going back to london tonight with my big sister t.we are settling down in london together."she said."that's a gr8 news!"haseena said with a lil smille.alina looked at her sad eyes."haseena what are u doing all alone in these room?"she asked."nothing just.."haseena avoided her gaze."don't try to hide from me.u r missing abhay r8?"alina asked."i know u will understand!"haseena gave up a big sigh,"people said that we,vampires are emotionless.i wish i can proove them wrong.but u know,we c'nt change the destiny.abhay c'nt be with us anymore.cause he had gone far away from our world.he is now a part of a world full of light where he belongs,not a life full of darkness."hasenna said qutely."hey,why don't u go to dobriyal's marraiage ceremony?i think u will be happy!"alina said."no alina i don't want to create problem anymore."haseena said.

a highly reputated company's office in delhi.the yearly program for new employ's post interview session was going on.the last candidate was on the room facing four interviewer together.she felt her heart was throabing loudly.although she waa quite confident that her answers were good but suddenly she was feeling so nervous.after the written test only thirty candidates were chosen among three hundreds and she was one of them.if she succeded to pass the post interview and then she wld be allowed for interview tomorrow.the interviewer asked the last question,"so miss,ur answers are impressive and ur resumes is also good.i hope u know if u managed to go through this then u'll be alowed for the last interview!"the interviewer said."yes i know."the girl said."suppose u won't be allowed to go through this then how will u feel?"the interviewer asked her."well i'll be a lil bit dissapointed as i won't get to work in this highly reputated company.but i will again gather up my things and try to work harder to eliminate my defaults and search for another job."the girl said with an honest tone.then another lady interviewer asked her,"suppose u managed to get through this PI,but u may be get eliminated in final interview.then will u feel the same?".the girl composed herself with a sigh,"mam,reaching so much close to ur achivements but got slipped just for some huge mistakes caused so much dissapointment in some1's mind.i know i'll feel really bad if i get cancelled.but life doesn't end hear and i know success never comes in easy way and i'll do the exact thing which i can do!i'll work harder more and more to proove myself."she said with low voice.all the interviewers looked to each other.the girls heartbit increased.suddenly the lady interviewer looked towards the girl with a smirk.'what happened?why is she looking at me like this?'the girl thought with a horrifying face."so miss pialy jaiswal,congratz u r the first new employes selected for our company!"the lady interviewer said.the girls dark brown orbs became stunned."so when do u want to join our dehradun's branch office?"the lady interviwer asked."but mam this is only post interview..."pia said with confused eyes."well we don't want to do any late to get a very deserving employee like u!!we all like ur spirit miss pialy jaiswal and we need people like u in our company!!"the male interviewer said.the charming winning smille at last came back on pia's face.

pia quickly got out of the building.gosh if she knew that everything wld be done today then she cld easilly attened the wedding.she knew ma,madhu aunty...every1 wld be hell upset without her.she rushed to the bus stop hoping that she cld get the ticket of the bus to dehradun but alas all seats were full.pia came out of the busstop dishearted.her eyes fell on a young boy and a girl walking togetherly side by side holding each others hand.they were all laughing and chatting forgetting the world arround,lost in each other.she remembered him again!!his icy blue orbs which always looked to her lovingly.if he was hear with her then every problem wld be solved.she knew she wld feel pain on his absense.but that much!!!she closed her eyes keeping her hand on her heart."abhay..."she whispered."pia!!!"his clear sound floated into her ears.she popped out her eyes with shock and quickly turned back with wide eyes.she saw him standing there near his car looking to her with that icy blue eyes and that usual smirk.the white t-shirt and blue jeanes looking so perfect on him as usual."abhay u???"pia said with shocked face."i told u na whenever u'll remember me u'll got me in front of u!"abhay said.pia smilled and came foroward."but i thought u were in dehradun for ur business purpose!"pia thought."don't worry,sid is there he will handle everything!"abhay assured."what?sid bhaiya!!oo no..."pia said striking her own head.both of them burst into laughter."hey,but when did u arrived at delhi?i told u all that i cld manage everything alone!!don't u have a lil faith on me abhay?"pia asked.abhay's icy blue eyes melted into warmness and he leaned to her keeping his forehead on her.his casual touch caused to appear that blush in her chick."my dear beloved pia!"abhay said with a lovely voice,"the thing is that i have faith on u more than myself.but i was not a single bit sure about myself that how cld i be eable to survive for this four days without u.so i followed u from the very first day when u caught delhi's bus from dehradun bus-stand."abhay said."what!?u were following me?"pia cldn't believe her own ears."yes,i arrived delhi by my cat just after ur bus and stayed at the same hotel.not just that.when u were giving interview i was waiting for u outside and when u came out i understand that u have got the job,i followed u and came hear to take u back.congratz for ur very first job miss piyali jaiswal."abhay finished.pia was all silent.tears of joy was flowing from her eyes."thx abhay.thx for caring about me so much!!"she said with a husky voice."ufff!!this tears!!!why does it always comes on ur eyes to upset me!!now bid them adieu and come with me.i think u don't wanna miss the marriage ceremony!"abhay said.pia nodded with a smille and got inside the car.the first thing pia did after abhay started the engine was to call her mom to inform that she had got the job and she was coming back dehradun.at the other side of phone,sugandha's eyes flickered into happiness.

panchi was all busy in her office."idiot damnit!!!"she mumbled,"i'm attending all the meetings and he was busy in talking with her girlfrnds in his cabin.idiot!"panchi said.lina her assistant came inside."panchi mam!!"lina said."what lina,i'm very busy now..."oanchi muttered."sir told u to give this."what!!!!"panchi lifted her face from the piece of paper.lina kept something on her table and went away.panchi opened the gift paper from the above and was shocked to c the thing inside."CACTUS!!!!"she screamed and boiled in anger and stormed towards his boss's cabin.she opened the door with a huge push and came inside."excuse me!!SIR!!!!"panchi said quite loudly looking towards the person seating on the chair."panchi darling!!how many times i have to remind u that remove the letter 'r' from 'sir' and add a 'd',ie,call me sid."the person seating on the chair with his usual smirk."listen mr sidharth nehera.this is ur office and u r the boss hear and i'm ur secretary only."panchi said."really,but c who is bossing over me?"sid said."i just want to ask u that did u sent me that cactus?"she asked angrilly."yes babes!!!who else.remember when i asked u about ur fav flower u said cactus!!"sid said."and why do u care about my likes?"panchi said with irritated voice.suddenly sid looked towards her with intense eyes and came in front of her.panchi was caught by his gaze and stood there still,"cause i care about u!!"sid said."what?!"with panchi's amazed eyes sid bend down on his knees and said,"miss panchi dobriyal,i know i'm not the perfect person for u.yes,i'm an womanizer and a casanova,but no girl holds that soacial place in my heart which u holds.u are the one with whom i feel complete and u r the only girl who can make this imperfect man perfect.so,will u hold my hand for the rst of my life and be my wife?"he asked with a intense voice.panchi was all shocked by the situation.she cld never imagine that.after some moment she turned back."panchi i'm..."sid jumped up.panchi looked back to him,"mom invited u for tonight marriage celebration.pls do come!!i want to talk to my parents about us as soon as possible!!"panchi finished with a smile and quicly left his cabin leaving him all startled.after some moment when sid got out of transe and understood panchi's indication he jumped into the air in xcitement.

abhay's car had entered in dehradoon's territory.pia was looking out of the car window towards the dense forrest.each and everytime she looked towsrds the dense tree walls she remembered about that fate full day which changed all of their life.when after stabbing metz that huge light appeared from the dagger pia got fainted,when she got back her sensec she found herself lying over the grass under the clear morning sky where two beautiful pairs of icy blue eyes were watching over her."abhay!!!"she whispered and touched his perfect face with her limp hand.abhay also caresed her face with immense love in his eyes and said,"pia!!i'm so happy.u r awake at last!!!"abhay said and supported her limp body to standd up.pia saw they were surrounded by so many peoples,alina,t,sid,panchi,anantya,lydia and many others behind every1's face was filled up with happyness and amusement.alina came forroward and said,"pia,take my gratitude on behalf of the whole dark world to free ourself from maithilli's hand!!".pia looked at every1 with amazed eyes.sid and panchi also came foroward with a smille."yes pia,maithilli is dead!!not jist her,whole coven was finished.now we are all free of danger."panchi said.every1 screamed into victory.pia's eyes were all in tears.at lst everything is finished.their all effort got the fruit."but alina how is it possible?u told that i will die if ..."pia's words were interrupted by alina,"well,yes...it wld be possible if that weapon sucks ur all life force but as soon as the weapon got activated by ur pure aura,abhay and lttr sid hold thatg weapon along with u and the weapon got alternate energy sourrce from both of them.so it didn't sucked ur life force anymore and killed maithilli!!"alina said.pia looked at abhay with wet eyes,abhay hugged her tightly and she also hugged him back burring her face in his chest.but at that moment pia felt something.her eyes wided and she quickly lifted her face."abhay!!!"she promped with shocked face and keot her trmbling hand over his heart where she cld clearly feel the throabs."ur heart!!!!it's biiting!!!!!..."pia said with amusement.abhay smilled and looked towards alina.alina and t smilled looking towards each other."well,that all happened cause of that sacred weapon."t said."but how?"pia asked."well didn't i said u that the dagger suckes the most powerfull aura from it's holders body.for humans it is their life force,but the condition changes when it comes to vampires!the most powerfull force of vampires is non ther than but their immortality and vampiric sence and strength.to kill maithilli that dagger took away abhay and sid's immortality along with her vampiric sences and strengths.now both of them are mortal creatures,normal humans!!"alina said.pia was all amazed by their informations."now if my lord permits,then abhay and sid can leave the life of dark world and go back to lead their new human life."t said looking towards anatya."well,i never experienced this situation before.but i'll free both of the brothers if they take oath that they wld never reaveal to humans about our dark world,and secondly,they won't keep connection with any1 in this dark world.it is all for their own safety along with us.if they agreed then i don't have any problem."lord anatya said.both sid and abhay agreed to that condition but when abhay was bidding adeu to haseena her torned face really made her sad.he really had a strong connection with haseena.pia was also feeling sad as she cld never be eable to meet alina again...

chapp 87(B) at below 😳

Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
"wedding night"
chapp 87(B)

pia was all lost in that past memories.pia and panchi had to tell so many lies to convice arnav and madhu after yhey returned back but somehow they managed.still she felt gulty for seperating abhay and haseena."don't feel that pia.it was not ur fault!besides,mom knew that someday i had to leave all of them."abhay said while driving the car.pia smilled looking back to him.she almost forgot alina's last word.she said that although abhay and sid turned into humans.some of vampires eabillity wld be still left in them for their whole lifetime.although abhay lost his immortality and his all vampire's phisycal strength he didn't lost his mind reading power.he still can read peoples mind.it sounded odd but he was the vampire transformed into human.no doubt he wldn't be the total normal human.like abhay sid also had his persuation powers from his past life which helped them a lot to convince arnav and madhu about their dissapearance for that long time.both sid and abhay were leaving together in their new life.sid had started his business industry in dehradoon which was very much successfull.after finishing their collgs abhay had also joined his hand with sid.both of them were very successfull man at last.of crs the 200 years experience never got failled!!"i have got something for u!!"abhay said and handed over a bag to her."what's this?"pia asked in confusion."just open it."abhay said with a smille.pia opened and got shocked to c that white shifon lehenga she saw at a mall just some days ago.she liked it lot but didn't take it as it was too coastly."abhay!!!..."pia looked at him with amazed eyes.he just smilled,"u know pia,i am very happy that i didn't lost my mind reading eabillity.cause i wanted to fullfill ur each and every dream before u tell."he said looking at her with that loving gaze.pia smilled,"abhay,tell me honestly.don't u miss ur superpowers in this normal life?"she asked."well...yes,sometimes i miss it.spacially when i can't reach u within a second and spacially i c'nt stalk inside ur room at night like before..."he made a funny face."abhay!!!..."pia rolled her eyes followed by his smirk."but honestly when u r with me.i don't need anything else.just for u my dead heart started to bit again!!do i need anything else?"he encircled one hand arround pia's shoulder dragging her near him while other hand was driving."and if u keep ur prommise our every problem wld be solved."he said."what prommise?"pia asked tucking her chick to his broad shoulder."well u had prommised me that as soon as u will get ur job we will be together!"he said.pia blushed again."so miss pialy jaiswal?will u keep ur prommise and marry me and become mrs pialy abhay raichand?"he asked with his intense eyes on her deep brown orbs."without any doubt!"pia said with her angelic smille tucking her chin more to his shoukder.after some times their car reached to dobriyal mansion."so abhay,we will meet again tonight.but if u want me to marry then u have to talk to ma!!"pia said."don'y worry pia.i know sugandha aunty is allready impressed by me and she allready choosed me for her precious piu!!"abhay informed."oh god!!..u both are.."pia cldn't say another word as she saw him leaning close to her.without any single resist she closed her eyes feeling his passionate lips touch her lips and they were lost into each other again.at lst each and every obstacle had been removed from their life and they were together.after some moment when they got back their senses and parted from each other with a smille abhay whispered in her ears,"i want u to c in that dress ton8!...".pis smilled and got out of the car.abhay's car backed up and got far away.pia looked back to the decorated entrance carrying a pamphlet where three sentences were engrossed clearly:""MISHA WEEDS KABIR"".pia smilled heavilly."simply unbelievable!"she said and got inside.

at the evening after a huge effort panchi and pia got misha ready in that bridal attirte."gosh misha u are looking u r looking so pretty!!"pia said."god pia,cld u ever imagine that misha wld be the one among us to got married fast?"panchi asked with surprise."hey birdy leave me na!!"misha said."no way mish.aaj hum tumse har hisab chukta karengey..:panchi said.misha noticed pia's beautiful white lehenga in which she was looking stunning!"oww abhay..."misha said with a smile."shut up misha!!!"pia blushed."u lucky girl!!"panchi said.madhu came inside and said to bring misha as kabir and her familly had arrieved.they all came down and saw kabir,sid and abhay standing together and all were looking deadly handsome in their serwani.three girls cldn't take off their eyes from them!!

the wedding ceremony was over smoothly.aftyer that every1 was gathering at the lawn.abhay-pia,sid -panchi and misha-kabir all were gathered together at a corner."so kabir and misha at last u two got married!!"abhay said."ha ha chirate raho hamein.kyun ki iske baad tumhara no lagne wala hain tab hum bh dekh lenge!!"misha said.all of them burst into laughter."abhay,sid.thx a lot dudes.cause without ur help i can't convince this misha dobriyal!"kabir said.another bursty of laughter hit them."ur welcome!!"sid said.panchi looked towards abhay and pia,"and what's about u two?kab shadi kar rahe ho?"she asked.both of them gave an embarrased smille."waisey,jaldi karna barna aise hi car mein kabtak romance karte rahoge?"she said."what??"both of their jaw dropped."i saw u two this morning inside the car from my window."pabchi said."panchi.."both said in loud embarrased voice.but then arnav came foroward and said.time for some music and dance all peoples on dance floor."arnav finished.the music started.abhay stretched his hands towards pia and said"may i have this dance?".pia smilled,"ofcrs!!"she said and slidded her hand in his.abhay lead her to the dance floor followed by kabir-misha,sid-panchi and others.they started to dance and quickly got lost in each others eyes.from the dark shade of the forrest two women and one man are watching over them."so,haseena are u happy now?"chand asked."yes,i'm happy for them."haseena said."cmn we have to go bacck now.let them enjoy their new life."alina said."yes haseena she is r8!!may be there are so many others like abhay who needs us!"chand said.after some times three of them vanished inside the dark shadows of forrest leavinng them under the bright light of moon,lost in each other eyes,in their happily ever after.thus the 200 years old story got finished and a new begining came in abhay and pia's life...


adhoori saans thi dhadkan adhoori thi adhooren ham
magar ab chaand poora hain falak pe aur ab pooren hain ham

----THE END---

sorry i didn'y made the ending like twilight making pia a vampire😕.i don't know what do u think but pia is really a dear ch to me!very clse to my heart😳.so somehow i c'nt imagine her as a bloodsucking vampy.also i didn't wanted to change the plot that was allready set in my mind.😉.but hope every one likes it.waiting eagerly for ur cmnts.as i req to all my silent readers pls pls give a small reply if possible😊.as this is the last chapp.so guyzz thk u all once again .and i hope from now on we will meet again in my new ff sajni(my beloved).
good night and sweet dream😳
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago

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