Originally posted by: lost_in_love
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the update was grand and your way of writing just broke all the limits...ur updats never cease to amaze me!!! nw I really have no idea how grand and epic it can b in future..trust me...i mean 20yrs down the line,i dnt think ur writing will stop to amaze ur readers! its profound,splendid n always grand!! ⭐️ nt a single word that I said is false..i honestly mean it!!! Thanks so much.. what else I can say 😆 If i remain alive till 20 years I wil surely try to become a author by that time..InshAllah 😳
Ok now to the updat- every character here shined!! no matter hw small part it occupied it made its mark!! every turn of events is more important nw as the story is getting closer to its end and so in the last minute the emphasize on characters..their decision..their move..their thought process everything needs extra care..to give a lasting impression that will stay with us forever..and your way of explaining each character so carefully only ensured it.. nw am sure they are engraved in our mind forever!! n thats what's special about your writing!! bravo!! 👏 I try to focus on all the character time to time or atleast give importance to all the characters and not centered by the main leads only. Thanks to Julie Plec and JK Rowling. I learnt it from vampire diaries and HP that how you can give importance to all the characters even by a small incident 😊
the first part- Eric,a character nt so important yet made its mark even in the small space tht was allotted to him! his pov was apt for a man working in t he underworld for his master. true, emotions,feelings are uninvited here,its the place of blood n bullet,or better say its the heaven of inhumanity..which only reflected through eric's pov! wonderful!! 👏 His character is small till NOW 😉
Now chand- hm.. sometime you know it surprises me to think that chand is one inhuman,cold, brutal master of underworld,the reason he is far from being hollow or a person who has no understanding of emotions and feelings, is that he surely does have a better understanding and we saw that in his thoughts where he knew xctly what made him mad and also, that to abhay more important was pia,yet it didnot change his decision nor the way he is because thats sumthng which isnt possible after so many years or maybe it could have if..only if he had gotten the support of madhu..then mayb..it might had happened but thats a distant dream nw,so its nt much surprising on chands part but still as readers we have got so attached that on a certain level we do expect chand to show humanity atleast once though remembering his story I dnt think its possible bt still I hope..him to do sumthng that wud really amaze us n make us happy! again a brilliant part!! 👏 Truly said.. he has the understanding of reality and the underworld what people are around him. and he cant exactly trust Abhay to be rectified completely because he is judging him with himself and whatever inhuman he is. afterall Pia is his blood and he cannot deny the fact. his humanity and the reality check of the cruel ruthless worl is going to trouble him a lot now.
now madhu- you know tanzie, three characters specially in this update, I found were indomitable in terms of nerve..just like steel from outside and in a deeper level emotional,vulnerable from inside, that could go to any length if he or she so wishes... and that makes each of them incredible n memorable.! n the credit goes to you!! 👏 about madhu..um..lets say we dnt know her,i mean we dnt knw her as pia's mom ,and keeping aside the feelings for pia..i would say her pov neither made me love or respect her nor it forced me to hate her..because in certain ways she is right in her place n in certain places she isnt! true that she got the support of her husband arnab,who never really cared for pia or showered any love on her which I feel is no lesser than pia's track record infct its more low compared to it! and am nt saying ths becoz I adore pia i'm saying just becoz I felt it wasnt right on arnab's part to do so coz in all dis pia was innocent and I dnt see how a man who doesnt accept madhu's daughter n rather humiliates r nw n then can be a true man! so according to me madhu's pov is flawed! later though she decided to give a last try of being a gud mother bt still her thoughts which shows she knws, undrstnds everythng yet at the end that cud nt change her just like chand, leaves no place to appreciate her,becoz as a character there's hardly any upliftment we saw.. ! rather we saw a women who may have lead a more controlled lyf than pia bt is at fault in many ways! and yes a big round of applause for pulling the mental conflict n inner termoil of characters so well!! 👏 Thanks so much for the wonderful comment... well Im very deep as a person so when I dig a character dig deep to understand the reasons behind their actions and try not to judge them, try to put myself in their shoes. I know whatever Arnab did wasnt right on his part and he would be little soft and nice to Pia she would be different today but not everyone is great enough to accept the illegitimate child of their wife is it ? infact 80% in real world wont. Madhu is faulty for sure and selfish too but still she is somehow right on her part looking out for herself. what she did wrong was she played her one role too good only to get the other ignored - being a mother. and she saw Pia as her mistake and memories of Chand coming back which she didnt want to remember so yes, it destroyed her daughters life and now Madhu is guilty of that.
pia- now here I dnt need to say much as we all knw already what really she is! her character here always portrays the toughness,sincerity,crazyness,recklessness. no nt becoz she is 1of my fav8 here bt becoz whatevr she might have been before in her early days has nothng to do wth today. though she was never really a bad persn at heart bt what I mean is after abhay came in her life she has changed n she has changd for gud!! 😊 her love her faith,madness for abhay only grows wth each passing day n we love her for that..n we always will! 😊 and thanks to u for coming up wth such a remarkable character,remarkable coz I think its easy to portray a character that is thoroughly gud bt hard to portray a character that slowly travels to light wth adamant difficulties n yet manages to garner the love n support of readers thats nt an easy task! bt you made this look so easy!!! wonderful!! 👏 I have said in the beginning this is a true dark love story and no character is saint here including Abhay. portraying human emotions, flaws of them is so much difficult than writing supernatural stuff 😕 I always pay attention to character development. if they dont change from the beginning to end, whats the poin of them in the story? I love how I portrayed both Abhay n Pia in this FF 😳 a very flawed but passionate woman with courage and fearless... 😳
Abhay- ah..what should I say about him? he is just amazing!! lets forget he is the abhay whm we knw frm d show yet still we cannot help bt admire him! true he is nt flawless here bt what makes him n pia diffrnt frm chand n madhu is their improvement as humans. just like pia abhay has changd infact his change is more important considering his past though there was humanity buried sumwhere deep inside hm whch we saw many times frm saving pia to james n later when pia mentiond a grl in china town whom abhay had savd once that itself shows tht he wasnt what he was.. bt yes pia's appearance in his lyf brought back the old abhay that was lost sumwhere and this what makes these two characters truly memorable n fantastic!!! and again ur wonderful piece of writing made ths possible!! ⭐️ bravo!! 👏 You know this must be the fv Abhay from all I have written about him. you cannot help but love him, feel his pain knowing what he is. and thanks so much for the wonderful compliments.. it means so much to me 😳
and ya I loved that part where abhay proposed pia,it was written so beautifully! abhay the killing machine was blushing and pia saying, was tht a way to propose, to whch abhay had showd hs inability to propose diffrntly n pia undrstndng at nce n to lighten the moment the thing she said next was even more sweeter that, cn she sit on hs lap even wen they grow old., n abhay smild n instantly nodded. beautiful!! 😊
oh..wait there's mre I shud mention before I end my essay(coz am sure it is), that is the part where we see abhay's guilt for nt being there for pia n their child. I luvd dis part coz of two reasons, one is for pia getting hm out frm hs insecurities and helping hm regain faith n hmslf as a human who has nt lost hs humanity nd was nthng like hs father. and secondly I luvd it becoz the way u describd everythng...ur painting of abhay's insecurities,hs pain,hs fear n later pia xplaining why he shudnt think abt all these..hw he isnt anythng n nthng lyk hs father..the depth..the conflict..the emotions,everythng that it showd was wonderful. ⭐️ truly a pleasure to read!! thanku tanzie. 😊 I must admit I had a wonderful time reading it. 😳 nw awaiting the next part..i knw u'r getting less time so updat when u can.. 😊 He is so different from everyone. he didnt have friends discussing how they proposed their girl friends neither he had any family where he witnessed it. he never went to a family weddding, never talked to someone heart to heart. he hardly watched movies and never thought one day he will have a wife, a child like other people has . then how would he propose Pia grandly so it had to be very simply. a big contrast from Pias world where verything was grand till now.
p.s. you knw usually it takes one and a half hour for me to comment in ur updats bt today it took two and a half hours!! unbelievable indeed!! 😆 anyways sorry for writing an essay and once again magnificient updat, loved reading it. 🤗
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