WelCoMe to ABHIYA OS Celebration Updated-Page-150 JULY 30th

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bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

tora superb os u write
amazing yar
loved the concept prince abhay and ugly piya
and how their love conquer all cured wow
superb

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bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

shrish lovely os yar
kiss of enemy ☺️
the way abhiya dance and how possessive abhay was for piya amazing
and the kiss was too hott
and the abhay dialogue to haseena that i mark my enemy ufff awsome
abhiya and this os 👏

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Resh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
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Wonderful shrish!! 👏The OS was simply amazing!! Here the situation..the setting of the story...everything was so different! I completely loved it. ❤️ 😳 And the line 'i love to hate my enemy to such an extent..' n 'i possess her...' were simply superb! 👏
Thanks a lot for sharing your story with us dear... 🤗
P.s. And I wont say tht I want an ss or ff for this story...and I guess the reason you know very well... 😆 😛 but it was truly a diffrnt concept.loved reading it. 😳

Thnx indu. I always adore a love story b/w protagonist where both r equally powerfull & there is lot of pull & push hence this was bst 2 show tht push-pull😆. I know u know tht its useless 2 ask me post SS hence u all shuld enjoy my OS only😆😆😆 & thnx 4 this lovely thread

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Resh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: Cute_Gal
dat was awesome..
loved it..

Thnx dear

Originally posted by: ..dishu..
good one shrish

Thnx dishu

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great os story's plz update soon
it's awesome story
thanks for the pm

Thnx yaar

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Resh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: mandy1024
That was some kiss Shrish ☺️ I so wish u could write an SS or FF on this 😳 Totally loved the concept of a dark angel falling for his sworn enemy or well like Abhay included he loves to hate her n I suppose the feelings r mutual on Pia's end as well 😆 Doesn't the wayward heart always craves what's forbidden to it, to desire? Loved it 👏

Thnx mansa😳

LOL U know yaar I have not evn posted my previous FF & SS so starting a new SS is a big no but if u wnt u can cont.. wid this OS as ur own SS & I can help u😆😆

As I told Indu. i love passionate & pull push love story hence wrote this😳

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Resh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: smdosi
Amazing!!...

Thnx😳

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Wow wow Shrish. This is what I call a dark fairytale. Please develop this into a fan fiction. It's brilliant!

Thnx shreya. Glad u loved my dark fairytale. LOL yaar I m too lazy 2 convert it into FF or SS😆

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
well thats acually a really gud surprise😉
and shrish u did a fab job..👏brilliant os👏

Thnx yaar. I m glad u loved this surprise😳

Originally posted by: ashu1909
wow shrishti its beautifull story.. of kissa kiss ka of abhiya

hahah thnx.Yep kissa kiss ka

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Resh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
Wow Shrish it was brilliant. what a OS.. dark fairytale I can say 👏 the kiss was indeed very raw and passionate. loved the entire sequence, the pull of Abhay and Pia. forbidden relationship - forbidden attraction of sworn enemies. its a superb concept for FF...make it a FF na 😃

Thnx tanzie. I always admire passionate-dark love story where both protagonist shuld b strong & there shuld b some pull-push hence came wid dis. U know my habit. How lazy I m abhi pehla FF & SS hua nhi toh yeh kahan se likh doon :P😆😆😆. LOL Tu likh de if u wnt I can help u :P😆

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Resh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: Punith...
Loved it...
Update soon

Thnx

Originally posted by: koli97
Superb,mindblowing 👏sooo romantic Abhiya☺️...I love this Enemy showering kiss☺️...I love this thread sooo much & waiting eagarly nxt😃

Originally posted by: meerubzara
nice os
very beautifully written
thanks for pm

Thnx dearOh thnx koli. Loving ur enemy is usally HOT😉😆

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Resh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: devilish-grin
awesum o.s by shrish
o.m.g abhiya kiss☺️
loved it

Thnx dear

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
fantastic os shrishti...the concept was different but i really feel u should write a short story on it.I know Abhiya kiss= HOT😆
thanks for pm indu:))))
its an amazing thread...lvd it

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987
lovely OS dear! OMG passion, intensity dripping frm every bit of it.Abhiya kiss was damn hott bt it cooled everything else by d downpour dat heavens showered!
Lovely piece of writing.

Thnx yaar. I m glad u found it passionate

Hhaha thnx agn😳

Thnx megha. I m glad u loved my concept but writing SS on this is difficult coz I m buzy & lazy😆😆