Abhiya SS: Magnetic Dipoles Epilogue(+NOTE) page 168 - Page 87

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Again i'm lost...really I dont know weather to comment from just the way I do always..keeping myself detached..or should I comment what I felt emotionally?..!! Hmm...i guess I will do it from both sides!

So..this was the big thing we were waiting to face..and we did!! I was expecting..infact we all were expecting this to happen...only we didnot knew when! All through the previous updates I wondered everytime..when I will have to encounter this phase..and how it would be...but I knew it would all happen unexpectedly...without warning..that is anytime...becoz though this mission was planned by abhay but sitations dont go by the way like we always want them to ! So thats what happened...we came over it..and though I knew pia was going to face her nightmare soon but it all happened..suddenly..the party..they were enjoying there...then the news..of their teacher's sudden demise..and then the vital part..it all fell in their exact places...! And The turning point of the story is here!! Yes..it is the most vital turning point..and shattering as well..!
I guessed it long back...i dont exactly remember in which update...but I took the hint..and knew there was or better say is a memory..something..someone close related to pia..for what she held herself responcible..the thing she didnot do, yet sadly, was accused of doing..
Am I talking nonsence..? Maybe I am! Can u feel that I am litterally struggling to write a comment..? You know why? Because when a story takes on an issue that is serious and deals with the pains and tribulations of human mind..and the severe repurcassions of it on humans..then it becomes difficult..difficult to just give a comment casually..and not get attached to it..!! And so it gets hard of how and what to say..where to start..and where to end..as there are soo many things..emotions..pieces to pick up...that one wonders what can be left..and I am in that phase..still unsure what should I mention..or am I leaving the vital points behind..?!!! So am really sorry if this doesnot really seem to be a comment ...

I am aware that I havent praised u yet..bt I suppose am still living in the story..still I am beside/behind pia where she holds the photo and whispers nikhil..! And for a moment we see her drifting in the past..! And Maybe i'm still there where she she cries and calls abhay by many names thinking him to be the faces those have hound her dreams all these years...and am still there where pia tells..the story ..the sad part that changed her life and herself...!
and above all her tormented..pained face still lingers in my thought! And all this becoz they were soo alive..!
I cant call the update great..no..becoz it deals with the raw emotions and a painful discovery of the protaganist..our Pia! The wounds were so deep and and they left such an agonising effect in my mind that I cant say it was great! Cant when it deals wth a shattered..broken inside..of the daring..smart..pia! But ya this part also let us hope..hope that pia has opened up and eventually her torments will ease and as a result a new..different..rejenuvated..lively pia will come out..with more confidence and vigour! So from that angle yes..i will call it not just great but amazing update!! 👏
and from a literal pov The entire story is greatly plotted and sincerely explained!!
And I cant tell how wonderfully you have done the whole thing..!!! How wonderfully you have brought out the inside story of pia that not for a moment it seemed unreal!! 👏 beautifully written and wonderfully convincing!! ⭐️
and oh ya..one thing..being a reader of this ff from the beginning I had for the first time two things to ask or rather to clear..for my understanding..but I forgot what I intended to mention.. 🤔 anyway..will ask if I remember...

And a huge applause for the way you pulled the story so far..!! Dealing with emotional facets whether its romantic or any other..is not easy..infact the most difficult thing..and you are doing a fabulous job here!! And now I am waiting for abhay..him to shove away
His insecurities..and come out of it with a new outlook and gest for life! 😊

P.s please continue soon!! And even if I cant comment plz do know that I do read it! Maybe I wont be able to comment as I have my exams but I will be back once it is over. 😉 So till then keep going on..👍🏼 and thanks for the pm and for writing here...because of that we got an amazing writer like you! 🤗

OMG This was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. update Shreya!!!!!!!!!!👏,👏,👏.

awesome update.things are clearing up now.so misha went to abhay dat day for seeking help regarding this incident which took her brothers life.dats da reason behind her nightmares as she was blamed for his death.mrs.dsouza death really acted as a trigger for her fear to come in open.thanx a lot for pm.looking forward hw will abhay help piya in overcoming her past.

wow, almost all scenes are really touching to heart . When abhay said to pia , I promised , i'll surelly tell everything , after reaching home ,then pia started worrying . After reaching to home when abhay said to pia our bioteacher is no more , pia cried & can't take it more & again & again asked to abhay is it accident , it really show how pia that time pia was vulnerable .
After that misha came & gave things to pia , it almost plan of abhay & misha , its good work together for pia brighter future , when pia saw nikhil photo , it striked the correct point
In evening , when abhay taken pia to terrace then start walking on railing then this time pia remember her brother accident , nothing fault of pia but pia blamed himself , what her parent told to pia . This accident really effect pia through innerly which cause effect at presnt time.
Waiting for nxt update
thanks for pm & continue soon

bad di di. rula diya na mujhe 😭 . but awsome updt. felt bad for piya. she had to suffer so much. and what a plan?finally abhay did it. and u r ending this ss?jaise lagta hai abhi to shuru hua tha. but di kamse kam iss ss mein mujhe abhiya ke bachche dekhnein hai. awsome updt. thanks for the pm.

wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm

I feel so bad for Piya.
So,Nikhil was her younger brother.
I hope her nightmares may stop soon now.
This was an amazing part.
I liked the way Abhay handled Piya and took care of her.
plz update the next part soonest.
Take care!

i felt really sad for nikhil and pia even more so. her parents were beep beep. nice update

Whoa where is story heading too its really awesome continue sooner