WHEN DREAM BECOMES NIGHTMARE Chapter 5 pg 49

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Divya6696

@Divya6696

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

wow sayu..! another lovely update..!
piya getting drowned in abhay's thoughts hun..? aww..
and abhay will protect piya from chandeena na.. so sweet..
please usse kuch ulta-seedha matt karwana to stop piya..!

dear.. update whenever you can..! no hurry at all.. and yes.. studies come first..!!

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Finally Abhiya met! Yipeee...gr8 yaar...thnks 4d pm... :)

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Ekta

@HaymurS

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

awesum update dear😊i liked it😊 wow pia-misha n ayush scene was 😆 wow abhiya meet😃 continue soon tahnx 4 pm

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

lovely update sayu...😊wait 4 nxt update😊

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

hey sayu thax fr pm!😊!
nw bout update its gud!! i luv misha's prank!! 😉 abhay still hdn't frgt his humunity... hw sweet!! so vo khud pia se frndship krne aaya he wow!! eagarly waiting fr next update!! 😛

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

wow very nicely written. like the intro a lot

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Wow awesome update yaar, seriously from beggining till end just loved it dear. Amazing description and intro of Raichands. Loved misha's prank wala scene, lol. Piya looking in the mirror scene, was so cute, I can imagine that scene so sweet. wow loved the convo's and now abhiya met fully it's gonna bhi interesting now. I am waiting to know what will abhay do now. Plz continue when u can dear, studies come first ok. Gr8 job dear.

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621511

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Dear how are you ,best luck for your study ,you are just awe-some as writer ,please continue it whenver you will time ,about the story what a cute introduction you given the raichand family mind bowling ,just awe-some story ,thanks for pm

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#270

hi!!! lagta hai would be mausaji ko dekh kar mausi ka dimag band ho gaya hai and unhone apni would be wife ko khud intrm diya sahi hai wase bhi bechari milne ke kia tadap rai thi... by d way i m sure ye abhay ab apne intro ke bade jarur ye bolega dat "stay away from ur research" dialog m thoda change hai "me" ki jagha "research" hoga...par bate wahi hai... khadus...and d way u describe raichands and their sourrounding its difnt and nice to... wase abhay phele lib se bina bole kyo chala gaya

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