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Posted: 13 years ago
PREVIEW😛




CHAPTER 2

Abhay get shock to see piya,s reaction n said=what happen'any problem..

Piya=no..no..nothing'.

Abhay=so come downstair..n order ur breakfast'

Piya nodded her head in yes

Abhay left room n said her to come downstair.

Piya open her cupboard n decide to wear a saree because now she is married..n her first day..

Piya,s dress

Piya stand near the mirror n remember the day when jay gifted her a beautiful saree n she said=jay but yeh toh bohat expensive hogi..

Jay=tum say zyada nahi'

Piya=its very beautiful'

Jay=thanks'

Tears rolled from piya eyes n she said=vo saree toh shayed meri kismet mai hi nhi thi..

N then she remember that her mother gave jay,s gifted saree to a poor servent'

Piya starts cying'n said=I will miss u'.

Suddenly piya saw that abhay coming.she wipe her tears..

Abhay impressed by her angels beauty..

Piya raised her eyesbrow n gave him a look what happen anything wrong'she become more nervous to see silent abhay standing at same position till 2 mins..

Abhay=u r looking beautiful'.

Abhay take his step toward piya n piya take her step back.piya.s heartbeat skipped a beat'.

Abhay want to hug her,kiss her, n want to said that he love her so much..

But when he remember that piya said that she want sometime,she is not ready..

He stops in mid way n said=ur breakfast is ready'

The whole day is passed like few mins'abhay sensed piya sadness,n he must thought that she is missing her parents'

At evening.6;30 study room


Piya is busy in reading books,novels n newspapers.but all things was remember her jay n her parents'.

Piya read the novel name n the novel name is DHADKAN..n the tagline is NEVER BREAKS A HEART'

Piya=interesting..

Piya opens the first page n stats reading'

NOVEL=

Once open a time a rich girl loves a poor guy..but they not meant to be each other..because larki ki kismet mai koi aur likha tha..

Piya could not take it any more n close the book n start crying'

Abhay =piya piya..where r u'

Suddenly abhay heard piya voice n he said=she must be crying'

Piya suddenly see that abhay is coming toward her'

Abhay=what happen piya'u must be missing ur parents I know..

Abhay suddenly relieze that piya crying more..

Abhay hug piya tightly n said=just relaxe..i m here na''

Piya left abhay suddenly when she releize that abhay hug her..

Abhay=oh thank GOD'.anyways piya we r going outside..

Piya[head down]=where..i mean now..

Abhay=yea now get ready..some frnds r want to meet u'

Piya nodded her head in yes'


AT NIGHT 8;00 PM hotel


Piya wears a beautiful saree.abhay wears a black n white like a perfect husband

Abhay introduce his frnds aleena,Shankar,tracker,t n etc etc

Abhay=she is aleena.my clg frnd

Aleena=hi bhaabi..

Piya[smile]=hi..nice to meet u..

T[playfull manner]=hey..i thought abhay hum say milta kyu nhi hai ab pata chala kay us kay paas itni beautiful wife hai'

Abhay[angry look]=stop it T..

T=Ok tum toh gussa hi hogaya..

Piya=oh hi T..I mean ur name is only T'

Everyone burst out laughing..

T=no piya bhabhi my name is tanushri'

Piya=very nice name..

Abhay introduce kabir,angad n tracker'

They sat on one long table'abhiya sat together,like kabir n alina,tracker n angad n T..

T=ok bhahi aap bataye app ko hamara frnd abhay kaisa laga..

Piya=really nice..

Alina[teasing manner]=bas aur kuch nhi'..

Abhay[change the topic]=oh so what is ur planning of marriage with kabir..

Alina=oh next month..

Abhay=oh that,s great.congrates to both

Alina n kabir=thanks..its not fair aap nay humain apni shaadi mai invite nhi kiya..

Piya=no,its not like that'.

Tracker=oh guys lets play truth n dare..

T spins the bottle..n the bottle points is toward alina'

Alina=truth..

T=oh so alina'u have to said a habit of kabir..

K=alina plzz'kahi koi aur hi mat batana'

Alina=u know kabir ki sab say bari habit yeh hai kay vo

K=no..aleena..i swear mai tum say baat nhi karu ga'

Alina=one day kabir was singing a song in the washroom.

Piya smiles at the cute couple..

T=ok ok..tum ppl mai larai hojaye is liye hum tum dono ko maaf kartay hai..

T spins the bottle again n now the turn of piya'

T=so piya bhabi u have to kiss abhay..

Piya=dare'

Piya=me no..no'

Kabir=com;on bhabhi'kiss abhay na..

Abhay =stop it guys'yeh kya bachpana hai..

Kabir=dekha apni baar..

Tracker=com,on bhabhi'

Piya=but me how..i mean..

Angad=its not fair bhabhi..

Everyone shouts n chears piya was in no mood to kiss abhay but its her force..

Abhay heart was enjoying link a small child like someone is giving her a chocolate..

Piya=close ur eyes..

Abhay close his eyes n waiting 4 his first kiss'

Piya slowly slowly move her face towards abhay cheek n atleast she kiss abhay..abhay desires burn with passionate'but he control himself n response quickly'piya now this time too shy but she is in no mood n neither she is unhappy n sad..because she try to forget her past but how..

Alina=how romantic..

Angad n ruhi=they r perfect 4 each other..

Abhay,s heart was jumping like a child after hearing such a lovely comments..

Kabir kneel down n show his hand to alina n said=would u like to dance with me miss alina would be wife..

Alina smiles n said=sure..

The couple start dance with the slow music n vice versa angad n tracker also went to dance floor'.now only T n abhiya r left'

T=hey tum dono nhi jaogay'

Piya nodded her head in no'

T=com;on bhabhi its ur first dance..

Piya=sorry but I m not in mood'

Abhay=T stop it na,piya in no mood so why r u forcing her..

T[smiles]=so abhay would u like to dance with me..bhabhi aap ko bura toh nhi lagay ga..

Piya=no..mujay kyu'

Abhay=but I m in no mood'

They all start laughing..

T=u both r unbelievable'

T went near alina,kabir,angad,ruhi n said=they both don,t enjoy the party..

Alina=plane..

Tracker=what..

Kabir n angad=ab mazaa aayega..

Scene change to abhiya

Abhiya both r silent'

Abhay broke the silent n said=u don,t like dance'

Piya=no'but not now..

Abhay[face fell]=oh'

Piya remember her n jay slow dance n then she remember that she married with abhay..

Abhay=piya so what ur hobby..

Piya look there n abhay shock with piya,s reaction that she does not want to talk with him'

Abhay=u want something..

Piya=yea drink..i mean simple juice..

Abhay=oh stay here I m coming with a juice 4 u..

At drinks stall

Abhay to waiter=hey..give me a drink juice..

Girl=a drink'plzz

Tracker shout abhay name'

Abhay=what happen ruhi..

Tracker=voh yeh juice mujay dedo..

Abhay[smiles] n gave it to tracker..

Tracker change the juice with a drink..

Abhay about to left when tracker said=abhay yeh tum hi lelo bhabhi wait kar rahi hogi..

Abhay=oh thanks ruhi..

When abhay left all frnds said=plan success'

abhay=piya yeh lo..ur juice..

Piya=thanks..

Piya slowly slowly drink n said=thanks..

After 5 mins piya see tha ahay is jeh n her mind is out of work

Someone call abhay n abhay said me coming..

Piya=I love u jeh I love u'.like a child..

Abhay come n hear the she said=I love u'.u r my life..

Abhay heart was jumping like a small child n he does not know that aits meaning is wrong'

Abhay=I love u too piya'u know I want to hear these magical words from ur mouth'thanks'.u know I m not happ then happy..

Piya=I love u'

Piya felk like abhay is jeh n she said=would u dance with me..my love..

Abhay[teary eyes]=yea sure..why not..

ABHAY kiss her forehead n then her cheeks...

Piya is totally anware from this situation..



I m busy n I m not a good writer in steps so,hear is abhiya dance video..they dance like that..on the song kuch khaas hai..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n06sQl1ovyg[/YOUTUBE]

Precap=''tum bhi mujhay pyaar karlo''

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sorry 4 mistakes...😛plzz hit button or give ur lovely lovely long comments😳😉 because its means a lot to me...i m not a good writer as u all know😊😆

Edited by Aish-Naksh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first me first
wow fati sooo nice part well done its amazing...👏
keep writing laadoo...😃
w8ing 4 next upd😍
thanx 4 the pm...😳
Edited by __Aleena__ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was indeed awsm dear 😊 loved the truth & dare & Piya's pike talli hone wala part 😆 . But didn Abhay hear that Piya took Jeh's name 😕 ??? Anyways lovely update 😛 nxt one update soon 😛
Edited by Saayaniz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
We didn't it but LOVED it dear...thanks for the pm...but I have one confusion...didn't Abhay hear that she said i love u JEH...how didn't he notice that...but anyways that update was awesome...thanks for the pm...
Edited by smdosi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowww AWESOME UPDATE:-):-) ABHAY LOVES PIA:-) BUT PIA LOVES JEY:-(.. But soon she will love only Abhay:-) Abhay is so caring and Sweet:-):-) loved this ff:-):-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update 😉 loved the truth & dare part😳 i hope piya forgets jey really very very very soon 😆 😆
abhay is so sweet he loves piya so much 😳 continu soon & thnx for the pm...
Edited by shria - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely chapter Fatima..!
abhay's friends are so cute and naughty..!
nashe mei hi sahi.. piya said "i love u" to abhay.. awww..
please make piya forget jeh and love abhay soon..!

loved the chapter..! update soon.. thanks for pm.. :) :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Woaaa amazing dear, truly loved it. Abhiya are so cute na, loving them. Loved all the frnds convo. So here alina and kabir jodi so sweet. Preview was hot and the saree was b'ful. Last part was most amazing. U made me remember drunk piya. Awww she said I love u to abhay thinking him jay, poor abhay he is in dreamland now unknown to all his dreams will be shattered soon. I feel bad for piya and she truly loved jay par destiny decided something else for her. Hope piya falls for abhay soon. Waiting for next part and u are a good writer dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Everything is perfect but piya love jey Oh no that's not g8 but this chapter is more good than previous keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update 😃
hope piya moves in her life soon 😉

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