A Trip To Vampires House (ON HOLD) - Page 7

Superb nd amazing.cant wait for nxt part.

Amazing update dear

new ff grt mansi cont it asap 👏

Originally posted by: .YaJuShI.

new ff grt mansi cont it asap 👏

I did not write it Yajushi, Abhiya_kapi has written it😛

Excellent nd welldone.a v nice concept.

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Res 😊
Hmm...do the story moves in flashback...defo her dreams have meaning which points towards upcoming dangers...the death description esp of trushna was spine chilling...ultimate horror stuff...am sure others must have died even more brutally...really wanna no happening and her days in the palace...where r Chandeena...well wait and watch..and really waiting for other updates yaar ...tu kahaan hai...mera idea seriously follow kar rahi hai kya. ..writers consultancy khol rahi hai kya... 😆

haha jenni thodi busy thi apne kaam pe. 😆

This story will move forward based on flashback. Piya is telling her story, but at certain situation, I'll be switching the POV's as per the contestants views. It will be more interesting when you will read their POV's too. 😉

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

sorry for late reply yar...computer kharab tha😭

anyways all the parts are awesome...👏

madam y don't u pm yar😡

u know sometimes main bhul jati hun ki tumne kaun kaun sa update kiya hai😭

aww juhi I hope your pc is fine now? 😃
Thanks yaar. 😳
Sorry juhi I've given that responsibility to Romi. She was busy with her exams, but now she is back and she will PM everyone, whenever I'll update. 😳

Originally posted by: Riyan-vivu

Great story

Thanks Riyan. 😳

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story pl\z update soon
it's an amazing story to read

Thanks Alicia. I'll update this soon. 😳

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update

Thanks megha. 😳