SS : CAPTIVE SPIRITS UPDATED ON PG 36- PART 9*aniversary special* - Page 7

Naf, Naf, Oh my dear Naf, I simply loved it. Horror genre is one of my favourites and my, you do write very well. But it just looks like a beginning of some mystery and you mentioned this as an OS. Do you have many chapters. Then I am warning you to update fast. I can't tolerate suspenses.

lovely and awsome update flora...👏

continue soon...

thanx for pm!🤗

Originally posted by: abhiya_kapi

Res.
I'll read and then comment. 👍🏼

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I'm surprised nafs this part is written by you. 😲 yes its written by me😆
You are a great horror writer. thank you Do u have any idea you hooked me till end of this update.
Your description about Piya's fear was awesome. I felt as if I was present with Piya when she was stammering, getting scared of glowing and flickered bulb.
wow thats great means i am sucessful making it horror🤣
So its a girl's hand mark. hmm is it Maithli? 🤢 wait and read ahead 😉😆

Oh finally chand and Arnab face-to-face. yeap😊

Lovely update nafs. I simply enjoyed this part. Thanks 4 PM and do update soon. 😃 will try to update soon

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Awesome awesome awesome update nafi!!! thanks🤗
Oh god simply beautifully written.
Wow tnat was hell of a scary one. I was hell scared while reading the whole thing specially thay night scene was o god most scary one. 😆but i wasnt strange🤔😆
U described each and everything beautifully.
I loved the way u created mystery and included this scary effect so well.
I wonder what had happened to abhay, I am sure he has some connection with all this mystery. yes he has fr sure😊
I am eagerly waiting to know whose ghost was that.
lol chand anf arnab are frnds here good, I am waiting for abhiya meeting, I mean officially, good one.
Next time I want u to make it more scary ;) sure will try too😉
I would love to get scared like this rofl 🤣good
lol just joking, once more amazing, superb, brilliant, awesome job yaar!!!
I am loving this ss completely, plz continue soon, gr8 job!!!!

Originally posted by: shria

nafi scary update awww poor baby😆madhu was snoring 😲 😆 🤣
nafi that night scene was really scary i actually got scared thats good then😉
i read it in night only ufff so aur dar lag raha hai 🥱 acha he humesha raat ko hi parna😆 thnk god im sleeping with my mom 😆 good fr health🤣
chand & arnav friends 😲 nafi from next update it shuld be less scary 😡 😡 no sorry cant do that😛😆cozz im a big darpok 😆 i know it😆
continu soon 😳