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...Seema... thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
V v v nice update.first saurya and nw neil r hell bent on harming piya i just hate them.all n all a v lovely update.precap sounds interesting as well as romantic.continue soon.tons of thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi guyyzz!!!i'm posting next chap,i'm too much tensed🤔.as i promised i tried to make this chapp full of abhiya,but i don't know have i managed to portray this magnificent couple upto lil bit to ur expectationsbut i've tried,pls reply have i passed or not?😕 pls reply quickly,waiting finger crossedd...
"Bahot Muskil Lagta Hai Usse Duur Rehna,
Judai Ke Safar Ko Kum Karde.
Jitna Duur Chale Gaye Woh Mujhse,
Use Utna Kareeb Karde."
chapp 15

"oh no, what kind of element is this?aldehyde or ketone?!!"pia moaned,and clamped her head in frustration."hey pia,r u studying or fighting wid those 2 chem books from evening?"panchi asked looking at her condition."u r quite r8 panchi i'm doing 1 kind of fight!!!"pia moaned."but what's this?"panchi asked quriously."chemistry assignment!!"pia informed."whattt???!!!"panchi smilled in amusement."don't smile panchi!!there r 10 question and we have to submit it day tomorrow! and still i'm knocking down my head wid 2nd questn!!"pia said with frustrated face."don't panick yaar.ho jayega..but why misha is not doing assignment?she is only resting on bed!!!"panchi said."i don't have any tension birdie!!i'll copy from pia's assignment!!"misha said with a huge grin."what,misha!c'nt u do anythin urself? u knw pia's chem is not good.now go and help her finding answers."panchi said in a commanding voice and rolled her eyes."but birdie..."misha said,"go,or else i'm goin to call mom!"panchi said.so,misha reluctantly went.

abhay was not lil bit interested in meeting!he was all worried about pia,although he knew she didn't get a scratch but untill he saw her with his own eyes he cldn't be releaved.he was impatiently waiting when this clan leader would go.finally,when they r gone chand and haseena got ready for hunting trip."mom-dad i'm not comin for hunt."abahay said."but why haseena asked in confused face."i'm not hungry 2day!!"he said."abhay do u thnk we r dumb? i know that u wanted to go at pia's place.so, u r avoiding us now."chand said furiously."fi9, if u know,then don't try to stop me,as u said i didn't do anything wrong in todays meating.but if u stop me 2day,i won't ever listen to ur words."abhay said wid a steel hard voice.chand and haseena was also tensed aftr looking at his xpression.widout telling a single word he jumped out of the window.chand was going to follow him but haseena stopped her,"don't go chand when it comes to pia,no one can stop him!!"she said.

it was about 12 o clock at ni8! misha had allready became sleeping beauty,and pia still confused wid the 4th question.gosh if that was maths or physics assignment she would surely finish long ago.she didn't noticed the shadow apearing on window.

abhay didn't face any problem in noiseless jumping over the huge walls of dobriyal mansion and reach to pia's room window,also her room was in ground floor,then he peeped inside.the room was dark.only a tablelamp was glowing at the side table where pia was sitting with books and a paper.she seemed perfectly fi9.she was twisting the pain on her hand impatiently,her curls were carelessly scattered over her shoulders!!light was glowing on her angelic face and dark brown concentrated orbs.the sight was naturaly so beautiful.abhay was mesmerized and hypnotized, did she ever noticed how breathtaking she cld be with her each and evry natural posture,her anger,her smile,her grace,her smug while she thought about something wid concentration.she never tried to be attractive!!otherwise no boys in the clg cld take their eyes off.he came out of his trance when pia impatiently threw her pen ontable and keep her hand on temple,"enough i c'nt do this anymore.bhagwan,ab aap hi inka ans bata do!"she moaned.why was she frustrared,abhay tried to concentrate on her thoughts.ghosh,abhay c'nt cntrl his silent laughter after knowing about the questions.it was very easy,just a simple conversion,ultimate product wl be formic accid!!she mentioned her chemistry was bad,but that much!!!he never thought.

pia's head was atching,she closed her eyes for sometimes.she wished to take some water.but when she was about to get up her eyes shifted to the window.a huge sadow,got on her view."hey,who'se there?!!"pia screamed.the shadow suddenly dissapeared from the window.surely there was some1 tresspassing pia thought and quickly wrapped herself in a stoll and ran to the outside door with a torch in her hand.she quickly came in the lawn.the night was cold and soundless!! there was a little fog surrounding."hey whose hear? ans me!!"pia again screamed.but no 1 there but after sometimes a shadow due to the mild street light got into her view,some1 was behind that wall!!pia tipetoed to the wall but before she cld reach.a black fig quickly sweeped just in front of her wid tremendous speed leaving her dumbfounded!!pia noticed,a blur running fig at a very distance !!"hey stop!!!"she quickly followed although knowing that it's impossible to catch him now.but pia didn't concentrated on her footsteps and suddenly her feet colided with a hard stone on her runway,"ouchh..."she screamed in pain and loosed her balance.

just a few steps and abhay would be out of boundery,but before he heared pia's voice.he quickly turned back and saw wid horror stucked fce that pia had loosed her balance and her head was gonna knock down on the stone.widout thinking about the consequnce he stormed to her.before pia fell on the stony ground a musculine hand swiftly caught her breakable body and pia fell on a stone hard wide chest!pia was all in shock,she felt the hand of her captator embarrisng on her back.suddenly she felt too much cold,like she was lying over a huge ice cube rather than a human!how could a normal human body be that much cold?pia wanted to push him back!!but she cldn't.like her heart was forbidding her to do so.her all fear and confusions were washing away with the time and an unknown feeling flew on her body.her heart suddenly started to beat in a fast uneven speed.she was totally captured by this mysterios tresspasser.she didn't even thought to look up and sea his face,like she knew him very well,for so many years!!!

when abhay caught pia's falling body,he was totally aware and cautious that her blood smell didn't awake his vampire instinct.but rather than that the floral scent which was coming from her,totally supressed her blood smell.that smell!! he was again embarrasing menaxi!!the emotions and feelings which he was tressuring in his dead heart now overwhelmed him.abhay cldn't controle himself further.he bend and kissed on her neck curve!

that kiss was enough to set fire on pia's body.pia's all hesitation and coldness were gone away.passion floated into her body and her breath became faster along with her heartbit.she grabed abhay's black vest tightly over his musculine back!!!

abhay was surprised to c that pia also craved for his touch!!his all controle got loosened.the fire spread in both of them.abhay embareesed her more tightly and shifted his lips from her neck to throat curve,to her chicks.with his evry touch pia's body shivered,her heartbit and breath had quikened more,her lips parted into a more broad heavenly smile.her eyes were closed.abhay's lips tressed her earlobs,his cold breath floated through her hair.he kissed on her closed eyelids!!she didn't shattered by his touch.she had allready crossed all bounderies of fear.now abhay slowly moved towards her lips and before kissing her lips he suddenly hesitated.did he wanted it like that?no!!pia was not in her full sence,although she won't remember anything when she would get out of trance!!but he didn't wanted to do anything that cld offened her in futur.he had allready broken too much bounderies! he won't kiss her untill she acccept him wid her heart and soul and in her full sence!!he quickly took a breath of her overwhelming smell.sensing his hesitation pia opened her eyes and in mild street light two pairs of electrifying blue eyes caught her gaze!!they were so beautiful and hypnotyzing.she cldn't remove her eyes from them.looking into that mesmerizing eyes pia suddenly felt her eyesight becoming blur!!after some time she lost her sense and she again fall over abhay.abhay caresed her hairs and placed a small kiss on his hair.his xpression was shattered and painfull."i'm sorry pia,i have to make u unconcious.but it's not the time to know u about evreything!!!"he said with his painfull voice. he carried her into her room widout makin any noise and placed her on her bed.he gave a last kiss on her forehead.before leaving the room his eye fell on the desk wherw her unfinished chemistry assignment.a idea flickered on his mind and he smilled.vampires doesn't sleep!abhay sometimes felt very boared at night time when he didn't go to hunting trip!!it will be interesting tonight!!he quickly grabbed the question paper and sweeped out of the room widout a noise!

with the first ray of sunlight pia's eyes opened.and she quickly jumped on the bed.when did she felll asleep?she cldn't remember a single thing of yesterdays night."my assignment!!!!"pia screamed and ran to study table.but what she saw kept her gazzing towards the table,dumbfounded!!

her assignment was kept ready over the table wid all answers written correctly,with a beautiful,elegant and unknown handwriting!!!

precap:"do u understoood what u have to do?"neal asked."of course!!"the girl smirked confidently,"don't worry,pia jaiswal c'nt escpe!!"

so how was it?😊 reply reply...
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic Update ! 😳
Wow wow Abhay did Pia's assignment !!!
What's neil up to now ?😡
Update soon and thanks for the pm !😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read
my name is alicia pm me
merry christmas
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Posted: 12 years ago
Liked this part
wow Abhay did Pia's assignment
now what is neel plannig to do?
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Posted: 12 years ago
So sorry for late reply. Just caught up with last 2 updts. Dear u are doing a superb job. I loved chp 14 and 15.
In chp 14 The way piya remembered some part of her past life, and answered that question then abhiya moment in the beginning, then the way misha saved piya from neil was awesome.
In chp 15 abhiya were so passionate ufff. I loved that part where abhay backed out and then he did piya's assingnment. Wow just beautifully written.
I wonder what is neil upto now. Plz update asap.
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update dear!
precap me neil kisse bat kr raha tha??? T se????
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww...so so so cute update...I felt I was in piya place while doing that chemistry worj 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was fantastic.u have passed da exame with distinction.amazing.precap shws dat neil is planning something against piya.continue soon.thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update
abhay was so sweet
thanks for pm

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