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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: i_luv_abhiya
nice! pm me!

thanks dear.will pm u..😊

Originally posted by: meerubzara
amazing storyline thanks for liking dear..😳plz continu soon & pm me

will b updating today! will surely pm u! 😊

Originally posted by: tara.singhania
Awww poor Piya! Abhay lef her on her wedding night! How cruel!! Humph!!...but what made him do so?? yes its sad tara...u will know soon why!!
Why Piya said he is angry on her?? What did Piya do?? Urrgghhh so many questions and only person who can answer i.e. you! So update soon..we'll be waiting for your pm.. yes..wiil b updating today dear..! yep! will pm u..😊

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd
well I loved it but hats off 2 u coming up with yet another SS while u still have so many FF on ur sleeves but continue soon :-)

thanks dear..😊yep..i have lots in my kitty already!! 😆

Originally posted by: .rumki.
amazing ss thanks rumki..😳
continue soon yep!will update today! 😊

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: vmpy
A v v v nice nd wonderful prologue.a great start.continue soon.do pm me. 😃

thanks for liking dear...😳yes will pm u..will update soon..😊

Originally posted by: spn-abhay
Interesting prologue indu.it was awesum.feeling bad 4 pia.abhay left her on marraige nyt.wud realy love to read the ss.plz pm me wen u update.

thanks a lot dear..😳will surely pm you..thanks for reading dear..😊

Originally posted by: SheDevil
LOL Indu nice start

thanks shrish..😊i thought you have stopped reading my works...a/w happy to see you back!! 😊

Originally posted by: sofia2
this is a great story. pls pm me when u will update. waiting for next part.

thanks sofia..will pm you..😊

Originally posted by: DonIsback
nice story line. do pm me.. i love to read this.

thanks dear...will surely pm you..😊

Originally posted by: SHARVANI
😊 wow it was intriguing but felt bad for pia yaar she always suffers a lot due to abhay anyways continue soon pls pls pm me

thanks for commenting sharvani...😳well if i am not wrong i think this is the first time u'r commenting in any of my works! so welcome!! 😊will update soon n ya..will pm u for sure!! 😊

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
Fab update... God mmissing abhiya somuch

thanks dear..me too..!!

Originally posted by: ilove99
another😲😆hope u update soon...

😆yes another!!! will update now!! 😛

Originally posted by: ---Priya---
indu 🤗 loved the concept... thanks pri... 🤗 was that abhiya in the prologue? yes!! 😊
and yes yes yes!!!! i want pm 😳 ofcourse i will pm u!!! 😊

Originally posted by: hema_rawat
nice prologue ... thanks hema..😳
continue soon nd plz pm me ...😊 will update now!! yes i will..😊

Originally posted by: --sonali--
aww...indu...m sorry hn...i cant online much na...jst busy with wrk na...sory fr late. aww...its ok dear.i understand..so no worries...😊

coming to ur work..it always make me speechless like tanzies wrk...u alwys give us master peice of ur writing. aww...thank you soo much...sonali...😳i cant tell you how much it means to me...am really happy that you'r loving my work so much...😊

nice story deep in meaning with lots of mistry in it loved it. thanks again dear...
wht happened bth abhiya n on d Wedding ni8..umm y abhay leaving lots of stored fr us na.. you will know everything soon...
.looking frwrd.plz cont.n update jaldi diya kro vl cm more online to read a lott..aajkal update nhi dikte na to main online nhi aati. hmm..i try to give updates more frequently dear,but wat to do..i have my studies also na...so sumtimes i fail...but i will still try to...😊
thank u fr keeping write on abhiya.love u indu..muze baki update bhI JALDI CHAHIYE...thank u.love u.

u'r welcome dear...😊 and i love to write on them..😳. n once again thanks for such a long n lovely comment...love you too...🤗

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

QUOTE=tanvipareek]please continue thanks for commenting tanvi..will update now! 😊

Originally posted by: shria
awsome concept do pm me😛 thanks shria...will pm u..😊

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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

LOVELY DOVELY UPDATE INDU! 👏WODER WHAT WENT WRONG BTW ABHIYA?🤔UPDATE SOON.😉

Edited by flora212 - 12 years ago

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

U r honestly the world's biggest idiot ever 😡 Wats with u huh? U write so amazingly but u call it crap 😡

Ur writings have a poetic touch to it which makes it unique in itself 👏 It reminds of an era long lost 😳 Loved the way u portrayed it so beautifully - be it Abhay's workaholic life where he sees nothing beyond it. Its obvious that a youth his age who is focused to achieve something in life will have time for nothing else. Then the moment where he meets his soulmate changes everything for him 😳 Thats a phase of life too n u might be a person who is totally immersed in work n books but still u cannot evade from it for long 😊 Pia, a sweet innocent small time gal who got shy on finding herself in the arms of a stranger - this part was portrayed very well 👏 She is a simple girl who tries to seek happiness in watever lil life has to offer her 😳 She knows nothing of the materialistic world she is abt to become a part of n I so hope it doesn kill her innocence I know Abhay loves her but how will he cope up with the gap in their upbringing n lifestyle? 😕 He seems to be head over heels in love with her n I hope he helps her adjust 😊 Brilliant update Indu 👏 n next time u start off ur crap again I swear I shall break ur head 😡

Edited by mandy1024 - 12 years ago