NewAbhiya SS-A beautiful heart.Chp-1 Sept-22

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

This is brilliant please aitake taratari continue kor please

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Monami Tasnim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Beautiful update.Abhay seems so eager to marry Pia...then what happened that he left her on their wedding night?

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Beautifully written dear ...thanks for pm

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Ekta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Dats a fab update dear.lovd it.abhay already fallen for her.n now going 4 a maraige proposal.wow.continue soon n thanx 4 p.m

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pia surve

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

nice start. thax fr pm. continue soon.

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Ankita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

nice update Indu so abhiya met in Abhay's cousin's marriage n it seems he fell in love with her so what was with prologue ?

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Shria

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

i loved it too much😳 pehli baar mein hi abhay ko pyaar ho gaya continu soon...

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

i loved loved loved the first chappy.😃...it was wow.⭐️...i know u won't believe me😆...but still i'll say...i LOVED it...u wrote so beautifully...👏

one of my fav parts was that song u know...and those words he said in between each line..it was sooo perfecttt!!!😲 and a fresh idea!!!great!!⭐️

their first meeting-...abhay's love at first sight...piya's shyness. everything was so endearing...😊

sooo...abhay and his mom r going to piya's place with a marriage proposal huh??? abhay really eager to marry😆...but oh dear...after the prologue i wonder...did he just fall in love with her looks...piya is such a sweet girl...it will be so cruel of abhay to do what he did😭...after all it's him with the proposal and not piya...

eagerly waiting for the next chappy...update as soon as u can😊

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

awesome startin indu...🤗"pelhli nazar ka pyaar"😳 hw romantic❤️... our studious , handsum, workaholic abhay raichand is in luv wid an ordinary grl 😆bt i m jst wondering wht went wrong after dat? updt soon plz😃

Edited by luckdiya - 13 years ago