OS : A ray of Sunlight

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: shria
just one word shreya it was just superb😳

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Romita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

It's beautiful shreya.
I am in love with ur writings too good yaar. Ufff just love the way u wrote abhay's feeling. Sab yaad aagaya fir. O god missing them more now :(
Once more gr8 job!!!!!

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Trishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

u knw wat shreya... this scean of pkyek made me restless for 2-3 days... i dont want pia to behave like dis after knwing abhay truth and i hate her 4 dis as she herself want to knw his truth and when cat is out she was nt able to digest it... but when wid calm mind think abt dis den i felt dat its normal rexn of any sane human on dis reality... nw i feel she was nt wrong... thnx 4 dis os shreya...

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Ayesha khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Its so beautiful ❤️ i felt Like i was there when it all happenef ...had goosebmbs on my skin 😛 ... i luv that scene ya phle gussa araha tha piya pr but when she came back i was jumping infornt of tv n my mom asked "whats wrong with u?" 😆 ...abhay's frustation , his sadness n at n end his smile ..u made me relive this all over again 🤗 thanks for it shreya .. u were just fab 👍🏼

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Renu

@abhiya_kapi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Abhay's thoughts were heartbreaking for me. Shreya you literally placid his thoughts very well. I could see same scene flashing in front of my eyes. Abhay miss you so much. 😭

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bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

lovely os shreya...loved the way u narrate the abhay feelings its look like i am refreshing the episode of pkyek...

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Oh Shreya, I made a post of Abhay's feelings - his dialogues, today and this piece was one of them. I was actually playing the episode and writing and this one , I had replayed n number of times. Still when I read your update, I feel it is something fresh. Thank you dear.

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

lovely OS Shreya!! beautifull!! 😳 👏 loved the way you included small yet signifiant things which made this OS wonderful n that particular scene even more beautiful!!! ⭐️ some of them are-' she isnt standing there to watch the view'.. 'he threw the suitcase carelessly in superhuman style'..and u wrote it frm abhay's pov, I like that!! 😊 you portrayed his feelings wonderfully so much so that the scene literally kept playing infrnt of my eyes!! loved reading this OS dear.. ❤️ thanks!! 😊

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