WelCoMe to ABHIYA OS Celebration Updated-Page-150 JULY 30th

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

@dhrish First of all really sorry for commenting so late yaar, but u know na busy these days.
Coming to the OS it was just wonderful yaar. U wrote it so amazingly, beautifully yaar, just fantastic!!!
I can't believe this is ur first OS, u were excellent!!!
I loved the way u narrated everything, the wishes of piya, misha and panchi, arnab trying to fulfill them, then the way he entered beast castle, then the beast allowing him to take that purple rose but on the condition that the one first to greet him should come to that beasr castle, then abhiya aka the beast and the beauty meeting, then piya falling in love with the beast, and both of their pains everything was described beautifully.
Last part was so touchy it brought tears in my eyes, but u gave a happy ending that made me happy.
I am telling u yaar do write more u are a fantastic writer and dare u say u can't write😡, i want more works from u😆!!!
Gr8 job!!!

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

@Tora First of all i just loved ur concept 'true love' and u represented it beautifully through this OS. Just fantastic OS yaar. U managed to write it just perfectly yaar!!!

I loved the way u narrated the whole thing. In this single OS u showed many emotions. Loved the way abhiya met and u showed the inner beauty of one.
Ending was the best part, it was so dreamy a real fairy tale, true love broke the curse wow amazing!!!
Gr8 job by a fantastic write of IF!!!

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Wonderful Tora...its really lovely👏True Love--its suit with our couple Abhiya always

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

amazing os.it was beautiful.lv this thread. Thanx 4 pm

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sonygeny

@sonygeny

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

awesome update divya n tora.

indu thank u so much for this thread..plz keep it in its way..all os are jst fab.

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Simply amazing tora 👏 this was sooo beautiful , a perfect fairy tale and it was wonderful , hayeee loved the abhiya confession and loved abhay for excepting piya even if she had the disfigured face the end was beautiful And oh I also loved the way u described the birth of both babies , great job tora 👏

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Divya6696

@Divya6696

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Edited Pg. 25..

Sorry again..

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

its b'ful tora jst lik a dream wow!!!!!!1

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kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Amaazing OS Tora! Such a lovely-dovely storyline! Beautifully written.Oh i so much loved how piya's voice attracted Abhay n he was so restless after this dat he set up alone 2 find his princess.Finally they met n yet again d same moral "true love never sees external beauty" was made true wid this fairytale!

I m so much loving this thread:D

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

thanks to each and everyone for reading and commenting..😳. sorry we could not reply separately but your love and support always acts as a motivation guys..😳..thanks a lot...love you all...🤗

Note: now guys here's a surprise for you all...the next update is written by one of our well-known.. dangerous yet sweet person..😳 😉 .yes she is known for her sense of humor and is immensely loved writer of our forum...!!😛 any guesses..? 😉

well she is none other than cuteshristi..aka..

she-devil..aka..shrish...😃

okey...so here goes the update friends...please hit the like button after reading and please...donot forget to leave your comments as that what keeps us going...😳

thank you..🤗

--indu

Edited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago