WelCoMe to ABHIYA OS Celebration Updated-Page-150 JULY 30th - Page 36

Originally posted by: ashu1909

Beautifully written mandy do continue part 2 soon waiting eagerly

Originally posted by: shria

i loved it manasa😳 the concept is so awsome😉 loved abhiya!!
& please please please continu😳

Thanks Shria

Originally posted by: xxAqeelahxx

Heyy loved this a lot !! was long update but was very good ... like Abhay Pia Pov :)

Originally posted by: pkyekfan

This is sooo good!! Honestly I think it's worthy of being published!! Pleas continue soon can't wait! :)

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

Amaaazing part Manasa!!! Wonderfully written! Everything from d Passion,intensity,dat fire was dripping from this story.I so much loved it😃.
Here Abhiya r slayers,A welcome change!
I guess dat lady vampire was a messenger from Sid,well conditions apply if Sid has really been converted into a vampy!

I so much loved Abhiya here,well made an image of Jazz n Abhay in my mind!

I just cant wait 4 d next part now.Plz update asap.

Ps: Manasa this is a last warning 2 u.Plz stop ur rants abt ur writing.U r damn good writer n ability 2 explain things vividly is ur speciality.Dont ever think low abt urself.

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Huh? 😲 Electrifying is a lil too much 😛 but thanks for liking it 😳 To be honest I am not at all satisfied with what I wrote 😵

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

mandy i was busy with guests visiting at home, me formatting my system, running off to market, downloading updates all while i was not feeling well. so managed to read ur OS in 5 installments, aise mein comment kya karti, kuch samajh nahin aaya 😆

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

awsm os dear cntinue soon

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Haan I know...U r never satisfied with your work...The day you are satisfied u'll be publishing a record breaking best seller😆 Even then I bet you'll shoot your work down at your own press conference🤣

Puhleeese 😛 Me n write a book? 😛 I doubt if I will ever be able to write a column for a newspaper, bestseller dooor ki baat hai When it comes to creativity there r tons of writers here who r tons better than me 😛 To be honest Abhiya here r inspired by one of my all time fav couples. So the idea wasn entirely mine. I got the idea of slayer romance from VA n even the training part is inspired by it coz I suck at sports 😆 but yeah the main plot is defo my crappy idea 😛 So there u go 😛

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

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Sorry for late unres 😳 First of all I want to get a danda and bang it on your head for worrying so much and underestimating yourself 😡 😡 😡 No worries Tanzie 😆 But this isn wat u call a fairytale. Next update just gets darker I am afraid

It was a very true creative piece of writing, passionate and real dark story with wonderful, strong characters, fabulous writing style and right amount of passion, dark attraction, supernatural elements, suspense. it only makes you eager to read. I read it until 4 am of the morning and in single go I read it thrice. I loved it. 👏 👏 I have never read a slayer slayer story so it was even more interesting for me thn it already is. By the way the idea of slayer romance n training is from one of my all time fav stories but the main plot is my crappy idea of course 😆 So I cant take full credit for creativity but I suppose all of us writers do get inspiration from any story we have read or any incident we have experienced Donno but in my case it holds true.

I loved Pia's feistyness, strength and courage. Abhay's character and his determination to find his brother, his attraction and control towards Pia, their growing bonding everything. I dont prefer damsel in distress falling for shining knight kinda stories 😆 Rather I prefer one where both the partners r matched equally

Ihave a feeling siddarth is a vampire now or is it possible he is also responsible for Arnabs dad's death which might caught rift between Pia and Abhay 😕 just a wild guess. anyways, their passion is undeniable and I cant wait to read more 😳 Augustus is interesting and please update soonish. i love the supernatural things you write. 👏

totally hats off for the concept. total unique and this is what i called creativity. 👏 Ur theory on Sid is partly correct 😆 As I mentioned before, its not entirely my idea. I did draw inspiration from another story esp the training technique part. If u liked this one then I guess u might like my new FF too 😆 Tats 10 times more intense, darker n passionate