Beggin On Your Knees For Me Abhiya updtd pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Nice start Kiara 😊 So both Abhay n Pia r bonded in an unwanted relation by a person they both loved the most? Feeling bad for Paridhi n I hope they both find solace in each other though its too much to ask for at this moment I suppose 😭
PS: Please do accept my buddy request n keep me updated on ur FFs dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum concept and lovely start kiara! 🤗 it was soo heartwrenching but beautifuly written dear!! 👏 plz continue asap ...want to knw how their life takes turn after this mishap...
p.s. and I guess I dnt have to ask for pms..but still for reminder, keep pming me... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
nice start😊
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
First up:
whoa another FF... Another one to bug you for :P
Haunted is also one of my fav songs, thanks for including that...

Drish... Cartoon Network??
Abhay loved Paridhi? So why does Pia think of him as a 'player' or did I miss something?
Paridhi is a nice name. Thumbs up.
Continue sooon please!
The idea of your dedicating chapters is nice. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
kiara nice start
loved the concept
ohh gos paidhri poor her yar
but hope now abhiya do some gud but i know its difficult for them to do this
plzzz cont soon and pm me too
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
nice concert
amazing story
would love to read more
continu soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Amazing start yaae kiara, plz continue and update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful start.amazing.👏plz do pm me whnever u update.continue soon.⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beggin' On Your Knees For Me

CONCEPT

Mending a broken heart is a horrible and difficult task.
NO! You don't need a spanner and all the other tools. But instead all you need is something else - a fixed heart.

They say that destiny rules the lives we live.
They sat that we are lead to the same destination and the decisions we make do nothing but alter the routes and decide how exciting our journey would be.
They also said that Karma is a bitch who bit you in the ass.
If only we knew that love and pain were the part of the same package.
And accepting them was the best deal we could ever make.

Abhay Raichand once lead a life filled with fun and enjoyment.
A life where no one mattered to him and where no one affected or was attached to him.
He lived without the fear of losing someone.

Until he met Paridhi Dobriyal. Paridhi was the girl who bothered to look past his cold exterior, so he did the only thing that he could think of to keep her with him forever. He asked her to marry him and she agreed and then he started falling for his bestfriend.

Moment by moment until she betrayed him and left him promised to her sister - the younger Dobriyal, Piyali Dobriyal.

The same Piyali who he tried his best to stay away from.

The very same Piyali who haunted his memories.One particular memory he couldn't quite put his finger on.

If only it helped that his bethrothed Piyali hates the mere sight of him and avoided him at all costs.



Piyali was a girl whose instincts drove her actions. She was the girl who lived her life to the fullest and broke all the rules that pretty much existed much to the displeasure of her elder sibling Paridhi.

The very sister who had accepted the role of a mother figure in
Piya's life.

The very sister who protected
Piya with all she ever had.

Piya's bestfriend, elder sister, mother and confidant all rolled in one.

But when
Piya loses her elder sister something inside her snaps and the bad girl decides to change.

Driven by the simple idea of becoming the sibling Paridhi ever wanted
Piyali to be. Piyali changes into someone no one ever dreamt she would ever turn out to be - cold, unfashionable and a social recluse who lives in her own bubble and hardly shows any emotion.

And then comes Abhay - her new fiance, her bethrothed.

The guy she hated the mere existence of.

The guy who had forgotten the very thing that happened between them.

The guy who had chosen her sister over her.


They say love works wonders, is this one of them ?





How was that?
40 likes or loads of comments to get me back to work.
And yeah, I'm still dedicating chapters so remember to be extra nice (:

And P.S. I'm so sorry that I don't reply to comments. I don't geally get spare time to reply to all of them. But I try (: If that helps *giggles*

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