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Posted: 12 years ago
guyzz new chapp!may be a lil bit dragged.but hope u like😃.
traces of hope

chapp 85

it was all dark!!the full moon had allready started to shine gloriously on the night sky and waiting to experience the battle of light and death!abhay was looking at the moon with worried eyes while storming towards the palace's direction.alina looked at his worried xpression and said,"u don't have to worry abhay!metz cldn't do anything untill the full moon light is brightest on the earth!it won't be before 12 o clock!"she said."hope so!!"abhay said but his worry didn't reduce a bit.at last they reach near the palace.by time they were coming closer abhay cld sence pia arround and he was becoming hopefull.that meaned pia was at the palace.alina was r8!!but along with that he was also feeling something uncanny.he was getting many other vibes that sometimes he was loosing pia's trck.not just him,but alina,sid lydia every1 was getting strong senses of danger near.they wldn't have to wait longer to know that what danger was waiting for them.as soon as they came near the palace they saw the whole army of bloodsucker was standing near surrounding the castle entrance.a girl was leading them."mohini!"sid whispered as she saw the girl.abhay recognized her.she was the girl who blindfolded him this morning.sidhrth was r8!her power was really strong.but abhay cldn't concentrate on her cause he was getting pia's strong sense from inside the palace.sid and alina noticed his restlessness."what happened?!"sid asked."pia.."he said looking towards the palace."go abhay!!we will handle them."alina said.abhay looked at sid and alina."go!!.."sid said.abhay didn't waste time and ducked at a side and went out from the gathering.he rushed towards the palace to search for an entrance as the main entrance was blocked by mohini and her men.

sid alina and all got allerted."i hope panchi is allr8 at the barrier.he also had to fetch lord anatya and others!"sid said worriedly."ahem ahem!some1's worried about her darling fatty!!"alina smirked in that situation also."pls alina not now!!"sid muttered.they looked foroward as they sensed the enemy had started to attack.mohini and her men attacked on them and again the growls and scream of vampirers filled the air.

pia ran through the pasage.there was only faded moonlight coming through the cracks of briks in the broken wall sometimes.otherwise the passage was totally dark.she knw the passage ended near the main entrance.so,there was a chance to escape.she just hoped the road was clear!but when she reached near the door she heared some awful growling from outside which resisted her feet.what's going on outside?!vikrant was talking about a battle!tha meaned there was something horrible going on outside.better to find another way!!pia thought and ran back at the dark passage!

sid and others had allready managed all d opponent vampires.except mohini.she was giving a tough time to every1.the people who were coming in front of her lossig his all eyesight and sense!!she allone had killed so many!!sid tried to confront her but he also lost his eyesight.alina was horrified by her powers!!she was really strong.but she had to stop her.alina was about to confront her but suddenly someone stopped her by her shoulder."lady alina stop!!"it was lydia!"lydia u!but i had to stop her!"alina said."let me handle her!!"lydia came foroward."but..."before alina cld finish,lydia stormed towards mohini.sid was screaming,"hey,what have u done to me bitch?!i can't c a single thing!!".he mooved his feet waving his hand like a blind."be ready to die!!"mohini said and was about to hit him but lydia came there.she pushed sid at a side!sid bumped on a tree and felt he had got back his eyesight.lydia looked towards mohini's smirking face."so another one wishes to die?"mohini asked."no i rather wanted to kill that nasty illusion makin vampire!"lydia said with another smirk.anger boiled in mohini's red eyes and she straightly looked into lydia's eyes applying her full power.lydia just smirked and her grey orbs flashed into a mild light.at the next instant mohini felt a hard bang on her ownself.she screamed in pain and at the next moment mohini's eyesight blacked out.she was shocked!what happened to her?why her own power came back to affect her."damn!!what are u?what have u done to me?"mohini screamed and mooved like a blind.lydia smilled and pushed her hardly that she was blown away and hit a tree trunk."now taste ur own madicine u nasty illusion maker!!"lydia said.both sid and alina was looking towards lydia with wide eyes."what is this?"sid asked with shock."reflecting power of lydia!!"some1 from lydia's gang said them."what's that?!"alina asked quriously."well that's the eabillity of our lydia.whenever some1 applied her spell on lydia she cld reflect the spell back tp it's owner using her mirror eyes!with this eabillity she cld defeat so powerfull vampires!!"the companion said."such a cool gift!!"sid said.

while all the mess was going outside,metz and t were preapaing for the rituals at a room inside the palace."everythings ready maithilli!we just have to wait for midnight!!"t said.metz smirked."i don't wan't to wait anymore tanushree!!start the rituals now!!"metz said."what!?but hoe can we do it now?we need the full moon rays to be brightest ob the earth and it wldn'tt be before midnight!"t said."i don't need brightest moon rays to recover my powers t!!besides,i c'nt wait while the whole clan was approaching to kill me!!as much as i know them,they all are desperate and when they are desperate,spacially that abhay, they can do anything!!i need my powers back!!!otherwise i won't be eable to stop them!!!"metz said loudly."but maithilli u won't get the full blasing of moon untill it appared with it's full glow!!!"t tried to explain."just stop ur nonsenses!!i'm ordering u to start rituals now!!otherwise be ready to face ur death!!"metz sais madly and then turned towards the only servant left at the castle."go to the prisoners cell and tell vikrant to bring the prisoner!"metz ordered.the servant bowed and went outside.'oh god!!she wanted to have it r8 now!!now what can i do?how can i stop her upto midnight?'t thought worriedly.after sometimes the servant rushed into the room!"misstress!!the prisoners cell is on fire!!"he said."what!!!"metz screamed loudly and stormed towards the cell.t smirked.at last pia used her grey cells as she said.'thx pia,i got the time for u!'t thought and followed metz.

abhay again lost the track of pia while rounding the castle.where was she actually?it was sure that she was inside.but where?he headed towards the direction where he tressed her scent last time!he quickly entered inside the castle through a broken window and suddenly he got the scent of burning things.his expression became worried and he rushed to the spot.as he mooved foroward the scent became harder.he was worried again.it was the place where he senced pia last time.just after few steps he saw the huge fire flames at the front!"pia..."abhay's voice chocked.what happened hear?was pia inside that fire?!then why wasn't she screamong for help!was she allready...no no!!!it cldn't be.he was about to jump inside flames without thinking further when he heared metz's mad voice and at next instant he saw huge water waves causing the fires to turn down.when the flames were gone abhay saw metz with t and her servant.abhay quickly ducked at a side!metz's got inside the cell and saw a burnt body."gosh!!was that girl burnt allive?"the servant asked.metz bended over the body and her eyes wided."it was not her!!it was not pia!!!!it's vikrant's body!!!!!"metz's screamed."but how can u be sure?"t asked.metz quickly grabbed a locket from the neck of that burnt body,"look at this.it was vikrant's!!damn that girl!!!managed to escape again and this time using those firelight!!"metz's indicated towards the empty holder of the wall with mad gaze.abhay was listening to their each and every convo.his expression became hopefull again.pia was allive!!she was anywhere in this castle for sure.he rushed without wasting a moment!"we have to search her before midnight!"t muttered."i know it better than u!!!cmn follow me!!"metz said with a mad voice and ran outside.this time t's smirk broaded more and she slowly mooved her feet outside the cell.she looked to the moon through window.it wasn't late for midnight.the time she was waiting for so long!

abbhay increased his speed and started to search for pia.damn she cldn't even call her name.metz wld be allerted.'pia,where are u?just hold on i;m hear...'he said in mind hoping that pia cld hear it.on the other hand pia was stucked inside that dark passage.she cldn't found the way out.she was running hear and there for her life.in thar process her feet collided with something and she fell down."ouch..."pia winced in pain so loudly.this sound approached to both abhay and maithilli.abhay's eyes got the glow again.at last he cld detect him properly.he rushed to the direction from where he heared the sound.

precap:"let me do this pia!!for u...pls.besides,mujhe is beatch se bahut sara hisab barabar karna hain."he said with determined voice.

reply guyzz.next chapp will come soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 update
liked the fight
finally mohini is over
hope Abhay will find Pia first
Edited by .rumki. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls updt soon...waise kya tum piya ko vampire banaogi? u know...to unite abhiya forever...yaa fir kya abhay nd sid dono ko human banaogi wapas...i wnt piya nd panchi to become vampires..so thay cn be with abhay n sid forever...no end of thr love
Edited by samwllms - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing love lydia and hope maithali doesn't get to pia first
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome story
i want pia and pachi to be vampries too
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww sooo supeb fight...I feel I watch tht fight...awsomeee...Hope Abhay find Pia before Maithili...continue asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update👏 Are wah!! vikrant dead yipee!! hope abhay pia k pas pehle pahunche..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow super ha👏 seriously yeh ff mai pad nahi rahi hoo 😕infact daily soap pkyek ki tarah imagine kar rahi hoo😆 i sware love your ff update❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow so abhiya gonna be together again yipee😛 awesome update👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello guyzz.another mega uodate😃.fusss at last be eable to finish,.sorry for the late.but i'm again tensed as usual.i don't know how much i have justified the chapter.😕so pls give ur responses quickly.😊.eagerly waiting for ur views.
finding u at last

chapp 86(A)

pia was got hurt in her leg.so she was little bit stumbling.but she saw the outside way from this passage.she saw some faded light and following it she reached at the large party hall of the palace,enlighted by the firelights hanging from the wall.her head was spining due to stress and limpness.she was going to fell down when two musculer hand caught her protectively.pia's eyes glew in happiness as she recognized the touch and her all weariness were gone in a moment.she smilled weakly looking towards the emotional icy blue eyes looking at her face."pia!!!"abhay muttered intently and hugged her tightly.pia also embrassed her hand tightly arround his feature."abhay,u r hear!!i know u will come!!"pia said in her weak voice burrying her face on his chest."i am sorry pia!i shouldn't left u!!i'm sorry.."he said with intensity."it's ok abhay it's not ur fault!"pia said and looed back to him lifting her tiery face to him."are u ok?!did anybody hurt u?"abhay asked with caring voice."i am ok.they didn't hurt me yet.abhay u know why metz wants from me..."pia said with horrified eyes."shhh it's ok pia!i know everything alina told us everything!don't worry,i'm hear i won't let that bitch do any harm to u!"abhay continued,"cmn we should get out of hear soon!"he finished.pia nodded and they were about to got outside when suddenly a huge flame flashed in front and backed off their feet."not so fast u two..."a sound called from behind.they both turned backward and saw metz was standing there with her usual cruel smirk."u bitch..."abhay mumbed in his deadly voice."so u managed to come hear!but sorry to say u c'nt get away from hear!!now quitely shandover pia to me!"metz said."no way!!"abhay quickly came in front of pia covering him."listen abhay!i don't have time to play arround and facing ur stubborness!!just give back pia to me.otherwise u know what i am capable of!!"metz screamed."yes,i know how much u are capable of and u know metz u are nothing withput ur powers!!"abhay said with a smirk."hold ur tounge u f**k!how dare u!!do u think i c'nt defeat u without my powers!listen abhay u r nothing in front of me!!ok if u want it a hand to hand then i'm ready and i'll be very pleased to rip apart ur neck from ur body."metz gave an cruel smille."cmn bitch!!today i'll show u that how much wrong u r!!!"abhay said while his eye color changed into deep blue."abhay no..."pia said with an worried voice."pia,u go from hear!!sid,alina and others are outside!!bring them hear!!"abhay said looking back to her."no abhay.u can't do this.she will finish u off!!"horror stuck her face."pia pls believe in me.u have done enough!more than ur human eabillitys!!but now i'll take care of her."he said with a determined voice."but!!.."pia tried to say."let me do this pia!!for u...pls.besides,mujhe is beatch se bahut sara hisab barabar karna hain."he said with determined voice.pia looked at him with hesitant face."go pia!!!don't waste ur time.no one will stop u.our all opponents are dead without this bitch queen!!!"abhay said looking back towards metz's mad gaze,"go pia!bring alina hear.cause without her help we can't send her to the place she belonged!"abhay said.pia nodded"take care,i'll get back soon!!"she said and rushed to the door.but before she cld got out metz flashed to her and grabbed her hand."no no my precious power source!u won't go anywhere..."but before metz cld finish someone dragged her with full force,seperating her grip from pia's hand and threw to the wall behind.metz growled and looked at abhay who was looking to her with his furious deep gaze."go pia!!"abhay said looking back at pia's horrifying face and she quickly ran outside.abhay turned back towards metz."today it's gonna be only u and me!!but hey,how can it be?the gr8 maithilli was just blown away by my light strike!"abhay said with a smirk."ABHAY!!!"metz screamed and jumped on him causing him to crash on the wall behind smashing the contact portion into ground.abhay resisted her force and both of them blew backward.they started to moove like a black storm throughout the room.there moovements were so fast that cldn't be seen by normal human eyes.it was so difficult to say who's gonna win over whom.

mohini was screaming on the ground."damn it u!!give back my eyesight!!"mohini said."i c'nt do anything mohini it was ur own power which u forced on me!!"lydia said.at the next moment lydia rip appart mohini's neck from her body.mohini let out her last scream.alina and sid was looking at the scene silently when some1's scream allerted them."alina,sidharth!!".both of them turned towards the direction of sound and they saw pia coming out from the palace."pia!!..."both of them screamed and rushed towards her."pia are u ok?"alina asked looking towards her with worried face."i'm fi9 alina.but hurry up,abhay was fighting with maithilli and he needs help!"pia promped quickly."what!!?he was fighting with maithilli?!we have to go sidharth!!"alina said."we are also coming for help."lydia said."no lydia!!u should go back to barrier to help others.this is our fight!!we hve to confront maithilli on our own strength."alina said."as u wish lady alina!!"lydia said and flashed towards the forrest with all her men.alina handed over the sacred dagger to pia."keep it to u pia!!"alina said.pia nooded and took it.then all of them rushed inside.

maithilli and abhay both were fighting with their all strength.metz was amazed.how cld this weak vampire cld give her that much difficulties.she was having hard time with him."u have taken away everything from me bitch!!u have taken away menaxi from me and bounded me to this cursed never ending dead life!!!!"abhay said while giving her a hard push."and when she comes back to as pia u again want to seperate us again,no maithilli not this time..."he gave another hard push to metz."yes,i did all those things and why shouldn't i?i am princess maithilli,the most beautiful girl of the state..."metz said giving another hard kick to him."har kisika sapna tha mujhe pane ka,aur sabke bichmein maine tumhe chuna tha!!i liked u and u ditched me for that good for nothing menaxi!!!how dare u?"metz screamed and with a hard push she caught arround abhay's neck and abhay cldn't moove further."u have to get punishment for this!!punishment for not choosing me!!i will never let two of them be together!!"metz screamed and was about to rip aprt my neck buut before that with a quick and swift moovement abhay freed herself from metz grasp and crashed her on the wall behind.metz looked at him with wide eyes.from where he got that much strength?"u never loved me maithilli never!!then u won't ever tried to seperate us!!maithilli pyar mein kisika jaaan nahi liya jata,par ha ek dusre ke liye jaan diya jata hain and menaxi did that without a doubt!!!"abhay said with a furious gaze towards metz."u c'nt ever seperate us maithilli!!!how much u will try to saperate us our love will always bring us together.u understant..."abhay said with his mad gaze.before maithilli cld say something,all three of them;pia alina and sid entered in the room."abhay..."pia rushed to him and hugged him."i'm ok pia,don't worry."he said hugging her back and giving a light kiss on her forehead.metz cldn't controle herself further with a growl he jumped towards pia.abhay quickly dragged pia out.but pia winced in pain as she felt metz's sharp nail scratched on her skin."maithilli,stop this!!what are u going to do?"abhay became furious and screamed madly.metz skipednear the huge window and looked back towards them with an cruel smille."maithilli it's over now!!u r defeated.no one on ur coven are allive.u should leave it now!!!"sid said."what do u think about me?!will i surrender u so easilly!!besides i got what i want."metz said with her cruel smile and saw her dlood drifted hand."the single drop of blood of ur lookallike,brings back all ur lost power and grants u new power with moon's blessing!!!"she finished.to everyone's shock the bright moonlight came inside the room through the open window and fell on metz's feature."oh no!!the brightest moonlight!!that means the midnight had approached!!!"alina said with low voice.before anyone cld stop her metz quickly licked pia's blood from her hand and smilled evilly.every1 was looking towards metz's cruel face with furious gaze.after that much effort and huge battle did there all sacrifies was gonna be fruitless again.

chapp 86(B) at below😳

Edited by ifians - 12 years ago

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