SS : CAPTIVE SPIRITS UPDATED ON PG 36- PART 9*aniversary special* - Page 6

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I'm surprised nafs this part is written by you. 😲
You are a great horror writer. Do u have any idea you hooked me till end of this update.
Your description about Piya's fear was awesome. I felt as if I was present with Piya when she was stammering, getting scared of glowing and flickered bulb.

So its a girl's hand mark. hmm is it Maithli? 🤢

Oh finally chand and Arnab face-to-face.

Lovely update nafs. I simply enjoyed this part. Thanks 4 PM and do update soon. 😃

Awesome awesome awesome update nafi!!!
Oh god simply beautifully written.
Wow tnat was hell of a scary one. I was hell scared while reading the whole thing specially thay night scene was o god most scary one.
U described each and everything beautifully.
I loved the way u created mystery and included this scary effect so well.
I wonder what had happened to abhay, I am sure he has some connection with all this mystery.
I am eagerly waiting to know whose ghost was that.
lol chand anf arnab are frnds here good, I am waiting for abhiya meeting, I mean officially, good one.
Next time I want u to make it more scary ;)
I would love to get scared like this rofl
lol just joking, once more amazing, superb, brilliant, awesome job yaar!!!
I am loving this ss completely, plz continue soon, gr8 job!!!!

nafi scary update madhu was snoring 😲 😆
nafi that night scene was really scary i actually got scared
i read it in night only ufff so aur dar lag raha hai 🥱 thnk god im sleeping with my mom 😆
chand & arnav friends 😲 nafi from next update it shuld be less scary 😡 😡 cozz im a big darpok 😆
continu soon 😳

Awesum update nafi.n some bits were scary too.is dat ghost metz?n wat about abhay? Cntinue soon
w8ing 4 mystery to unfold

Very nice.Does that hand print belong to Metz the bhootni?When will hottie become active?Continue soon

nafi 😡 agli bar se kam darana😡 oh man i was sweating so badly...!!! btw nice update😳

hey awesome update ab jaldi sab reveal kar.I guess the spirit is of the gal who was killed in beginning of OS.May b Abhay used 2 love tht gal & somebody else or may b abhay killed her out of his senses

awesome update
interesting story
who was there? was it Metz? how Abhay lost his memory?
enjoyed reading it. I like horror stories😃. Usually I don't get scared reading horror stories but reading this one I got scared😆

Phew that was quite scary for sum1 as weak-hearted as me!!!! Btw thnx 4d pm..

wow do bichade purane doste mile gaye mujhe lagta hai this house earlier belong to raichands... oopr a mysterious house nice...