Abhiya SS: Magnetic Dipoles Epilogue(+NOTE) page 168

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hema

@hema_rawat

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#881

nice update
its very sad ,pia's parents blame her 4 her brother death , how can dey do dat to her ,deir own daughter .poor pia .

ps- l knw I didnt cmnt regularly on updates nd whenevr I do ,dey r nt mre dan 2 wrds
bt I do read dem shreya , I love ur updates , sorry 4 hurtng ur feelngs .

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#882

Thanks a lot for a wonderful update Shreya.
So this was what was haunting her in her nightmares - that she felt responsible for her kid brother's death.
But she was 14 then, did she lose her memory after this incident that she never remembered the incident when she was conscious.

You have handled such a matured subject very well. I had absolutely no idea how this SS would shapeup when you first started it. But now I am feeling sad that it is coming to an end. But somethings have to end so that new things come up.

You are so young, yet you are an excellent writer Shreya. We are really lucky to have awesome writers in our Forum.

Please do write more on Abhiya (esp some supernatural stuff)

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#883

Res. 😆

giv me sum tym 😆
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DONE 😆 😆 srry 4 being late 😛
awesome updt shreya... abhiya moments, drunk abhay, piya hd lft abhay's home, abhay's bday, gift,misha's entry, Gaurav's truth, & finally piya's truth ws shcking...i luved it 👏
it hs been b'fully written

Edited by luckdiya - 12 years ago

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DestroyedInLove

@DestroyedInLove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#884

Amazing update👏.👏.👏..U r one of best writers of this forum...
OMG!!!so Nikhil was Pia's brother...Felt bad for Pia & Nikhil🥱,😒,🤔...Abhay really loves Pia...he is always with Pia..😃

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#885

great update shreya... it was so emotional update... well its really shocking that piya had a younger bro and she blamed herself for his death... well misha did a right decision to asked abhay for help ... poor piya felt bad for her and the way u described the nightmare scene of piya and roof scene awsome ... this side of abhay is so adorable ... well hope abhay will heal her wounds ... cont soon

Edited by bellaaa - 12 years ago

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#886

first of all superb update shreya!👏
nvr thought that piya had a younger bro😲
hw come she had forgotten abt her bro?😕 she remembered wen she saw the pic right?😕
waiting to see hw will abhay handle her 😳
continu soon!!

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#887

Originally posted by: ..dishu..
what can i say shreya, but i guessed this very thing right from the beginning of this SS, coz this is just me you have written though unknowingly😭

Aww, Dishu... I don't even know what to say to this.

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#888

Originally posted by: flora212
arrrghhh i hate to come in fourth always😡😡ok coming to point...this wa superb update!!!⭐️i am feelintg bad fr pia...i loved how abhay tried to make pia ok!!! and was pia really forgot about her bro???😕and why pia went numb listening bio teachers death!!😕 update soon

Yes Piya forgot about her brother entirely. Hearing about her Bio teacher's death triggered a reaction in her brain and paved the way for her memory to return..ditto with the photograph

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#889

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
oh my poor piyu! her parents blamed her for her own brother's death😭
I very well understand how it feels because...😭😭
Piya was suffering from so many years...I think now she won't be having nightmares atleast...!

That's true Piya's nightmares are stopping now :)