Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26) - Page 38

wow,superb update.soo.. happy for abhiya wedding.abhay-pia again proved true love doesn't show-off.

tanzie lovely update
yupieee finally abhiya married
aww loved abhiya moments and piya mood swings
so now chand face off to madhu and arnab wow
will wait for next part

An update blending several POV's...
Beautifully written Tanz...
Chand is concerned, which I can't decide whether good or bad...

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

I am first after sooo long!!!

Anyways, onto the chapter :
It was really, really beautiful.
Dunno why but I wished Julia could meet Abhay and Piya again. I don't know her so well- you introduced her only this chapter- and I guess she's not important- but somehow, she really affected me. I felt so bad for her and thankful too that she didnt tell them about AbhIya.

The wedding was beautifully described- it's rare I've read such lovely descriptions, vows, et al.
Abhay feeling guilty and everything...

And precap's got me worried again, typical Tanzie!!!

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

👏 👏 the update was brilliant. from Julia's POV which made me emotional, to Chand's POV which indicates he is finally concerned for his daughter. Pia's pain about leaving her life behind, yet embracing her future with Abhay was very well written.

the wedding vows were very good, romantic and emotional.

all in all a very good update

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

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what is it yar...in your ffs y the hell do I always land third😡😭😭

anyways the update was fabulous👏 and I loved it❤️ so don't u dare say a word against the update...

oh wow wow wow abhiya are married

Ah I am so glad that that train lady helped abhiya😃

are wah...chand is now gonna make arnab and madhu's life hell!!!! 😆😆 waiting to see what he will be doing...

oh god!😲again there is a question in the precap😲😭hope everything goes fine😳

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

Gosh Tanzie, this was such a fab update Infact would have made the perfect Valentine update Most romantic update of this FF ever You made it come alive with your words n your writing is always magical in itself I loved Pia's dress. It was apt given her condition Thanks so much dear. Yes I searched for pregnant bride's gowns. And I thought this will look really good.

Coming to the update, I loved the small peek u gave into Julia's life Julia is an insignificant character but still her POV really showed what a beautiful bond Abhiya share She found it endearing to see the care Abhay showered on a pregnant Pia, something she had never felt in her life. What was worse, her husband had abandoned her when she needed him the most U do come across such nasty people in life Abhay was careful to make sure he did not disturb Pia's sleep Pia is indeed lucky to have him in her life It was sweet of her to ask him to take something for Pia as well. I am so glad she didn give them away. BTW who were they? Chand's men or the detectives Madhu had hired? Every character is somehow significant if you can use them to deliver a important message and so is Julia here. She is a everyday character but brave woman of courage. Madhus men. I wrote the men description similar to peps who visited Pia's house.

So now Chand realised he is a father? How better is he from Madhu? He thinks Madhu didn give her love to Pia bcoz she was his daughter but atleast she along with Arnab atleast gave her a decent upbringing. Its a different story that Pia never got a father's care but atleast Arnab gave her a name. What the hell is he doing? He knows Abhay in n out. He knows he can goto any length to keep Pia happy n safe. He also knows Abhay as a person. Abhay even transferred his money to him. What more does he want? He has gone through the pain of losing his love n somewhere he must know that deep down even Madhu wasn happy in her life. Does he want the same for his daughter as well? He thinks Abhay is a curse in Pia's life? What is he then? I am kinda scared for Arnab n Madhu I dont deny I hate Arnab but I can understand his feelings as well I don't think he still has realized anything. But yes when he will talk to Madhu he will a bit. It's a strange he felt because that girl is made of his blood and flesh, a part and that much he realized. Abhay is his older version and he will never allow him to be a part of his life again knowing in this life past haunts and never stops following.

Pia can never truly hate her mother. She maybe a bad mother but she's still a mother Atleast after having met Chand she must have realised y her mother took that decision. Cowardly it was, but still she did try to make sure that Pia got the share of a mother's love though Arnab bestowed her with his hatred The thought of never having to see her mother must have shattered Pia but now that she has moved on, there's no turning back Its not easy to give up your world which you haave known for many years n start afresh. Living like a nomad is nothing new for Abhay but it sure is for Pia But still she'd goto any lengths for Abhay Love could really make a person do strange things n turn their world upside down. Pia is disappointed with her mother but she doesn't hate her offcourse. And in such condition every woman seeks her mother but sadly pia has to be give her up for greater things.

But Abhay's past will always loom over their beautiful paradise n Pia can never be rid of the insecurity that eats her insides It was so cute to see Pia fuss over her wedding dress Of course the super model in her will always be a part of her wherever she goes n ion whatever condition she is in n Abhay has to deal with it as it comes with the package I hope Pia n Abhay get to live a ripe old happy age like the couple they saw

Pia was bound to feel a tad bit disappointed in the beginning bcoz being a model she must have envisioned her wedding to be a grand affair but here she was at the altar with nobody for an audience n she was all alone without her loved ones But when she had one look at the man waiting for her at the altar nothing else mattered to her I just loved the way Abhay tried to make it special for her I can imagine him wearing a tux n arriving in a Rolls Royce not just a model but every girl has their own dream regarding their husband and wedding, with everyone's blessings and Pia is used to with limelight and if nothing happens relating to what you thought it would be, it will hurt anyone.

I am so glad Abhay wants to let go of his past n start a new life with Pia He wants to leave everything, his dark world n the fears that come along with it for her Its sad Abhay cant give her the family heirloom n I hope one day he can though

About the vows, I am speechless It was breathtakingly beautiful, serene n poignant I wish I could say anything but I am sure I will never be able to summarise it anyway. I dont want to taint it with my mediocre words FANTASTIC but yes, pia knows abhay is worth everything leaving for. The kind of man you never get. Thanks so much. Dishu helped me a lot with vows and rest I made my own. Just tried to put their depth of relationship through words and im afraid I cant put it in words like I can feel. 😳

Thanks so much. Dishu helped me a lot with vows and rest I made my own. Just tried to put their depth of relationship through words and im afraid I cant put it in words like I can feel. 😳

I doubt that 😛 Ur words add a special touch to the update n I can say it when u write u put ur heart n soul into it. Not everyone is good at expressing their emotions but u r gifted in that department ⭐️

Originally posted by: -Chinky-

Hey ya !! 🤗
Look who is back 😎 😆

Awesome blossom update..
I loved it how abhay cares for piya. Its too cute..
being pregnant its very difficult for piya to stay in that suffocated house.
But all thanks to abhay and his love :)
Their bonding is so pure man <3
Cant wait for the next update...:D
Love ya..*hugs*