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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update !👏
Hope Abhay saves Pia soon . 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
zabardast and fantastic update.abhay tried his best but dat maithilli is really v cunning.hope da vampire gang along with abhay succeeds in setting piya free.thanx for pm and continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part.
I loved it soo much.
I'm sure abhay will save Pia.
Update soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago

hello frndz.another mega chapp.hope u like.

"the day has come"

chapp 82(A)

carla dragged pia inside the barrier zone.she was looking eagerly to abhay untill he vanished into the thin fog."abhay!!..."a whisper came out from her mouth.she observed his face before it blurred from her eyesight.his eyes were deep blue...full of anger,grief and sadness.hope he didn't do any reckless thing to save her.hope sid and alina managed to handle him!metz chuckled looking at pia's worried face."oh no!!this time the knight in shining armour cldn't save her princess,how sad!"metz said in a cunning voice.pia looked at her with hard face."uff,just a sec and the hands were about to met.but alas..."metz again chuckled.pia's eyes caught the fire!"yes metz just a sec and he was going to smash all of u in the ground!!"pia said in a hard tone.metz's head boiled up,"human!!!ur crossing ur all limits!!how can u think that a weak vampire like abhay can defeat me?the gr8 maithilli!!don't laugh me..."she said in a quite angry tone."is that so!then why are u all running away from him like hell?"pia asked with her same hard tone."just shut up!!u had allready get on my nerves.just this night and then i'll give u the most ferfull death can ever be imagined!"metz said with her deathly tone.pia thought quitely for a while.why metz c'nt kill her before todays night.once she mentioned that she had to keep her allive before last full moon of the year.what's spaacial about that day?'is today is last full moon of the year?'pia thought."what happened?bolti bandh ho gayi kya?"metz asked with smirk.pia smilled a lil which startled all of them."u don't have to worry about me maithilli!!cause i know abhay will save me but just think when he will come what will be ur condition?u have errupted the volcano which was sleeping for long years keeping all it's redge inside and u caused him to burst again after imprisoning me!u won't be eable to stop him now maithilli!!!"pia said with that same fire in her eyes."what!!!!u are warning me???!!"metz became mad."listen u idiot!!!don't be so much confident about ur abhay!mujhe marna to kya,he cldn't be eable to reach hear!!he cldn't even get through the barrier!!!!so don't be so hopefull that he will come for u!!"metz screamed.pia smilled again,"i am not hopping about his coming maithilli!i know he will come!!!and as much as i know him this barrier is nothin any obstacle for him!!!"pia said with a confident smille.her determined voice shaked metz to the inner.this girl!!!!"just stop ur nonsences or i'll kill u!"metz said angrily."then kill me maithilli!!what else u can do?but guess what this time if i die i'll take u along with me!!!"pia said loudly."arghhh!!!cmn carla we don't have time to listen to her lecturs!we have more works to do!!!!"metz said holding her angr and forrowarded to the core of the forrest.pia silently walked along with them keeping allerted eyes in each and every side.

"DAMN!!!how can we be such a fool!!!we know how clever maihilli is!!!!"abhay screamed furiously.from the time he had came back to alina's house he was all restless and his furi was not a lil bit soothened."abhay i'm sorry.it's all my fault!!we shouldn't leave pia like this!!"alina said with a grieve voice."i told u alina!!we shouldn't take the risk!!i should leave dehradun long ago with pia!!!nahito aajka ye din dekhna hi nahi parta!!!"abhay said with furious voice."abhay be quite!!this is not the solution of the problem hold on urself!!"chand said."ya dad!!just keep saying the same word!!hold on,hold on!!!!how dad how can i?that evil bitch captured pia and ran away in front of my eyes!!!i can't save her!!!"his loud voice cracked in sudden sad,"do u know dad what that bitch can do to pia?!we managed to escape from her hand twice before!!i'm sure this time she won't take any chance.mujhe to dar lag raha hain dad kahi woh pia ko..."his voice chocked and his eyes caught the fire,he gave a heavy punch on the wall leaving a huge crack."i won't leave u bitch!!!u have taken everything frm me and now i won't let u take pia from me!!!"he screamed."abhay pls!controle ur emotions.to defeat maithilli's evil head we have to keep our cool!"anatya ordered."lord anatya is right abhay!!and don't worry maithilli won't harm pia.she needs pia for her own profit.so she won't let pia to happen anything untill...hey,wait a sec!!!"suddenly alina's voice choked.she quickly grabbed her mobile and started to search."what happpenned alina?what are u talking about?why maithilli needs pia to be allive?"abhay asked with confused eyes."wait a sec abhay i just...o no!!!!"alina's eyes became wide."is there any problem alina?"abhay asked."damn how can i be so unmindfull!!!today is the last full moon night of the year!!!"alina promped with wide eyes."last full moon!!now what;s the matter with it?"abhay asked."it matters everything abhay!!!because it's the day for which maithilli needs pia!"alina said."what are u talking about alina?i can't understad..."suddenly abhay was interrupted by anantya's voice,"lady alina,if i am r8 then are u talking about the old spell to recover lost powers by look allikes blood?"anantya asked."yes my lord,i am exactly mentioning about that."alina said."holy crow!!!but that spell was forbidden by our ultimste superiors long time ago!!!"anatya said."do u think it matters to maithilli anyhow?"alina asked.chand came foroward and said,"sory to interrpt u my lord but what old spell u are tlking about?"anatya's face became thoughtfull."it was used long time ago.there was a myth in vampire world that if a vampire can drinke the single drop blood of her look allike human in the last full moon night of the year then the vampire can be blessed by the power of moon.the vampire can aquuire each and every power he wished for.not only that.he can recover his all lost and damaged powers!!!"anatya informed.every1 apart from alina present at the room gasped at his words."so that means if maithilli drinks pia's single blooddrop tonight then no one will be eable to stop her!she wld get back her all powers and..."abhay cldn't say further and his eyes became worried."we must do something!!we must go through that barrier and save pia.we have very small time left!!"anantya said."but what can we do?how can we get inside that stupid barrier?"sid at last opened his mouth and said something."there must be some way!!!"anatya said."damn that maihilli!!she is always one step away from us!!i c'nt even understand how can she get the news that we are hear??alina told us that the spell casted arround the house will cover each and every tresses and sence from vampires!then how can maithilli come to know about us?"sid asked in confusion."it was all my fault!!"evry1 was startled by the husky voice.

next part below😳

Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
"sometimes a lil mistake leads to a big oppertunity"
chapp 82(B)

panchi was seating silently at a corner of couch and sheding silent tears.at last she opened her mouth."ur fault?!what do u mean panchi?"alina asked."i am sorry alina!i am such a fool.u told u many times to be allert,but i...i called misha from the land line to confirm that we are allrihght and..."panchi was suddenly interrupted by sid's angry voice."and u told her everything r8?where are we,how we are!!each and every small details about us..."sid said in her angry voice."no sid,it's true that i called misha,but i didn't gave any information about where we were hidding!!trust ,me pls!"panchi said in an urging voice."huh...now look what mess u have done.u were lecturing me about my mistakes and now look at u!are u nuts panchi?don't u have any common sense?alina told u that maithilli's faithfull companion must be keeping eyes on ur house.and who told u to use land line?i'm sure they come to know evrything from that landline number.it was aneasy work for them to stalk this teleph no from ur bratty sister!!"sid scolded quite loudly.panchi didn't said an word and silent tears flow down from her eyes."leave it sid.her fault was not that much major!if she didn't do that we won't get the chance to defeat maithilli so fast!"alina said."alina said."what are u talkin about alina?how..."sid was interrupted by panchi's word."don't worry sid.i'm not talkin insane.i don't have the time to explain everything but pls keep trust on me and do as i said.will u agree?"alina asked looking to every1."ok lady alina.from now on we will follow ur guidence."anatya said."good!but first of all we have to think about to get inside the barrier and reach to pia somehow before maithilli got her blood."alina said.every1 drove into deep thoughts and their is a huge silent in the room.panchi was seating quitely sheding her tears.she was really feeling guilty for dragging pia into danger.although she didn't do it purposely bue mistake was mistake at last and it was a huge 1!she had to turn right each and evrything craeated by her.she really wished if she cld somehow help them!if she cld help them to go through that barrier.but how she was only a mere human!!suddenly something flashed into her mind and she jumped from the couch in exitement."alina we can!!!we can go inside the barrier!!!"panchi said with glittering eyes.every1 looked at her woth shocked face."hey panchi are u ok?did my scolding shakes ur mental state?"sid asked in comical confusion.but due to her exitement panchi didn't noticed that."no sid,i'm absolutely fine!did u forgotten we had allready crossed that barrier.remember when u and me went to search for pia and abhay?"panchi said with xcitement."holy crow,u r r8 panchi!!!u can get inside the barrier!!and if u can get inside we can follow ur invitation!!!"sid also jumped from the sofa."yeah,ur r8 sidharth!how can we forget that vampires barrier cldn't work on human!!miss panchi will u do that for us and lead us inside the barrier?"anantya asked looking towards panchi."without any doubt!"panchi said."what do u say lady alina?"every1's face turned towards alkina who was looking foroward with blank eyes."what happpened lady alina?"anatya said.alina's face became hard and he glanced towards abhay who was looking to her with a concentrated expression."sorry to say lord.but this time it won't be that much easier!"alina said thoughtfully."what do u want to say?"anatya asked."u will come to know quickly my lord!"abhay said.just after a moment four vampires came inside.anatya send them to keep an eye on barrier."what's the matter?"anatya asked.one vampire came foroward."there is a very interesting news my lord.a huge no of vampires frpm maithilli's clan are gathering out of the barrier and they seenms like they are protecting the zone and barrier!all are allerted and warmed up!"he informed."i told u that it won't be easier.maithilli doesn't want to keep any way for us!!perhaps she had lost her faith on barrier and send a huge no of soldires to resist us from going inside!!!"alina informed.every1's xpression became thoughtfull and allerted after the news.

precap:they saw them standing in front stretching through the never ending barrier.

reply guyzz😳
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmm da precap just made me think of Twilight breaking dawn part 2 where the fights begin
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Posted: 12 years ago
hope abhay save pia before maithali can get her blood
--Aaliyah-- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update !👏
Hope abhay saves Pia soon ! 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.Loved d piya's confidence in Abhay.Maithli,I just hate her!
Eagerly waiting 4 final battle n d maithli's defeat!
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Posted: 12 years ago
metz bohot dushat hai😡 ab kya hoga..!!!

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