AbhIya FF - Yellow Peonies - Chapter V Page 13 - Page 7

nice part and thanks 4 prolouge but its sad dat danish was killed and being his soulmate panchi is in pain... hope abhay help her...

Awsome update...
Loved ol da 3 updates till nw...!
Da way u write n describe da whole sceniaro is outstanding...
Abhay is one hell of a vampire... Da way he punished n killed maithali... gosh...
Loved da way abhay got up to fyt 4 his pia... N loved soulmate wale connections 22...like telepathy n having pain ven ur other half is in pain... N so on...
It's a very interesting story n probabaly would luv 2 read it further...
Continue soon n plz pm me veneva u update...! :):)

Hey, Rafaella, that was an awesome update. I love how you described the fight, and in the end, how she gives the power to fight back. Wonderfully written, dear. I do like your FF a lot.

Brilliant update

Amazing dear!!!!
U are a fab writer!!!
Loved the whole update.
continue asap.

welcome to pkyk forum.
Intriguing storyline. Loved it.😊 Plz add me to your pm list.

just finished reading all the updates.!! Its absolutely outstanding..👏
your style of writing is amazing dear..⭐️ i am completely bowled!!! 😊
the fight sequence was spectacular...reading the whole thing was like watching a motion picture. Superb..👏
and last bt nt the least, abhay pia moment and abhay gaining strength by pia's call , the last scene beside the lake was just brilliant. ⭐️ It was beautiful in true sense.😳 Loved reading this ff.❤️ Plz continue asap and plz add me to your pm list.😊