Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26)

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#321

omg amazing update.. your story speed to amazing.. i am loving this.. telling you truth you made me fail for them again.. i was failing all over in love with abhiya again and again tanzie..

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Lovely...too good...thanks for the pm..

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

That was a really nice update Tanzie. I like the haircut part where Abhay asked her if she knew what she was doing... Anyways... Abhay is right to not trust anyone besides Piya.
Next chapter is marriage then right?

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#324

awsomeee ,superb👏I'm also whn some footstep come,,,thank god they rn't find her & they save😊Abhiya marriage nxt part...can't wait dear🥳...3 weeks...uff dear...its kill me😆

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

superb update tanzie👏👏

so they were madhu's detective *phew* thank god...!!

glad to know that soon they will be leaving america...hope chand na dhund paye unhe...!

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#326

wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm

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Seema

@...Seema...

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

tanzie tanzie tanzie wat should i say about dis update.u always make me short of words by ur magical writings.it was superb and i felt goose bumps while reading piya pov when she heard footsteps of those detectives.i was hell scared at dat time as im da sufferer.hats off to u.and yeah im aqib.

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zara

@meerubzara

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#328

lovely update
every fear & emotion is beautifully described
thanks for pm

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Such an amazing update.Abhiya's feelings and emotions were beautifully described.Pia being preggo...it is hard for her to stay in such conditions but Abhay's love is her biggest strength.No comments on Madhu...i hate that spineless woman.Misha is a true friend for sure.Eager for next chappy...Abhiya wedding