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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1011

I really hate it when you end so abruptly like this Shreya 😆
Please yaar, dont keep them separated like this. Unhe jaldi milao.
How I wish, Piya's heart conquers her mind and wishes sincerely for him to come back to her.

"Abhay, kaho, kaho yeh sab ek bura sapna hai aur wapas chale aao mere paas"
So who was one who sent the message from Alina's phone. Was it Alina or Piya?
I am sorry that this one is coming to an end. I am going to read this one again and again.

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jack-12

@jack-12

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1012

it was sad, but still one word for the entire update- Amazing!!

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#1013

U know I have technically quit IF but I couldn't resist reading it any longer n I did. I read the last two updates n my heart is broken to tiny pieces now 😭 I could write an essay, a long one at that but right now I am not in the state. I will give a detailed comment on both the updates later but I want u to know it was FANTASTIC 👏 u have outdone urself with those two updates n I am speechless 👏 but I am still sad 😭 I hope u understand n forgive me for not being able to comment. It's just tat there r very few stories here tat I have got myself attached to n right now I am not in the state to say anything 😭

Edited by ..mandy.. - 12 years ago

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#1014

emotional update

"he got a
text from Alina's number.
It simply said, 'Abhay, I am going
to kill you slowly and make it
hurt!!!! :@" wht does it mean?
is she pregnant? 🤣srry 4 d bakwass guess :P

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1015

oh shreya y did u do dis😭😭 i thought dat abhay won't lev the house but then
piya shuld hav once listened to abhay but... piya is soo broken & so is abhay😔
& the last text from alina 😆 i was actually laughing reading dat😆😆 is piya preggo or wat??😉😉 nw re unite my abhiya soon😈
im really loving this ss its so simple yet so unique😳 continu soon🤗

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1016

well what to say? I really dnt know! The update was depressing and sad! I have nthng to add on my part. 😔
p.s. I guess this is the smallest comment i have ever given bt really ths is a kind of update tht dsnt have that shade of hope anywhere..behind the depressing sadness that make one see some glint of..tiny hope! Bt no! this is so sad that its a total black color ..update for me. Sorry cnt say anythng mre!

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captainplus

@captainplus

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#1017

sad update 😭 😭 😭

hope the MU clears soon

last part is confusing 😕

tnx 4r the pm 😊

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1018

Originally posted by: ..dishu..
😭 😭 i dont have the words to say anything right now. u just made me more depressed 😭 😭

Oh gosh Dishu sorry😭

Originally posted by: ririrararaatry
aww it was such a sad update😭..poor piya and also abhay.they both r suffering so much😭and another mysterious ending.what happen to piya???has she done something stupid ??😡😡or she is pregnant 😛update soon😳

Pregnant😲Maybe😆

Originally posted by: samwllms
nice updt but sad one...

Thanks

Originally posted by: Andromeda001
Hey shreya i was talkin abt being stalked at my lab nt IF. I ve huge field work n whenevr i come bak senior scholars hover around like anything n at home too, u know cant comment wid my father around most of d times coz these r exam days :D

QUOTE=Andromeda001]This was stupendous update Shreya👏 bt really a sad one. Abhiya r back to square one.

Abhay didn't even tried dat well to convince Piya. I know she is hell stubborn n d part of convo dat she heard was really a shock to her bt i hate misunderstandings😭 esp b/w Abhiya😭.

Can't trust Piya in this matter more coz she is in vulnerable condition and can do anything!!!

Abhiya had picked up each others' habits😳 bt now everything is destroyed. Hope MU clear soon.

At last dat message was frm Piya na??😕😉

Oh ok lol😆

Hmm are AbhIya really back to square one?😉 No Abhay didn't try because he couldn't take more rejection He was hurting too Was it from Piya?😆 I won't say😛

Originally posted by: Janani24
OMG this is the sadest update ever 😭 pls update a happy update soon it really hurts😭 ur writing was awesome and your words directly hit the heart👏 update soon and pls do make sure that it is a happy one plsss😊

Thanks. A happy update? Not sure but the next update might be less unhappy😕
Thanks a lot. That's really high praise😳

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1019

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav
god
what now
did piya do something
update soon

Hmm..maybe😛

Originally posted by: arwakantawala
Very Very God but it literally made me cry Abhay's pain is more then Pia but he cannot share it with anyone

Yes he is going thru a tough time

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
meri poor piya😭 mujhe ladke bilkul pasand nai😡

abe ladkiyan pasand hai kya???😲

Originally posted by: didlr
had tears in my eyes:'(
but great writing thanks fr pm:)

Thanks a lot😳

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu
It's a very sad update 😭😭😭
You wrote really nice shreya but it s very sad
Ad was thr last text abhay got piya send it from Alina's phone
Thanks for the pm

Hmm...wait till the next update

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
abhay is stupid... if got chance i am gonna murder him... what he think of himself that pia gonna move on after betrayl, if i was at pia's place i take a road to destruction 4 myself just to show him dat moran see u r responsible 4 dis...
wish atlest he once being man and go to her and do everything to set all at right place... get some brain u idiot raichand...

If you murder Abhay Pia will murder you painfully😆 I guess you haven't understood him that well or its more probably my mistake

Originally posted by: EternalAbhay
Well written but as much as i hate to say this, Abhay is wrong here😡 Cud he jus not tell her that she was more than a patient ?

I hate this trait in men 🤢 They jus dont try to sort anything for xyz reasons n they jus keep their feelings to them.. Idiots 🤢

He will I guess...in time😛

Originally posted by: harinisriram39
The flash back explains everything now. And my God, Piya misunderstood everything. Now please dont separate them for years yaar. I am sorry that the SS is coming to an end soon. I had no idea how it would be when you started. But it turned out really well. Now its one of my favourites. Please do end it in a good note yaar. No more separations please.

Originally posted by: harinisriram39
I really hate it when you end so abruptly like this Shreya 😆
Please yaar, dont keep them separated like this. Unhe jaldi milao.
How I wish, Piya's heart conquers her mind and wishes sincerely for him to come back to her.

"Abhay, kaho, kaho yeh sab ek bura sapna hai aur wapas chale aao mere paas"
So who was one who sent the message from Alina's phone. Was it Alina or Piya?
I am sorry that this one is coming to an end. I am going to read this one again and again.

Harini, thanks so much😳 Don't worry I make up for my endings by updating😆

Alina or Piya..keep guessing😆

Originally posted by: jack-12
it was sad, but still one word for the entire update- Amazing!!

Thanks a lot😳

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1020

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.
that was a stunner of an update shreya⭐️ ⭐️...so brilliant.👏 👏..and it was so heart-wrenchingly sad...u know i wish i'd step through the screen and bring them together again..i can't bear them in so much pain..😭 😭..
omg..why did u stop there??? 😲why did alina send that text...can't wait to know...my heart is pumping faster in anxiety than abhay's now😛...hope he goes rushing back to see what the matter is...please please make them meet soon..and don't stop at their meeting in the next update...i like leaving cliffhangers...but i hate coming across one while i read..😆 i know i'm sadistic😉..

Aww Tora🤗 Why did ALina send..you will know next chapter😛 n yes this is your punishment for leaving cliffies😆 see how it feels?😆

Originally posted by: ..mandy..
U know I have technically quit IF but I couldn't resist reading it any longer n I did. I read the last two updates n my heart is broken to tiny pieces now 😭 I could write an essay, a long one at that but right now I am not in the state. I will give a detailed comment on both the updates later but I want u to know it was FANTASTIC 👏 u have outdone urself with those two updates n I am speechless 👏 but I am still sad 😭 I hope u understand n forgive me for not being able to comment. It's just tat there r very few stories here tat I have got myself attached to n right now I am not in the state to say anything 😭

Thanks so much Mandy and I am sorry too I am just honoured that you commented😳

Originally posted by: luckdiya
emotional update

"he got a
text from Alina's number.
It simply said, 'Abhay, I am going
to kill you slowly and make it
hurt!!!! :@" wht does it mean?
is she pregnant? 🤣srry 4 d bakwass guess :P

Hain? Piya pregnant?😲 Maybe😆

What does that mean...you wil know😛

Originally posted by: Bleak_House
well what to say? I really dnt know! The update was depressing and sad! I have nthng to add on my part. 😔
p.s. I guess this is the smallest comment i have ever given bt really ths is a kind of update tht dsnt have that shade of hope anywhere..behind the depressing sadness that make one see some glint of..tiny hope! Bt no! this is so sad that its a total black color ..update for me. Sorry cnt say anythng mre!

I am really sorry dear hmm...I hope next update won't be that black

Originally posted by: captainplus
sad update 😭 😭 😭
hope the MU clears soon
last part is confusing 😕

tnx 4r the pm 😊

Yes last part was meant to be confusing😆

Originally posted by: shria
oh shreya y did u do dis😭😭 i thought dat abhay won't lev the house but then
piya shuld hav once listened to abhay but... piya is soo broken & so is abhay😔
& the last text from alina 😆 i was actually laughing reading dat😆😆 is piya preggo or wat??😉😉 nw re unite my abhiya soon😈
im really loving this ss its so simple yet so unique😳 continu soon🤗

Are I aim to surprise, you should know that😆 good to know I made someone laugh😆 why is everyone thinking piya is pregnant? am i that transparent?😆