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pkyekfan

@pkyekfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

"Abhay didn't even realize that the icecream was smashed on his suit…as he was lost in the beautiful closed eyes face with fear expression…."...I wonder what he is going to say when he finds out!! Great update!!:)

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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: hifzaa
thnx for the pm dear
lovely os 😳
abhay n pia part was short

thanks next update there will be long part of abhiya😳

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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
amazing updt Nafz👏

thanks

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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: barki
wow abhiya part but short😔

next part will be abhiya more😛

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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: shria
awsome update nafi😉 loved abhiya's meeting😳
so abhi vo jhagra karege ki bas aise hi chor dege😆😆
continu soon😛

thanks darpok😛...well lets see!!😉

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

@floral212: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

amazing os

read it all today

the suspense element is really intriguing

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@--Janvie--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Wow yar Really a Superbly Amazing OS!I just loved it.
The last update was really terrific man.When its written the whole house is empty and silence all around.I was
actualy scared like hell.And all this thanks to your wonderful writing skills.

Pls add me to your buddy list and pls do pm me whenever you Update.Its a humble request by me.So pls accept it.
Pls Update Soon yar,why you havent updated for so long are you unwell..?

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Amazing upd jungli Beeli 👏 hayee love this os yaar , it's everything family , love , suspense and my fav of all horror ! U wrote everything beautifully ! And wow abhiya ki meeting ho gayi , can't wait for there face off and piya misha were eating cornetto , hayeee yummy

And hawww ladki , u haven't upd since November ! Upd soon and see I commented , told u I will 😃