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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

shreya this is just...WOW!!! u hav written it very well👏

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Divya6696

@Divya6696

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

awww shreyoo.. you did it baby.. and you did it convincingly well..!!
you described Abhay's state of mind very well..!!!

and.. the last line cracked me up..!! lol.. abhay ho ke you cannot write his feelings.. lol..

no but seriously baby.. i loved it..!! 🤗 🤗

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Divya6696

@Divya6696

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

lol Harry.. shreya will faint..!!

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Just amazing shreya, only one word 'beautiful'.
U wrote it and described abhay's feelings very well. Loved it dear...

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

dis is b'ful... I ws in abhiya dreamland..
bt suddenly i realised its all over long bck 😔
u r a superb writer tomato...luv u *HUG*
thk u sooo much 4 d wonderful piece of writing

Edited by luckdiya - 13 years ago

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Divya6696

@Divya6696

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: luckdiya
dis is b'ful... I ws in abhiya dreamland..
bt suddenly i realised its all over long bck 😔

Awwwh Dear...🤗 🤗 I know right..? Awww...

Ye lo..

For you.. and for Shreyoo Baby for such a beautiful post..

Edited by Divya6696 - 13 years ago

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kirti

@Andromeda001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

LOVVEELYYY POST!
Beautifully written!
Our selfless,selfsacrificial lover ABHAY! 😍
these lines i dedicate frm Abhay 2 piya:"tere hi liye tujhse hun juda" frm jannat2.

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

@DS: thks 4 d JADDU KI JHAPPI 😃 luv u
& pic awww... R u tryin 2 kill me 😆

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

beautifully written shreya👏 loved it😉

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ilove99

@ilove99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Wrote very well shreya,with right choice of words for the situations!First one before leap simply showed the hindrance in their love'' cannot be without her, and I cannot be with her.''

And the second...the chaos to let her froo to other man,in arms of someone else when he knows in her heart its him and only him,and no one else can be there except HIM.

''She's so different, and yet so much the same. She can still sense when I am hiding something from her, and her reactions are pretty much the same.''

You must write more shreya when you get time coz it turned out to be really beautiful,seems like abhay is still trying to hide and pia to break the barriers...

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